West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: jay on July 16, 2002, 10:12:47 AM
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since n.i.k. didn t give me no feedback on this here it is:
http://www.mr-angulus.com/confusion jmj remix.mp3
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yea..I actually IMed you on AIM and u didnt answer me...I like this track, maybe a little better than the original...Heres the deal...Ill put the original on "One Love" compilation and this on the "All Fingers..." compilation...
Oh, and this track is fairly old...maybe about 5 months old...LoL
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i did this version for the one love comp. not for different projects.
the original version was whack compared to this
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Ok...so ill put this one on the "One Love"...
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cool
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yo, shit is DOPE- I love this whining shit it gives this dark typa feeling to the beat,the beat is banging and NIK is real dope on this shit(I Havent heared the original).
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yo the beat is ill
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the beat is tight as fuck...sounds like some az/mobb deep/cormega type shit...the lyricals are nice but not really clear but understandable...definately the best content i've heard from sccit thus far...but the chorus is way below par...and actually the third verse is way outta line and too vulgar for the tone you set with the first two verses...but it's a nice track with a jmj touch which always helps...nice track with certain flaws but good nontheless, peace.
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the beat is tight as fuck...sounds like some az/mobb deep/cormega type shit...the lyricals are nice but not really clear but understandable...definately the best content i've heard from sccit thus far...but the chorus is way below par...and actually the third verse is way outta line and too vulgar for the tone you set with the first two verses...but it's a nice track with a jmj touch which always helps...nice track with certain flaws but good nontheless, peace.
Yea...This isnt the original you know...I just gave Jay the acapella and he remixed it too another beat...The chorus doesnt sound as good as the original...Plus I think my voice was mixed a little loud...But u did a good job Jay...
BTW, this is over 5 months old...
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i'd like to hear the og to compare the two, peace.
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http://www.mr-angulus.com/confusion.mp3
the beat we used on the o.g. version didn t have what i thought a good beat needed to express his feelings.
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well, the beat for the og is nice...but your right it doesn't fit the lyrics well enough...but the sound quality is better for the lyrics and chorus and does them more justice, but the chorus is still below average...that is a nice beat no doubt...good song, peace.
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nik, will u put the lyrics up for this track...thanks.
peace.
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(Verse 1)
I was a born a Jewish Boy from the valley of southern Cali/
I was told too enjoy what was comin at me/
so far my life is nothin happy/
So I tried to jump to rapping/
15 years just past me/
My shitty peers stunk badly/
Im so depressed/
My life got ups and downs like Lopez's breasts/
Im growin a mess/
Like a hoe with no chest/
I write on what i belive in/
Every night every evenin'/
Than i fight for acheivment/
I might be just decent/
But at least I give effort/
I preach more than ever/
and teach 'em the better/
Increasin the clever/
I cease the good weather/
I'm peacefull like deserts/
Im blessed with the talent/
But my stress is unbalanced/
I guess Im arousin/
Cuz my life is a drama/
It bites like paranas/
Havin fights with my mama/
Never right always wrong/
Makin a fist/
Im takin a shit/
Im thanfull for this/
Have Patience my bitch/
Your placed on my list/
Of people to kill/
To get equal for real/
This needle I drill/
I feast on this pill/
It increases my skills/
My sites are illusions/
My life is Confusion/
(chorus)
Confusion...Depresion...Im lossin...My Miiiiiind
Confusion...Depresion...Im lossin...My Miiiiiind
(verse 2)
My mother never showin in love or affection/
Im stuck in depression/
I trust in my present/
Learnin nothin but lessons/
There must be a heavin/
Am I chosin wrong?/
I just try too move on/
Am i crying too long?/
Can I die throug this song?/
I dont wanna be bad/
But my lifes truely sad/
From left too right booby traps/
I cant show through this rap/
Always gettin back stabbed/
and I cant get passed that/
Tested like lab rats/
From present too Back track/
I was messed up and laughed at/
Cant get a breath through this gas mask/
Future set on my bad past/
The cup is half empty and I cant have that...
(chorus)
Confusion...Depresion...Im loosin...My Miiiiind
Confusion (Confusion!) Depresion (Depresion!) Im loosin (Im loosin!) My Miiiiind
(verse 3)
The girl I love, she dont even know i exist/
From the world above, Im too nervouse too even blow her a kiss/
Tried too glow up my rist/
and show off my shit/
She still dont know I exist/
Shit, lifes mo' than a bitch/
How can I show her my true thoughts?/
Shes too hot/
I even tried too act a thug like my name was 2Pac/
All I got is a bottle of lotion and a huge cock/
I can pick another fish from the ocean, but I chose not/
Shit, I love her too death/
Just wanna fuck her in bed/
and Im a sucker for head/
But sex is not all, I really wanna get too know her/
God let me show her/
I can get her wet while sober/
She erects my boner/
I cant even pass by her, I get heavy butterflies/
If I even tried too talk, id start too stutter and cry/
Too my friends Im utterin lies/
How shes nothin but thighs/
But that aint true, cuz shes so fuckin fine/
She has too many qualities too discuss in this rhyme/
Beutiful a muthafuckin work of nature/
I DONT KNOW WHY IT NEVER OCCURED TOO RAPE HER!!!/
(chorus)
Confusion...Depresion...Im loosin...My Miiiiind
Confusion (Confusion!) Depresion (Depresion!) Im loosin (Im loosin!) My Miiiiind
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Yea tha OG of this waz some sicc shit....
I'll download tha Remix when I get home from Summa Skool....
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bump
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personally i like the original better...the vocals are much clearer and easier to understand...the beat is more simple but not better or worse than the remix...i still feel the third verse is a little much when you say shit like:
"Shit, I love her too death/
Just wanna fuck her in bed/
and Im a sucker for head/
But sex is not all, I really wanna get too know her/
God let me show her/
I can get her wet while sober/
She erects my boner/"
you make a serious song for the most part and then i feel it's thrown away when some immature comments are made in the wrong place...that's just my opinion though...
also, in the remix the second chorus sounds shitty, peace.
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ay well, the first one is better as far as like how the words match the beat, especially the chorus ! but the remix has the bomb ass beat. Ay sccit man, in full honestly, your a better singer than a rapper i think. I've never heard you try to do a chorus like that, but like that sounded pretty damn talented, especially the part where you go MY MIIIIIND! and then the second time the chorus comes around when your layering your voice to echo the lyrics, that was really tyte. As far as the rappin', I've heard better from you. I thinkt he best I've heard you rappin' was on the Middle Eastern track and on the Jsteez Diss
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+ link=board=thalab;num=1026850367;start=0#17 date=07/25/02 at 16:19:33]ay well, the first one is better as far as like how the words match the beat, especially the chorus ! but the remix has the bomb ass beat. Ay sccit man, in full honestly, your a better singer than a rapper i think. I've never heard you try to do a chorus like that, but like that sounded pretty damn talented, especially the part where you go MY MIIIIIND! and then the second time the chorus comes around when your layering your voice to echo the lyrics, that was really tyte. As far as the rappin', I've heard better from you. I thinkt he best I've heard you rappin' was on the Middle Eastern track and on the Jsteez Diss
Naah, Ive done much better...Trust me...This shit is 6 months old...
By The way, the Jsteez Diss sucked ass...I dont even know how u can say thats near my best...
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+ link=board=thalab;num=1026850367;start=0#17 date=07/25/02 at 16:19:33]ay well, the first one is better as far as like how the words match the beat, especially the chorus ! but the remix has the bomb ass beat. Ay sccit man, in full honestly, your a better singer than a rapper i think. I've never heard you try to do a chorus like that, but like that sounded pretty damn talented, especially the part where you go MY MIIIIIND! and then the second time the chorus comes around when your layering your voice to echo the lyrics, that was really tyte. As far as the rappin', I've heard better from you. I thinkt he best I've heard you rappin' was on the Middle Eastern track and on the Jsteez Diss
and I think its bullshit that u think im a better "singer"...You obviously think Im some sort of half-ass whack rapper, cuz i can tell by the way you speak, and your judging this old ass shit...I know I could be a real good rapper, Im just stressed out, with acid pro and everything...Get me into a real studio and I'll show u what I can do...This online, computer mic bullshit is just some shit I do for fun, and plus I just started rapping...Trust me, Ill get better, a LOT better...PeAcE
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man thats not a way to treat someone thats complimenting your shit...lol... nah but for real, if i thot your singing sucked i wouldn't have mentioned at all, I was really surprised by it, i liked it alot. And on your rappin', i'm just judging you based on what i have heard, so i mean what do u expect me to think. But you can get anyone into the studio and make em sound good, thats no biggy, it's not your equipment, go peep shawn lov at mp3.com, that fool is off the hook, he's white, and his quality sounds like shit cuz he dont record at a studio most of the time, so it's possible. pz!
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man thats not a way to treat someone thats complimenting your shit...lol... nah but for real, if i thot your singing sucked i wouldn't have mentioned at all, I was really surprised by it, i liked it alot. And on your rappin', i'm just judging you based on what i have heard, so i mean what do u expect me to think. But you can get anyone into the studio and make em sound good, thats no biggy, it's not your equipment, go peep shawn lov at mp3.com, that fool is off the hook, he's white, and his quality sounds like shit cuz he dont record at a studio most of the time, so it's possible. pz!
Its not the sound quality Im complaining about...Its the quality of how I have too record...Its like I Rap 8 bars, Pause, Rap 8 Bars, Pause...Its acid pro, and my mic combined...Trust me man...I'm not gunna lie..I recorded some weak shit in the past, but I belive in myself, and I belive I'm much better than what people have heard to date...And Shawn Lov been rapping for what? 5 years? Compare that too about 8 months...Im telling u man, I dont even know all the fundamentals of rappin, but when i learn, I promise everyone I will drop heat...But you dont have too belive me...I dont really care if u do or not...