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Elements => The Studio => Topic started by: I TO DA GEEZY on April 15, 2002, 08:45:40 AM

Title: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: I TO DA GEEZY on April 15, 2002, 08:45:40 AM

this iz my first single...from tha album "Life In I.L"...tha title track:
"Life In I.L(better days)"-Writen By I-GEEZY, produced by K.V.B.


http://logic.igangsta.com/igeezy.mp3


P.S i would like to thank logic for uploading this shit for me.

Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: Maestro Minded on April 15, 2002, 09:07:12 AM
this is a real nice track..... dope beat, props for KVB... damn... igeezy, this is your best track ive heard...


peace
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: ExZit on April 15, 2002, 09:08:22 AM
good work KVB on da keyboard  8)

Geezy is tight too .. good work  8)
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: Hittman on April 15, 2002, 10:07:53 AM
I Didnt Give A Chance To Comment On The Song Before. The Beat KVB Dropped For This Was Tight, I Think You Fitted In On The Song Real Nice. You Got A Real Nice Flow - The Main Thing Going Against This Song, Is You Mumble Some Of Your Lines. If You Were To Spit More Clearly (And I'm Pretty Sure English Isn't Your First Language) This Would Be Even Better Then It Already Is.
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: Smooth on April 15, 2002, 07:05:41 PM
dope track... im really feelin the beat... the only little problem was you mumbled your words a little bit a few times... either way dope track... keep that shit up

Peace
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: kuniver on April 15, 2002, 07:34:17 PM
the beat is real good but your flow lacks, Its hard to understand you, i think its your voice or something.. it was a good song though but that was the only problem...
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: I TO DA GEEZY on April 15, 2002, 10:35:41 PM
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the beat is real good but your flow lacks, Its hard to understand you, i think its your voice or something.. it was a good song though but that was the only problem...


well...you see ...tha vocalz were mixed a coupla secz forward(from where i ectually started spitten") by my producer for technical reasonz. so i see what you sayin. but it"z a track that iz made to make a kinda liad back feel at times...you know like pac"z "crazy" or somethin...lol...so have this in mind.


p.s THANX for tha feedback i aprsiate it.
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: TimeLock on April 16, 2002, 07:43:03 AM
good work on the beat kvb...i neva knew u had it like that
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: I TO DA GEEZY on April 16, 2002, 11:27:44 AM
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good work on the beat kvb...i neva knew u had it like that


word^ KVB"z beatz iz HOT....expect mo of our work together on my album. :)
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: bLaDe HeLi[X] on April 16, 2002, 11:53:33 AM
yeah, dope song, but...the volume of ure rap isnt consistant, it goes up n down @ sum parts, u should try to fix that....another thing is, in the begginin, the sound quality of ure intro is kinda scratchy, try to soften it...and its kinda short lol....btw im being highly critical here ...

overall dope track, the clarity of your rap has improved since last time, but keep workin on it, KVB brought a nice beat, props to him for that as well....peace

 -{bLaDe}
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: Naz-T on April 17, 2002, 05:12:00 AM
yeah, nice concept, average rapping but good, nice beat, this is a good song overall, props for both of you really.

peace
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: Joachim on April 17, 2002, 08:53:03 AM
Quite a dope track, you fade in and out a lil on the mic, but i was feelin it, props. Dope flow aswell.

Im also feeling that beat by KVB, cats got skills on the real, dope song
Title: Re: "Life In I.L(better days)"-my first single...
Post by: KVB on April 17, 2002, 09:20:14 AM
Thanks to everyone for the feedback+props... I sure appreciate it... keep it comin', peace.