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Title: Bye Daddy, I Will Always Love You..>>True Story Pe
Post by: OoLaDyLyRiKaLoO on September 30, 2002, 12:41:59 PM
My Dad Died A Year Ago This Past July...Was Very Hard For Me To Cope With Expecally The Way He Had To Go In Such Pain..Or Was It Pain? No One Knows...He Was Killed In A Car Accendent Because Of Fog And This Wal-Mart Truck Didn't Stop The Stop Sign Cus He Didn't See It...The Rest Of The Story Is Bad And I Dont Really Wanna Talk About It Anyways PeeP


I'm Having Flash Backs Of The Pulse Of a Past Death, In My Arms I Promise Him Back His Last Breath//
As His Body Tremble With Tower Changes, I Kiss His Soft Cheeks As The Candles Hit Our Faces//
^-^-^-(Bleep)-^-^-^-^-^--(Bleep)--^-^-^-^-^-^-^---(Bleep)---^-^-^-^--
With His Soul Slipping  I Re-Assure Him I'm Not Leaving You//
Take My Hand And In Me You'll Find The Light To Seeing Truth//
His Heart Beat N'sync To Mine, He's Laying Their Body Mind Less//
As I Hold His Hand He Shakes In a Lie Of How Lovely Life Is//
Even If My Brother Crossed You, He'll Learn What Truely Is a Bloody Crisis// ((For You That Dont Know My Brother Died Of And OverDose When He Was 7))
The Slits From His Neck Slowed Down His Heart Rate, So Young But His Eye's Tell a Tale Of a Dark Fate//
Shared With a Brewing Storm, Persuing Strong, In My Arms I Apologize To Him For All My Doing Wrong//
Before I Could Explain And Go Speak, I'm Re-Assured Theirs No Need//
So I Tell Him Stand By My Side And I'll Do You Better Now And Make Your Foes Bleed//
Daddy Please I Need You In My Life I'm Only 15 Please Dont Leave//
-^-^--^-^-^-^----(Bleep)-----^-^-^-^-^-^----(Bleep)----^-^-^-^---(Bleep)------^-^-
Only a Vauge Idea Of Seekin Fate, He Caressed My Face In His Weaken State//
And Told Me By My Side At 36 Years Of Age It Was a Steady Cruel Ride And He Was Ready To Die//
The Only Words Other Than That Had Came Out His Mouth Was Pray To Tha Lord For Me, And That These Last Seconds Felt Like Days Stored For Weeks//
--(Bleep)---^-^-^-----(Bleep)--^-^-------^-^-^--^-^-^----------^-^-^-^--(Bleep)----^-^-
His Pulse Slow But Raged Of  War, With His Heart Fragile//
I Riped Mine From My Chest In a Sharp Angle As He Breathed His Last Breath To StAnd By Me As.....My Dark Angel//
^-^-^-^--^--------(BeeeeeeEeeeeeeeeEeeeeeeeeeEeeeeeeeeeP!)--------

I Fell To My Knees Now I Have No Dad Damn It God Why'd You Go Off And Do This To Me//
I Cant Live A Life Knowin I Have No Dad And He Died So Burtally//
I Love You Daddy And I Miss You Please Daddy Stay By My Side//
I Cant Bare Tha Site Of You Not Bein Here With Me In My Life/
Title: Re: Bye Daddy, I Will Always Love You..>>True Stor
Post by: Kill on September 30, 2002, 01:51:47 PM
Good and very emotional lyrics, really. The rhymes are very tite, especially considerin them something rather unimportant rite here. Props
Title: Re: Bye Daddy, I Will Always Love You..>>True Stor
Post by: 'Illicit' on October 01, 2002, 12:12:17 AM
very touchy man, my upmost respect to you for having the courage to portray your feelings like this, I dont know if I couldve done it. Deep content.

peace out

Title: Re: Bye Daddy, I Will Always Love You..>>True Stor
Post by: Reef on October 01, 2002, 10:45:25 AM
That was touching.. Mad respect for the emoition that you clearly put into it, and the rhymes we're tight..

Mad respect..

peace
Title: Re: Bye Daddy, I Will Always Love You..>>True Stor
Post by: OoLaDyLyRiKaLoO on October 01, 2002, 11:24:43 AM
Thanks guys I appicate tha feedback
Title: Re: Bye Daddy, I Will Always Love You..>>True Stor
Post by: bez on October 01, 2002, 12:45:07 PM
dam deep. Liked it.