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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: DeaDSouLjaH on March 02, 2002, 04:17:21 AM
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3-0 K.O
first to 5, wins
crew votes allowed..but pls explain 'em
i'll drop if u accept ...
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Ras Kass will bow down to my LYRICAL-COMPLEXITY , lines come crashin down while ToNe's filled with MYSTICAL-PERPLEXITY/
your lines showin no direction like fallin in a PARABOLIC-TRAJECTORY , you jus spittin drunk lines like some ALCOHOLIC-EMCEE/
I'm lyrically an EXTROVERT and shall publically EXECUTE-YOU , leave you n tha K.I.N.G.S as a DESTITUTE-CREW/
Deadsouljah posessin flows faster than KRAYZIE-BONE , rip this guy with a HAZY-"TONE", my words tight like da pussy of SHARON STONE/
do you think your lines can eva seriously TEST-ME ?? before I spit i think itz BEST-you-FLEE/
you perfectly fit the description of a WACK-EMCEE , DeaDsouljah shall neva end this lyrical ATTACK-SPREE/
I SWIFTLY-COMPOSE-VENEMOUS-LINES , ToNe shall be da victim if he thinks he can TRICK ME-n-OPPOSE-my-DEVIOUS-CRIMES/
my lines like da foundation for a WEED-PLANTATION ,undergoing a sudden attack TRANSORMATION which quickly lead u to PROCEED-to-MEDICATION/
battlin DeAdSoUlJaH you jus show PLAIN-HESITATION , your rymes like a cd undergoing STRAINED-ROTATION, you went home to momma and COMPLAINED-CONSTIPATION /
rymin is a game of da SURVIVAL-OF-THE FITTEST , battlin Deadsouljah you will neva undergo REVIVAL-FROM-this-CONTEST/
My punches hit u hard like I possess a BLACK-BELT , i'll hit u real personal , since long ago my HEART-MELT/
i'm like Don Corleone ,u know how his enemies IS-DEALT , i'll be far more ruthless and make sure when u die da pain IS-FELT/
hittin lines at u wid max speed like MAURICE-GREEN , you're gonna lie on your death bed like some OBESE-""QUEEN""/
your rymes filled with archaic words like it originated from "Nineteen-Oh-FOUR", i guess itz time I show u WCC's exit DOOR/
look at ya computer screen , your lines can be termed as ALMOST-OBSENCE , i'll jus rip u apart and quick FROST-ya-SPLEEN/
to you, "quit rymin is my PIECE-OF-ADVICE!!" ,to make it faster i'll jus brandish my gat and be PRECISE-TWICE/
no...beef aiight...jus spittin..
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good rhyme, nice multies, a lot better than the one u spat vs csn imo
-{bLaDe}
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good rhyme, nice multies, a lot better than the one u spat vs csn imo
-{bLaDe}
Agreed.
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^^bump wherez tone ..
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ToNe1904 Told Me He Hasnt Had Much Time. I'm Sure He'll Respond Though.
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tones a pussy, lolol jk, naw the dogg said he aint in a mood to rhyme or sumtin, but hes sure to pack sum heat
-{bLaDe}
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aiight mah bad homie. ill respond tahday hopefully. no later then tomorrow for sure tho. i aint read yur verse yet....but damn homie...yur bars are like paragraphz LOL i thought mine were long :P
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ToNe explodin like Chernoble when I HIT-THA-SCENE, mah "nuclear" lyrikz gotcha linez glowin so yah SPITZ-ARE-GREEN/
Radioactive rhymez, radiation shootz frum mah lipz, im KILLIN-WIT-MY-SPITS, after-effectz felt generationz later so yah grand CHILDREN-ILL-FRUM-THIS/
Sayin "Grandpa! how come i keep droolin, have three eyez, and an INBALANCED-DOME?" n u reply "Sorry kidz, its cus many years ago I was a dumbass n CHALLENGED-TONE"/
U jus anotha "cracked" out MC, wit tha name DEADSOULJAH but yah couldnt be dispersed thru tha hood even if tha FEDS-SOLD-YAH/ *
Wanna step up? U jus ELECTED-FOR-PAIN, foo ima VET-TO-THA-GAME, yah maybe "Most Improved Rhymer" but ima THREAT-TO-YAH-FAME/
Like im Nas n yur Jay-Z i show no RESPECT-FAH-YAH-NAME, diss yah hard, left u DEJECTED-N-SHAMED, youz a real dick"rider" but ToNe jus DISCONNECTED-THA-REINS/
I peeped yah verse, jus like i EXPECTED-YAH-LAME, u could neva "flow" or "think" on mah level if my sickness INJECTED-YAH-VEINS and INFECTED-YAH-BRAIN/
Aim mah strap fah yah skull, call me tha HEAD-MOLDER, fear of death n i can HEAR-IT-IN-YAH/
But youz a clown, couldnt be a real DEADSOULJAH even wit Tupacs SPIRIT-IN-YAH/
"Payin" yah duez by gettin beat by ToNe, n u RECEIVIN-ADVANCES but thiz battle is a joke, no one BELIEVES-IN-YAH-CHANCES/
An MVP rhymer? u couldnt be a "franchise player" if yah name was STEVIE-FRANCIS/ **
Defeat me? Now thas a MIRACLE-YAH-ASKIN cus no way for u stop tha "shotz" frum thiz LYRIKILL-ASSASSIN/
Ima be tha "bully" in yah lunchline, takin "secondz" while u still ASKIN-FAH-FIRSTS/
"Deadsouljah" cant "Rest In Peace" cus ToNez BLASTIN-THA-HEARSE/
This bullshit battle i blessed, made yah rhyme "funky" cus i jus whiped my ASS-WIT-YAH-VERSE/
explainations~
*FBI helped to push crack into the inner cities
**Stevie Francis, a basketball player for tha Rockets. Nickname "Stevie Franchise"
aiight vote yall!
no beef deadsouljah...good shit
~~~edited for spelling~~~ lol
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votes pls ..
nice spit tone
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Deadsouljah posessin flows faster than KRAYZIE-BONE , rip this guy with a HAZY-"TONE", my words tight like da pussy of SHARON STONE/
Sharon stone is an old ho in my opinon her pussy is loose.
DeadSouljah i've seen better from u... ur shit did not make alot of sense to me
Radioactive rhymez, radiation shootz frum mah lipz, im KILLIN-WIT-MY-SPITS, after-effectz felt generationz later so yah grand CHILDREN-ILL-FRUM-THIS/
Sayin "Grandpa! how come i keep droolin, have three eyez, and an INBALANCED-DOME?" n u reply "Sorry kidz, its cus many years ago I was a dumbass n CHALLENGED-TONE"/
tone did not spit his best shit but his shit was still tight and made sense to me
my vote = ToNe1904
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thanx for votin timelock ...
mo votes pls
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yo whatup my dawgs, Aight, my review...
I think you both spit some good shit
I think Deadsouljah you came hard again, I mean u usually do,and this time you did that again, nice shit, you multis are still incomplete, but I wont pay too much attention to that, your punches were average, for example : "you just spitting drunk lines like u a drunk emcee" these kind of punches are nice, but not real hard, not much wordplay, but like I said, You came hardcore with a good vocab. So fo real, pretty Ill.
Dead Souljah - 4.2/5
Tone I think you are very good with multis. got the feeling as if you make multis by just thwowin in any word, but I am wrongf, coz your sentences make sense ! lol.
so ill multis, nice punches. Your flow is average, but you came hard enough to make me forget that, nice wordlay, but D.S's vocab was more sophisticated, overall tight shit.
Tone - 4.4/5
VOTE - TONE
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2-0 keep votin yall!!!!
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aight....
Imma vote for DeadSoulja, I liked his vocab, tight multis, n consistent flow. Good shit, but not the best ive seen.
My fav lines were:
"your rymes filled with archaic words like it originated from "Nineteen-Oh-FOUR", i guess itz time I show u WCC's exit DOOR/"
Tone came hard and showed a good battle. But I was just feelin DeadSoulja's on this one.
My fav lines were:
"ToNe explodin like Chernoble when I HIT-THA-SCENE, mah "nuclear" lyrikz gotcha linez glowin so yah SPITZ-ARE-GREEN/
Radioactive rhymez, radiation shootz frum mah lipz, im KILLIN-WIT-MY-SPITS, after-effectz felt generationz later so yah grand CHILDREN-ILL-FRUM-THIS/"
Vote=DeadSoulja
Peace
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I agree with TimeLock.. some of DS' rhymes didn't make much sense to me either, even though he came hard. ToNe came with consistent heat all the way... it's close, but I'll have to give it to Tone.
Vote = ToNe1904
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i pretty much agree with timelock, tone wuz ill, sum of the lines were amazing, DS wuz gud too, but i felt tones more
vote = tone
-{bLaDe}
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4-1, keep votin yall..
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mo votes would be nice... ;D ;D ;D ;D
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DEADSOULJA REVIEW
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I'm lovin' the slightly different, multi-centric style you've been kicking recently. The rest of your game has always been tight but this just adds another element to it.
OVERALL RATING: 4.0/5
TONE1904 REVIEW
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I've never really liked your style that much but you always come with a few nice punches and your multis (although a little inconsistent) are usually solid. You did have the best punch of the match though...
Aim mah strap fah yah skull, call me tha HEAD-MOLDER, fear of death n i can HEAR-IT-IN-YAH/
But youz a clown, couldnt be a real DEADSOULJAH even wit Tupacs SPIRIT-IN-YAH/
OVERALL RATING: 3.9/5
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hmmm....
Both very tight
Both very similar
I found myself more enticed to continue reading deadslja. maybe because he was first and his text was highlighted. thats the only difference i could tell. tight multis from both, but i think ds was more hardhitting
vote= ds
sorry tone
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4-3 ..
thanx for votin ITW and NOT
more votes pls
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keep votin yall!
its 4-3 im up. close battle.
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Sayin "Grandpa! how come i keep droolin, have three eyez, and an INBALANCED-DOME?" n u reply "Sorry kidz, its cus many years ago I was a dumbass n CHALLENGED-TONE"/
i dunnot y i just didnt like this matching with the rest of tone's verse. I liked DS's vocab, ill multis, and flow. Didn't like tone's too much, no beef..
vote - ds
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dawm ...4-4!!!
one more vote ..
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i dunnot y i just didnt like this matching with the rest of tone's verse. I liked DS's vocab, ill multis, and flow. Didn't like tone's too much, no beef..
vote - ds
lol itz cool. but as for tha matching. it goes with tha lines above...tha radiation lines n tha after-effectz. but itz all good
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Dead Souljah
Tight rhyme dawg. I liked the multi's and it flowed pretty well. You cane with average vocab. Good verse overall
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my lines like da foundation for a WEED-PLANTATION ,undergoing a sudden attack TRANSORMATION which quickly lead u to PROCEED-to-MEDICATION/
battlin DeAdSoUlJaH you jus show PLAIN-HESITATION , your rymes like a cd undergoing STRAINED-ROTATION, you went home to momma and COMPLAINED-CONSTIPATION /
Tone
I was feelin' this rhyme for sure homie. I really enjoyed the content, and the flow of it was a little better than DS's. Again, average vocab, but the flow was tight.
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Wanna step up? U jus ELECTED-FOR-PAIN, foo ima VET-TO-THA-GAME, yah maybe "Most Improved Rhymer" but ima THREAT-TO-YAH-FAME/
Like im Nas n yur Jay-Z i show no RESPECT-FAH-YAH-NAME, diss yah hard, left u DEJECTED-N-SHAMED, youz a real dick"rider" but ToNe jus DISCONNECTED-THA-REINS/
I peeped yah verse, jus like i EXPECTED-YAH-LAME, u could neva "flow" or "think" on mah level if my sickness INJECTED-YAH-VEINS and INFECTED-YAH-BRAIN/
This was a pretty close battle you tow. But i think Tone just clinched it with his flow. The rest was pretty evenly matched.
My Vote: Tone
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dawm ...this one came down to the wire... 5-4!!
shit ... newazy nice battle tone.. we'll ave a rematch some day ..
thanx for acceptin da battle ... pz
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damn yall. thankz for all tha votez.
Dead....i was expectin a close battle when i took this challenge. N shit...n couldnta been any closer. good shit homie. Much respect tah u.
peace