West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on February 12, 2002, 07:53:35 AM
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Rhyme 2/2 gettin shit off my chest. dont rate this if your gonna give pussy ass comments bout it. try to understand my situation. thats all.
It was a nice warm day in May, outta nowhere she came/
looked me in my eyes, I looked back felt like an eternal flame/
its been two years since I saw her again, was simply amazed/
had my first kiss with this girl, but now she's gone, left me dazed/
took the dogs for a walk once a day, enjoyed every minute/
loved her ever since, saturday was the night we did it/
I tried to call her but wrong number, either accident or pure
purpose/
all I know I'm mixed up loving two girls on God's green surface/
its hard to figure out what you want most if both sides are silent/
for once be real I hope deep inside craving for honesty and embracement/
holding you tight in my arms say that I love, be as sweet as can be/
may not be the perfect man but give me a chance and let us see/
how things evolve I'll do my best, so will you, I got trust in whatever you do/
just tell me now how you feel and I will be there til the last day God lets me look at you/
I was tempted when I kissed you though you knew about my date later on/
but you messed with my head, I made a call and said I wasnt gonna come/
suddenly avoidance crept me, I asked if I did anything wrong/
you carefully caressed my cheek saying no, its just been so long/
moments later I heard you saying your afraid it would be just this one night/
I dearly hope you knew me better, that I'm not the kinda guy for only one night/
though you gave me hope, I truly believed it could've worked/
I some how now realize it wasnt meant to be since you've shirked/
why no answer when I call? you could be honest and say you dont want all this/
I wouldnt hate you, no not at all, just no longer suffer from longing for your kiss/
see, with me playing games is crucial, hurt my feelings easily so once and for all/
let me know now so I can stop deliberating, about what we had, and what were to come/
try to imagine how I feel, see through my eyes, love is strong my mind is numb.
this is basically dedicated to Ivonne, what this is all about. for the other girl, I cant say much she somehow moved to the back of my conscience. I hope this clears up soon.
peace, one love.
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Nice piece about ya ladies. I liked most of it but some sounded a little awkward... overall:
6.7/10 - Well above average, homie. A 7 would be the best ish I've seen in weeks. I rate hard.
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well, I wasn't anticipating any ratings cuz I personally just wanted to unload shit thats been buggin me, but thx anyway.
peace, one love
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How come homeboy isn't getting more feedback? Everyone here sleeps on normal joints. All ya'll cats wanna do is battle. Battling's fun but normal spits and collabos should get more shine here then they do.
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tight shit.... wish people would drop on a personal level more often, peace