West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Ro J. Simpson on January 12, 2002, 02:48:38 PM
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aight..
2 rhymes each.
as many bars as u want..
first to 4 votes
its on fool!.
one,
yo, this dude rep isnt a rookie..he post over on the rapcheck.org forum..so no votes for his rhyme cos he's a newcomer!!!
peace
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checcin in ......
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the battle area is charred, leavin yeh grill scarred/
ill re-arrange your 'face' so the other kids call u retard/
your no eater i handed you your rep and ill snatch it back/
maybe then ill bury you like a timeless artifact/
you need to get 'after hours tuition' in order for you to adapt/
but i aint no policeman so im a kick it wit u a minute/
your rhymes are a joke maybe i can lift up your spirits/
but my shit's too hot so u darent even come near it/
u aint got lyrics just a bitch with a gimmick/
fool your just a ghost-writin out lost verses/
that should of bin thrown out,
when u got arrested snatchin-purses/
your simple like posh and becks/
cotton and gortex/
corvette's, jets the lex/
not forgettin the gucci specs/
fool, im conclusive proof/
i'll fuckin blow up the news/
ill take the wrath out of zeus/
im 2 tha bone like truth/
what can i say im just a regular spoof/
my body structure will exceed your knowledge capacity/
eventually u'll get the blues like varsity/
im iller than mos def ecleftic like wyclef/
maybe now u might actually grasp-the-concept/
you fuckin faggot, you cant beat me im hard like granite/
ill paint a picture with your blood on something ceramic/
my shit makes u panic, and u know u cant stand it/
maybe ur a redneck, or probably an islamic/
nether-the-less your ship is sinkin like titanic/
your lack of knowledge is bigger than the nose on jimmy durante/
and now ive blazed its time to peak like dante/
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its on fool!
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yeah man, snap ya bars wit my little pinky bitch........
i'm a socialist, when alone i'm a potionist/
sit a home, roll a blunt, smoke-an-i'm-motionless/
i beat emcee's back with my chrome-and-fist/
cut ya tongue into pieces when you moaned-and-dissed/
my samples crate-digged an my beats off time/
my bass blows you in the air like stepping on land-mines/
got accused of verbal-rape on britney cuz i asked her if she'd blow mine/
the 'myth' of your-skills won't exceed the 'legend'-of-mine/
i commited 1.8.7 an didnt know it was-a-real-crime/
i play my beatz-in-the-clubs an-emcees-scratch-an-snort-lines/
while-ya-wack-shits played on street corners an wealthy-citizens-throw-'dimes'/
ya rhymes got two personalties, wack an wacker like-gemini/
when people see me they change direction cuz-i'm-a-'star-sign'/
committed-more-murder than nazis-charged-for-war-crimes/
an now i've murdered your bars it-clear-i'm gonna-do-time/
An Jae Won ya think i like-ya-rhymes ~ what is this?/
ya more likely ta-find-me feelin Bubba-Sparxxs-lyrics/
but ya-shit-missed an-mine-hit your-rhymes-bit so-save-it-cuz your-fake-shit/
cuz-record-it, produce-shit, save-shit an lose-it ~ listen to my-new-shit/
i flip-cliks-with-fast-fists ~ make niggaz look like they-had-ten-hits/
aight well quickness......
first to four bitch ;D.......
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rEp-EaTeR wins because of that ill punchline:
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But quit the Bubba shit-talking. Bubba would rape you in a freestyle. And he ain't got bad lyrics either. >:(
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I ment this punchline:
i beat emcee's back with my chrome-and-fist/
cut ya tongue into pieces when you moaned-and-dissed/
Peace ;D
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aight cheers fo ya vote.......anyone else?
oh yeah and no beef to bubba sparxx fans, i jus aint feelin him......
out
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rep was hella il but he didnt flow consitently , Jae Won however was tight mostly form beginning to end. Rep had some corny lines cuz of the repeatenace of "mine" but he was ill and hard. but Jae kept it goin.
my vote : Jae
peace
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uppin for votes^^
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Jae Won Won
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jae
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my vote: jae won