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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on January 07, 2002, 11:05:54 AM
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aight i set up the thread, I'll be postin tomorrrow or sumthin.
3 votes str8 K.O
first to 5
crew votes allowed if explained and rated fairly
20 barz max
peace
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As These "Atomic-lyrics" drip from my "finger-tips",they hit your eyes balls :o like "an-exploding-ellipse"/
I use "confusing-word-play" to set your mind "a-stray"as I setup camp for "your-judgement-day"/
This "atomic-display" makes em-Cee-s "wanna-pray"/
But to most the efect is just "total-dismay"/
CeeRide will mostlikely "be-one-to-spray"/
but he throws weak punchs like punch-lines in jokes of "Dice-Clay"/
CeeRide's probable responce to that..."Yeah-what-ever-u-say"/
I know cuz daz da homie and we chat on AIM "like-every-day"/
he musta been feeling brave wanting to step to me like he's "cassius-clay"/
you got what you asked for so now "antie-up-ya-pay"/
lyrical i just to brokeaway "on-a-CeeRide"/
now I sturup his oceans and cause "lyrical-R.I.P-tide"/
I kill off his lyrics like "helpless-mareen-life", as toxic-wate his flow of "Malfunctioned-deficient-shyite"/
My lyrics cruzz on u "like-a-crude-oil-tanker"cuz i'm filled with crude lyrical content that drowns u out "like-a-pirate-planker"/
i'm set "to-spill" "my-ills", on ya depleeting "brain-coral-reef"/
My Punch linez left u so deficient "u-shit-in-your-breefs"/
now with a leaf u wipping away any thoughs "u-had-of-beef"/
Opps...i just turned a prefectly good CeeRide into "a-Malfunctioning-deficent-desastor"/
Inforcing that battles against K.I.N.G.S. result in "Lyrical-Massicure"/
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Tight shit TimeLock, but how come you ain't replied to my new challenge yet? ??? ???
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witness as i breakthrough the wall of Time/
Lock me up in a cage, hand me a mic n I'll rhyme/
create lines so frightening every word i sublime/
wanted dead or alive for killin the Son Of Time/
u couldnt Cee me if u had Bin-ocu-lars/
invisible words, play you like 8 balls-of-billiards/
after-wards, got ya head spinnin as the-world turns/
fire burns, its a fact so lets face it/
my track you cant retrace-it/
loan u money for a face-lift/
rip you light-less on ya night-shift/
jus tah show you how i be, when i aproach otha emcee's/
got bidimensional abilities/
continue spittin when tha times-on-lock/
i roll wit da Melanin flock/
make every King drop/
start wit ToNe, end wit TimeFlop/
lyrical torture, Time's slippin like moisture/
im da head of a new legislature, its in my nature/
to end da Son Of Time's future, remanufacture/
sorry for the delay dawg. i wrote this down quickly now. cuz im more concentrated on ToNe num sayin. need to beat his ass in da royal rumble. sorry agani
VOTE YALLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
peace
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cool battle people.
Time Lock had some cool punches an shit.. but i didnt like the fact that you were rhyming day, clay etc for the like first 9 bars.. Although the rest of it wuz tight that sorta let it down IMO.
Cee Ride had a good flow to his shit and some cool vocab, your rhyme also flowed better than Time Lock's imo..
My Vote: Cee Ride
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If I were to call it, I would have to say CeeRide, and I ain't hatin' on TimeLock or no shit like that.. but CeeRide had some pretty fuckin' powerful punchlines. But as I said, really hard to call. :-/ Both indeed had very dope verses.
By the way TimeLock, can you respond to my fuckin' challenge? :'( :'( ;D
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TimeLock Review: Yo.. your style looks alot like your boy Maxi's.. it makes you come off like Memphis Bleek... but it's aiight..... you came with a real tight verse.. with solid metaphors and multi's.. good work
quotables:
I use "confusing-word-play" to set your mind "a-stray"as I setup camp for "your-judgement-day"/
but he throws weak punchs like punch-lines in jokes of "Dice-Clay"/
he musta been feeling brave wanting to step to me like he's "cassius-clay"/
I kill off his lyrics like "helpless-mareen-life", as toxic-wate his flow of "Malfunctioned-deficient-shyite"/
played out rhymes:
Inforcing that battles against K.I.N.G.S. result in "Lyrical-Massicure"/
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Cee Ride Review: Your opening was tight.. with a subliminal diss to Timelock, using Time-lock as the metaphor.. I believe you used the word sublime in the wrong context.. sublime meaning the most exalted, it kind of sounds wrong with the sentence but i know what you meant... this verse was consistenly fresh throughout... awefully lyrical.. an above average rhyme no doubt.
Quoatables:
witness as i breakthrough the wall of Time/
Lock me up in a cage, hand me a mic n I'll rhyme/
wanted dead or alive for killin the Son Of Time/
after-wards, got ya head spinnin as the-world turns/
loan u money for a face-lift/
i roll wit da Melanin flock/
make every King drop/
lyrical torture, Time's slippin like moisture/
im da head of a new legislature, its in my nature/
to end da Son Of Time's future, remanufacture/
Played Out Rhymes:
u couldnt Cee me if u had Bin-ocu-lars/
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I reviewed ya'll both individually above and here's what I came up with.
Timelock: 3.9
CeeRide: 4.2
vote= CeeRide
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aight 3-0 cool battle, i wasnt expecting a win lol but cool im happy.
peace
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that was a hard ass battle/
y'all both broke it down to handle/
tight ass battle hott as hell......