West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on December 16, 2001, 10:09:48 AM
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aight homie lets get it on. its my first battle im callin out and I'm finna get these points for my record ;D
I propose we keep it normal, one verse each, first up to 5 votes wins?? (3 is k.o) any objections?
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i need points/ like snoop needs joints/ like your girl you think im eazy/ i show you why your still a lil geezy/ my rhymes slick like they greasy/ ya'll be tha prosecution/ tryin to give me life for this lyrical execution/ i'll show you how my perfection is confectious/ show ya how im flowin wit tha best of us/ but theres only one tom187um/ only one man will be standing wit tha gun/ only one man will have ceedrida's girl guzzle there cum/ an its me tha physco/ like no other/ kill my own brother/ these rhymes are goin smother your fuckin mother/ go to your own hood/ an eat you like big suge/ cuz it aint all good/ this shit is goin get crazy/ your lyrical bullet wont even graze me/ faze me/ i'll leave you lost like you in a maze/ to go against me you have to be brave/ but you just dug you own grave/ cuz CeeRide its tha end of your days/ throw you dead body in jamaica bay/ i spit straight fire/ your mom gets around like a tire/ an found on tha ground/ not makin a sound/ in tha gutter/ not makin a putter or a utter/ cuz to death is how i fucked her/
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aight I'll go first.
its the imperial, lyrical Cee-to-tha-Ride/
i slide , through ya mind with verbal homicides/
check ya flow the next time, n see if it'll rhyme/
cuz that shit that u be spittin aint worth two dimes/
ya wanna dis me real hard? go ahead, yo shits excessive/
i ain't fearin ya rhyme cuz it lacks and it's predictive/
my definition of killin ya's simple - watch me explain/
I'll squash ya groin, stab ya chest and slice your forebrain/
you lay in pain - while I remain/
heated you try to regain fame/
but i cut off your tongue n put a end to your game/
now ya back at scratch, tryna make it, hopin for a rematch/
anytime muthafucka, you couldnt beat me if you came in packs/
first I gave it thought - but I found it aint hard to dis you/
read your other battles, laughed so hard that I needed tissues/
talk that shit bout my girl n my momma?/
i bring drama, my lyrical sawed-off leaves u livin wit a trauma/
and if u didnt noticed, my position moved to 'G'/
im improvin everyday, twirl my tongue like a frisbee/
while u be watchin wrestling seeing guys gettin smacked/
dont even start to worry, why yo style stays wack/
my rhymez leave a track, make u turn insomniac/
~peaCe~
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aight VOTE yall........
*excited* ;D
~peaCe~
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IM THE NEW ADMIN...
j/k
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by the way: i wrote "I'll go first" thats cuz i was wrítin that shit while you posted yours already tom, so i edited it a lil n forgot to delete that first sentence.
~peaCe~
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CeeRide got this shit.. he came a bit harder.. tom came aight.. i only got one problem with tom.. and that is yo flow is basic dawg.. if u dont know what i mean.. like easy geezy greasy.. nah' mean? try and make ur rhyme structure more solid, aint nothen wrong with ur content tho..
ceeride didn come flawless ever.. i wasn feelen his verse to tha maximum.. but it was jsut close enough good battle ya'l..
vote- ceeride
peace
~1~
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ceeride came harder and CREATIVE
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CeeRide came out with more creativity. I can picture him punching lyrical circles around Tom.
Vote CeeRide
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c ride took this
but tom i liked alot of your shit keep workin
now if only some one will vote on my battle....
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CeeRide, but both of these were ill