West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on February 16, 2009, 10:01:14 PM
-
ROCCY-
let me come through and bust, you 'shits' about to get flushed
roccy and sccit you're now double stuffed, and oreos got nothing on us
if I find you plotting on us, chew you up and excrete you like a model does,
or just mis-treat you like a puddle of mud, dont know what youre smokin...
but you aint puffin my bud, ima sick minded fuck, youre about to get whipped and cuffed
stripped and plugged, call you bloomberg from jurassic park, roccy and sccit
and when we two merge, the action starts, the killin, and choppin off body parts
draw a circle on your heart, grab a dart and attack you in the dark,
buy some gasoline and pour it over your car, boom, there goes the spark
who has the part to take on the R? step back, im a train and you're a track,
without me, you're useless, whack, the truth is that, i'm untouchable and thats a fact.
SCCIT-
since notorious, I'm the phattest, the most glorious on the atlas
can't touch my status like a cactus, blazin weed while i stack chips
attack the whack with front and backflips, shit's basically gymnastics
like, "damn, them 12 year old asians at the olympics probably jacked sccit"
and i dont pack clips...I pack fire in the ride
said you don't molest kids, yous a liar with no pride
it's like the higher that i glide the more clear shit becomes
you bitches need change more than street corner bums
muthafuckaz got no pride, like what a speech disorder does
u can't speak like foreign sluts or whores who love guys pourin' cum
and i'm talkin about bez, i know the quietest truth
you on the downlow and got an eye for the youth
it's alright, young'n, just try to be you
cuz the only votes against roccy were the guys who you blew
i know you're all ears and that's why i appall queers
i speak nothin but the truth, that's all i do, ask paul pierce
-
it doesnt get sicker than this.
-
Roccys flow was boring
but Sccit made a nigga say "damn"
-
I see you jocking Bezzie, jocking Bezzie,
I see you jocking Bezzie, jocking Bezzie,
Hold up hold... switch that radio...
These faggot niggas even made gang sign commercial,
I said these faggot, I said these faggot, I said these faggot,
Niggas even made gang sign commercial...
Talk about 'molestation'... I can't blame you 'kids',
You 'lyin' I'm 'Jericho' here to tame you bitch, (lion)
Your subjects are subjective now subject to rejection,
NIK reached clinical depression, his lyrics 'poor' like 'recession',
I ain't even messin but you 'boys' are welcome to my lesson,
But know this dog 'mega bites' like an 'Internet connection',
They tryna 'dig out' stories like they 'roaming for facts',
Leave these 'yellow skin'd characters' Groaning like Matt,
They fallin back to the Alamo, but the win... they can have it,
They always got their 'eye on man' but I got a 'Full Metal Jacket',
I'm an Iron man like 'Mike', 'Jordan's' I got a draw full,
Your lyrics are awful... all you do is 'talk Bull', ha ha,
I've even heard your sound like... "Dam flows unclear",
Had me to the side on floors like... Van Gogh's ear,
Oh dear I've just beat you... 'mashed you like Potato's',
'Squashed you like tomato's'... 'gassed you like a New Rolls',
Truth is your lyrics are so 'shit' I run out of 'loo rolls',
I'm the 'block', you just 'busters', wonder if they got 'Juno's', (Jew Nose)
Who knows?... but damn I don't take nothin back,
I'm the 'Hussein' of lyrics, my books are in 'a-rack', (Iraq)
Always guna kill, just like your fucking country,
In more ways I'm 'ill' thats why you can't touch me,
I'm invisible invincible indestructible indecisive,
In principle, I'm cynical, suicidal like cyanide capsule's,
Cos fuckin wit me is 'H.I.V', you're 'gunna get infected',
Like N.I.K wit Roccy... you're gunna get arrested,
"Help Me! I got busted, now I'm going to jail!!!!!"
You gettin no more 'post's from this 'royal-male', now that's a 'free' style, (Mail)
All the while I been wondering how many rubbers you digested?
I'm simply 'doing words' thats why I use your 'mothers as adjectives',
Roccy 'jacked' my flow, cos his was slow like Chris Reeves,
NIK 'stole' my swag, but they both 'thick as thieves',
I always come back harder, come back stronger,
I'm the General, John 'Con-air', 'Sirus' the virus, warrior!,
Here to bury ya in terrain I pick like cement... heavy,
You got nothing on me its like 'refrain from digs' like a cemetery,
Make a mockery of Bezzie, this hypocrisy's not ready,
I 'run these streets' like Rocky, but the flows so steady,
Let me... get to it personal, Roccy if I kill you its 'serial',
Wanna talk about kids... but I finished off every verse for you,
'Frosty' lyrics got him cold, outside with no replies,
I'm so quick call me 'milk' cos I'm 'past your eyes', (pasteurised)
Quick to blast you guys and wreck all your shit,
I'm a 'contract' killer, you not read the 'small print'? ...check, check, the small print, check, check the small print,
I'm a tall git, always a target, I don't care,
Israel to the hills... the real Slumdog millionaire,
And he looks like him too... what you think?
Fellah's... my 'clicks' bigger than this 'hyperlink' (http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?topic=206337.200),
I'm hype your tripe its like battling 'skunks' they stink,
But I can't help but think this is a waste of time,
I just came into their thread... and damn... I made it mine!
Although this small print is intended for this 'online' lyrical battle it does not take away from the fact that Roccy and NIK are a bitch and every verse he dropped has been ripped like I was exporting them to disc... Champion, Winner, King, is here.
-
what do you do, just think up a bunch of metaphors/punchlines and throw em together? you gotta find a better way to flow your words, homie, it doesn't come off as natural. shits got a nursery rhyme feel with no true flow to it and a basic repetitive rythm...the lyrics aren't bad, but shit sounds typed when flowed.
aka
shit aint clever, just thinkin up a bunch of metaphors/punchlines and throwin em together?.. homie, you gotta find a way to flow your words better... it doesn't come off as natural, i'm just being factual... shits got a nursery rhyme feel with no true flow... and a basic repetitive rythm- the opposite of pro...the lyrics aren't bad, but shit sounds typed when spittin it... kinda like it aint a freesyle, but some monotone written shit..
-
what do you do, just think up a bunch of metaphors/punchlines and throw em together? you gotta find a better way to flow your words, homie, it doesn't come off as natural. shits got a nursery rhyme feel with no true flow to it and a basic repetitive rythm...the lyrics aren't bad, but shit sounds typed when flowed.
EXACTLY what i thought when i read it
-
If you think that verse has no flow you are truly fucked up. Youre just mad cos everything youve dropped so far has been bombed, easily. That's what keystyling is though mate, and youre pissed off cos everything I drop is soooo much better than yours. You and Roccy have took to biting me, jacking my style and flow and basically just doing anything you can to beat me, and it still fails, everytime. Ask any vet on the boards... they all agree with me. This battle is and has already been won by me mate. You and Roccy got owned, you just cant admit it. Sad really. The sad thing is, every metaphor was actually dope and alot of them personal's, youre just to bitter to admit it.
Owned mate, well and truley. Unlucky though, it was a good try.
-
Bez you didnt have to be a douche and lower my karma for agreeing with Nik
we are just trying to help you out...
when i read Nik's flow it just sounded more like a freestyle then when i read yours...
your flow is better lyrically then roccy's but roccy's is still put together better then yours
-
Bez you didnt have to be a douche and lower my karma for agreeing with Nik
we are just trying to help you out...
when i read Nik's flow it just sounded more like a freestyle then when i read yours...
your flow is better lyrically then roccy's but roccy's is still put together better then yours
I aint touched your karma you little fucking girl. Why you crying over something that doesn't even matter lol.
Thats fine, thats your opinion. Its just not the opinion that EVERYONE else on the boards would have, vets!!!
-
LOL this is childish...keep going 8)
-
LOL this is childish...keep going 8)
pathetic aint it.
Keep my name out of your mouth A.G or you will get annihilated too.
-
LOL this is childish...keep going 8)
pathetic aint it.
Keep my name out of your mouth A.G or you will get annihilated too.
You still havnt beaten me yet, can't go on to the next contestant ;). Check the battle thread.
-
LOL this is childish...keep going 8)
pathetic aint it.
Keep my name out of your mouth A.G or you will get annihilated too.
You still havnt beaten me yet, can't go on to the next contestant ;). Check the battle thread.
Seen that verse and well ignored it, the battle is won and the war is over. Every verse I have dropped has owned you, theres no need for me to continue.
Thanks mate, good battle.
-
Yup Bez won the battle as long as he agrees with the voter. Kinda funny how that works...
-
Who the fuck are you, why do you just randomly turn up in my threads and post bullshit. Go back to suckin NIoccy's dick.
-
Look who get em complaining, crying and straining,
I'm a pro every 'day', but dudes are still 'training',
Failing, outlast, 'relapse', they 'lack heart',
Perhaps I'm bad, I jabbed once then smashed hard,
I'm 'unbreakable', lyrics glass an un-sharred,
I 'bruise' enemies wit my energy, then leave skin scarred, (Bruce)
These retards just can't sleep cos...
They awakened a God like Goza, 'guna call me', Bez, 'tha ghostbuster',
Flow untoucher, come 'closer', like 'Ne-Yo',
A double fuck-up'er, might as well be a trio,
I see hoes like 'Rodeo', 'drive' through without a care,
Got 'under these bitches skin' like an 'ingrowing hair',
My flair untouched, the champ is in the house,
These boys 'can't roll' like a 'broken mouse',
I toke you out, take you out, my bout is about face,
I don't like 'weed'... so Roccy... how does defeat taste?
Or the sweet scent your mate extremates every time you love make,
Hate that I switched states an Bez had to replace,
His old style with new 'steel' like a 'Pittsburgh' switchblade,
Claim my lyrics 'don't make weight', these 'homo's' ain't seeing 'straight',
When they 'bouncin off my waves' like a Hudson river plane,
Eating everythin off my plate like they won the 'sweepstakes', (steaks)
Call em 'Louis Vutton' rappers cos I all I see is 'cheap-fakes',
Please, hesitate, before you contemplate,
Battling thee great, the dude these guys love to hate,
I 'slate all your flaws' like a 'contract tiler', (floors)
Degrate all you broads, straight to the 'bank' like 'Tyra',
Either, of em, who want em to drop these shallow thoughts,
The boards are getting bored of you an your boys hollow-cause,
Source their information from misinformed situations,
Currently debating whether to stop this detrimental discrimination,
Cos their confirmation made me sick when I read rhymes,
These boys are together an sayin that I commit crimes!
They call me 'book breaker' the way I 'rip spines',
Take these 'chicken's to the 'slaugher house', call me 'Bez the 5'9'!
One time I drop mine and they can't even admit,
"That line, that rhyme, yeah Bez is the shit",
But just skit and Sccit and prove me wrong like OJ Simp, right?
No wrong, thats right, I'll admit, your verses are 'clean', but ya flows 'recyced',
All hyped, now typed, I've been right since like 'decades ago',
A.G, you don't want a go, I'm Bez, you Fez, get back to the '70's show'!
Hoes!
-
Who the fuck are you, why do you just randomly turn up in my threads and post bullshit. Go back to suckin NIoccy's dick.
You just aren't too bright are you. I have not randomly showed up in your threads. I posted a few times on some of your drops and gave them props. Then I say in my opinion I think that Roccy's BATTLE rhymes were better than your in the other thread, and you cry cause you think there is some conspiracy out to "get you". You discount people opinions because you don't agree with them. I'll say it again, I think your random drops are off the hook, then 1 time I say you lost and I'm a dumbass? Check your emotions, cause you are catching feelings like middle school. Quit actin like what you have wrapped around your neck and man up.
-
If you think that verse has no flow you are truly fucked up. Youre just mad cos everything youve dropped so far has been bombed, easily. That's what keystyling is though mate, and youre pissed off cos everything I drop is soooo much better than yours. You and Roccy have took to biting me, jacking my style and flow and basically just doing anything you can to beat me, and it still fails, everytime. Ask any vet on the boards... they all agree with me. This battle is and has already been won by me mate. You and Roccy got owned, you just cant admit it. Sad really. The sad thing is, every metaphor was actually dope and alot of them personal's, youre just to bitter to admit it.
Owned mate, well and truley. Unlucky though, it was a good try.
jacking your flow? how delusional are you, bloke? i mean, i can understand if you think your shit is good (even though it's not), but to resort to delusional claims such as anyone "jacking your style" just shows how pathetic your beliefs truly are (if u really do believe what you claim). once again, your shit flows like a nursery rhyme...you got the same pattern going on all the way through. you need to learn how to switch up your fucking flow so you dont sound like a monotone brit when you're spittin...btw, my blazed 2-min flow in this thread shits all over yours, which i guarantee you sat and took your sweetass time on, thinking up metaphor by metaphor and ways to connect them in rhyme...lmao.
-
LOL this is childish...keep going 8)
pathetic aint it.
Keep my name out of your mouth A.G or you will get annihilated too.
You still havnt beaten me yet, can't go on to the next contestant ;). Check the battle thread.
Seen that verse and well ignored it, the battle is won and the war is over. Every verse I have dropped has owned you, theres no need for me to continue.
Thanks mate, good battle.
it's one thing to be cocky when you're good and when you got everyone backing you____________________________
you're looking like the retarded kid on the basketball court who thinks he's good...you know, the one who comes through with elbow and knee pads on- that's you in this thread. lmao.
-
Check your emotions
you're askin too much of him, bro...dude's a homo.
-
Another verse, another victory, mentally, morally, physically, basically all the 'ally's there are.
Thank you and goodnight!!!!!
-
sLY kY (3:11:35 PM): yo
sLY kY (3:12:02 PM): your shit was tight
sLY kY (3:20:24 PM): bezs shit took me a half hour to fuckin read
DEEEEzzzz NuTz (3:20:27 PM): he thinks hes all amazing
DEEEEzzzz NuTz (3:20:27 PM): LOL
sLY kY (3:20:38 PM): i mean hes got good id eas
sLY kY (3:20:39 PM): but
sLY kY (3:20:41 PM): fuck that flow sucks
sLY kY (3:20:43 PM): for a keystyle
sLY kY (3:20:49 PM): yours was smooth iread it clean one take
sLY kY (3:20:51 PM): his was like
sLY kY (3:20:53 PM): all of the place
-
This is a keystyle battle - stick to the topic
-
....cheaaaaaa
-
LMAO...so what? you embarrassed of losing to me in audio battle?
those deletions were uncalled for, sore loser.
-
LMAO...so what? you embarrassed of losing to me in audio battle?
those deletions were uncalled for, sore loser.
This is a keystyle thread, theres no difference between someone coming in here and starting a sports conversation. You want to do audio shit, start a new thread. Although I got no means to reply as of yet.
-
whered my post go? post a link or it didnt happen
-
^it happened...bez deleted your posts before I could post a link...LMAO. i think we're bruising his ego viciously. poor kid.
-
LMAO...so what? you embarrassed of losing to me in audio battle?
those deletions were uncalled for, sore loser.
This is a keystyle thread, theres no difference between someone coming in here and starting a sports conversation. You want to do audio shit, start a new thread. Although I got no means to reply as of yet.
"hip hop aint dead" made a valid point...he said post audio, because then we can see who flows better. you know damn well you deleted those posts so that everyone wouldnt see that ive beaten u in audio...lmao.
-
Why would I care that you defeated me in audio. Unlike you I can admit defeat. It was also an audio battle many years ago, recording on windows sound record using a normal mic. Well done son.
I deleted them posts so this 'keystyle' battle thread wouldnt become full of shit about audio, low and behold, what has happened.
Being a moderator sure is hard.
-
Why would I care that you defeated me in audio. Unlike you I can admit defeat. It was also an audio battle many years ago, recording on windows sound record using a normal mic. Well done son.
I deleted them posts so this 'keystyle' battle thread wouldnt become full of shit about audio, low and behold, what has happened.
Being a moderator sure is hard.
unlike me? aside from your delusions, when have you ever defeated me?
keystyle needs this kinda shit...quit being a jerkoff.
-
Check every keystyle Ive posted over the last week or so. PeAce!
Keystyle needs keystyle... lmao! Go jerk Roccy off you gay boy.
-
yo lemme get in this, i go hard and long
like i do when i get with this british kids mom
ima finish him off, at least whats left of 'em
lookin at your Pic I SEE where they-got "Molester" from
fuckin broke ass Bloke, Broke Back wanna be
i leave you up in smoke, like my marijuana leaf WHAT
-
:D
-
LMAO...Bez, I'm pretty sure were like 3-3 in that battle, you might wanna check it again, and people are still gonna continue voting.
Bez man don't get upset, you got some really good lines, its just hard to flow. Plus, I'm sure you're good at something else man, lyricism aint ya thang. ;D
-
Yup Bez won the battle as long as he agrees with the voter. Kinda funny how that works...
to be fair ive seen it going both ways...nik and bez have both given theirselves more props than anyone else has given them...roccys the only chill one and its funny he had the best verse in here...bez had some good stuff and nik had a good line or two but talk about cliche.."like this" like that"...it amazes me you can talk about owning each other rhyming gymnastics with backflips...then in the next bar say u got robbed by 12 year olds...there was some other played shit but yall been bickerin so long i cant see the posts so im going from memory....and bez u cant drop a gazillion bars against 16 apiece if u condensed it down it would have been better but i lost interest..sum good bars but sum equally bad the blockbuster bar standsw out as horrible
and thats the trillest opinion in here cus i like none of you your usernames and numbers to me....easy
-
lol needle dick bez you dont want any drama with me... please...
and i say yall record this shit... any one can just fuckin type a bunch of shit together to sound cool... but im pretty sure Bez cant rap it....
-
i level on man draw metal on man we are not the get along gang
HAHA this reminds of that bar props!!
-
Yup Bez won the battle as long as he agrees with the voter. Kinda funny how that works...
to be fair ive seen it going both ways...nik and bez have both given theirselves more props than anyone else has given them...roccys the only chill one and its funny he had the best verse in here...bez had some good stuff and nik had a good line or two but talk about cliche.."like this" like that"...it amazes me you can talk about owning each other rhyming gymnastics with backflips...then in the next bar say u got robbed by 12 year olds...there was some other played shit but yall been bickerin so long i cant see the posts so im going from memory....and bez u cant drop a gazillion bars against 16 apiece if u condensed it down it would have been better but i lost interest..sum good bars but sum equally bad the blockbuster bar standsw out as horrible
and thats the trillest opinion in here cus i like none of you your usernames and numbers to me....easy
how can you not rhyme gymnastics and backflips? lol, i tell you about these euros, boy...and where did i give myself props in this thread? i thought my spit was decent, at best. also, what are you talking about, 12 year olds jacking me??...you really are a retard, aren't you? that coincided with the gymnastics line...didn't you hear about the scandal at last years olympics where the 12 year old asian girls were illegally used to win medals in gymnastics? you're fuckin dumb, man. LOL.
-
your something else....are you above criticism??...damn valley girls i tell you...i didnt say you couldnt...he'll i think every textcee ever has rhymed it at some point...but its is corny beyond belief...may as well rhyme cat and hat ....and yeah i heard about i just didnt think it was clever and its a hella easy line to flip...and yes u have hence "only ppl who vote against me blah blah blah"
god i hate rich only children...do u want opinions on this shit or u an bez jus gunna carry on cryin @ each other and whoever gets bored 1st loses???
-
your something else....are you above criticism??...damn valley girls i tell you...i didnt say you couldnt...he'll i think every textcee ever has rhymed it at some point...but its is corny beyond belief...may as well rhyme cat and hat ....and yeah i heard about i just didnt think it was clever and its a hella easy line to flip...and yes u have hence "only ppl who vote against me blah blah blah"
god i hate rich only children...do u want opinions on this shit or u an bez jus gunna carry on cryin @ each other and whoever gets bored 1st loses???
criticism? you didn't criticize shit...do i look like bez here? you made false statements and I said you were wrong...claiming ive been cocky about my verse when I think it's decent at best just makes you look like a retarded nutrider. how is rhyming backflip with gymnastics corny? it's like any other rhyme, lmao. how can you even consider yourself an mc with the shit you say...that rhyme is not close to being the same as rhyming cat and hat...cat and hat is a one syllable rhyme, young'n, while backflip and gymnastics is a two syllable rhyme. do u even know what the fuck you're saying? to top all that off, that rhyme was within a bar, i coulda even put it as "attack the whack with my athleticism, shit's basically gymnastics", since the actual rhyme was in the next bar. last but not least, you didn't even read my rhyme...it said "the only people who voted against ROCCY", not me...step it up.
and wtf u talkin about, "rich only children"....you uk ass muufuckaz get pretty gay.
-
and you jews are damn sensitive??u wanna carry on sterotyping??cus truth be told im above it...and callin u a nut hugger etc is extra typin for me so i'll leave that to you
one question??am i wrong are you a rich only child??..if not i apologize
i didnt like the bar...ive seen that two syllable used to death...backflip gymnastic madd clips sad prick gats click match stick
its like multis 101..i jus expected better because ive seen better from you..but hey if u think its hot..difference of opinion...keep it movin...dont cry..i just wont give an opinion next time..
-
Yup Bez won the battle as long as he agrees with the voter. Kinda funny how that works...
and bez u cant drop a gazillion bars against 16 apiece if u condensed it down it would have been better but i lost interest..sum good bars but sum equally bad the blockbuster bar standsw out as horrible
I can and I did though didnt I mate. Every line was ill. Why would I want to condense classic material down, if you aint got the patience to read it, then dont, who cares, not me. Not to sound funny now but you are the dude who rhymes go to war, hoe to floor, and shit in every verse you drop. Even your verses got nothing on like the 8 I have murdered NIoccy with.
-
and you know when i was 16-17 i rhymed a damn sight more complex
now i dont mind saying i write bars for raves...plus i got bored of ending every 2nd line in like_____....i prefer a more direct style and it works well for me,maybe not in text
and i'd dispute every bar being hot...but ONCE AGAIN thats my opinion...go in my threads and say my shits not complex...but you could never call it generic...you lot concentrate on multis and punchlines...i been there done that...now i work on my accenting alliteration and imagery etc
funny thing is the shit everyone used to jock aint flow as well to me as anything i drop nowadays
-
I dont know how anyone cud say any of my battle verse aint flowed. I read em and they flow precise. People just must be dumbasses really. They got flow, multis, wordplay, punches, personals, metas, everything that makes a good keystyle. Just having flow, doesnt make a keystyle rhyme. If that was the case then back in the day I would of won all my battles.
-
Not a big fan of internet battles and acapella written shit. But in my opinion - A lot of the written shit in this thread is just hard to read. Out of the 3 people i read on the front page id have to say 'sccitt' had the best stuff.
-
Not a big fan of internet battles and acapella written shit. But in my opinion - A lot of the written shit in this thread is just hard to read. Out of the 3 people i read on the front page id have to say 'sccitt' had the best stuff.
open your eyes
-
I dont know how anyone cud say any of my battle verse aint flowed. I read em and they flow precise. People just must be dumbasses really. They got flow, multis, wordplay, punches, personals, metas, everything that makes a good keystyle. Just having flow, doesnt make a keystyle rhyme. If that was the case then back in the day I would of won all my battles.
you mis-understand...im sayin MY old stuff isnt up to scratch with what i write now...but thats the shit every1 used to tell me flowed perfect..
and yeah i'll rhyme war with ward in a 3 syllable rhyme its called accenting..youll find people like eminem lil wayne etc do it alot..u may not be able to pick it up on text but i dont care...i stopped trying to write good "keystyle" along time ago...i jot bars on here and occasionally i'll drop a 4 bar or an 8 bar that i think i could use elsewhere...as long as when i say it the shit flows perfect im nice...your shit did have a lot of good aspects but from a neutral perspective it was too long and you were reachin on sum punches...the jew nose and pasteurize lines were both good examples
-
Not a big fan of internet battles and acapella written shit. But in my opinion - A lot of the written shit in this thread is just hard to read. Out of the 3 people i read on the front page id have to say 'sccitt' had the best stuff.
open your eyes
lmao...you're such a fucking idiot. why are you sucking your own dick so hard? so far, everyone in this thread has said my flow was better than yours, and i think my flow was alright, at best. does that mean im hating on myself? get help, cuz being cocky when you're this weak will really fuck your chances of ever improving,
-
and you jews are damn sensitive??u wanna carry on sterotyping??cus truth be told im above it...and callin u a nut hugger etc is extra typin for me so i'll leave that to you
one question??am i wrong are you a rich only child??..if not i apologize
i didnt like the bar...ive seen that two syllable used to death...backflip gymnastic madd clips sad prick gats click match stick
its like multis 101..i jus expected better because ive seen better from you..but hey if u think its hot..difference of opinion...keep it movin...dont cry..i just wont give an opinion next time..
yes...you're wrong.
and like I already said, i didn't think it was hot, i thought it was decent...are you payin attention?
-
and you jews are damn sensitive??u wanna carry on sterotyping??cus truth be told im above it...and callin u a nut hugger etc is extra typin for me so i'll leave that to you
one question??am i wrong are you a rich only child??..if not i apologize
i didnt like the bar...ive seen that two syllable used to death...backflip gymnastic madd clips sad prick gats click match stick
its like multis 101..i jus expected better because ive seen better from you..but hey if u think its hot..difference of opinion...keep it movin...dont cry..i just wont give an opinion next time..
yes...you're wrong.
and like I already said, i didn't think it was hot, i thought it was decent...are you payin attention?
not particularly 8)
-
bez...another thing you need to work on is connecting your bars so that they dont look like a bunch of random lines stuck together. anyone can go on rhymezone and put a bunch of rhymes together, but if the bars don't coincide with one another, it looks amatuerish. there's a reason everyone in this thread doesn't think your vereses are hot besides yourself...look into it instead of sucking your own dick, son.
-
Not a big fan of internet battles and acapella written shit. But in my opinion - A lot of the written shit in this thread is just hard to read. Out of the 3 people i read on the front page id have to say 'sccitt' had the best stuff.
open your eyes
get help, cuz being cocky when you're this weak will really fuck your chances of ever improving,
I'm not even gonna comment on this too much because you guys are taking this wayyy to personally. First of all - You want my opinion? (Prolly not ::) ) These internet text battles are HECKA gay. If you are new to rapping and are just trying to get your bars up or whatever then thats cool. But when you start taking it this serious.....lol ::)
Bez - All youre doing is trying to pull 'clever' metaphors and punchlines...when i read it i feel like you are overdoing it and trying to hard. To be honest you come off sub par. Sorry man not hating on you im just giving my opinion here.
And i still stick with my first post, in my opinion 'Sccitt' had the best written right there. Also - When i was reading your shit it got painful nearing the end, i think making it longer than everyone elses worked against you on that one.
And again - Not hating on anyone im just saying. Stop taking this shit so serious before i bust out some SUPER WHACK shit and start talking like im the next Lil Wayne...hah...you get it? Super Wha.. never mind.
-
wow i never knew keystyles were judged on what it would sound like as an audio... i been out of this shit too long good beef haha
-
it's like the higher that i glide the more clear shit becomes
you bitches need change more than street corner bums
muthafuckaz got no pride, like what a speech disorder does
that was nice... dont remember u being decent at best but shit was years ago n i was always drunk haha
-
As I said, the 'newbies' all say NIK was hotter. The vets are with me. I will take that. Cheers!
-
As I said, the 'newbies' all say NIK was hotter. The vets are with me. I will take that. Cheers!
which vets are with you? lmao. being delusional doesnt make your rhyming skill better.
-
im bored of owning you son
-
lol...that's what i thought. the "vets" are on your side. your imagination is on some other shit... i can tell you've been hangin around lil boys way too much, man.
-
lol...that's what i thought. the "vets" are on your side. your imagination is on some other shit... i can tell you've been hangin around lil boys way too much, man.
shouldnt you be touching Roccys crotch?
-
lol...that's what i thought. the "vets" are on your side. your imagination is on some other shit... i can tell you've been hangin around lil boys way too much, man.
-
lol...that's what i thought. the "vets" are on your side. your imagination is on some other shit... i can tell you've been hangin around lil boys way too much, man.
shouldnt you be touching Roccys crotch?
lol, still cant get over that crotch line huh? think about it before sleep? ::)
-
lol...that's what i thought. the "vets" are on your side. your imagination is on some other shit... i can tell you've been hangin around lil boys way too much, man.
shouldnt you be touching Roccys crotch?
lol, still cant get over that crotch line huh? think about it before sleep? ::)
get your hands off each other crotches before you reply to me
-
roccy>mdogg>bez
-
Roccy>MDogg>Bez>NIK
-
Roccy>MDogg
definitely.
-
where bez's anger began
-
Where bez's owning began
-
Where bez's owning began
also true....the owning of bez part 2, coming soon. 8)
-
Finally NIK agrees I owned him.
-
8) bez is bitch 8)
-
8) bez is bitch 8)
a child molesting bitch
-
8) bez is bitch 8)
a child molesting bitch
-
obvious the drama is deep seeded... scit droped like 16 bars and bez dropped like a 100... ya gotta keep it to a limit
lyrically it was very close, but since the bars dropped were so imbalanced i cant make a proper decision...
but def hot bars from both sides
-
Zzzzzzzzz
-
Zzzzzzzzz
dog... child molestation is dirty
-
does zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz means he is crying underneath his bed
-
and i dont pack clips...I pack fire in the ride
said you don't molest kids, yous a liar with no pride
it's like the higher that i glide the more clear shit becomes
you bitches need change more than street corner bums
muthafuckaz got no pride, like what a speech disorder does
u can't speak like foreign sluts or whores who love guys pourin' cum
and i'm talkin about bez, i know the quietest truth
you on the downlow and got an eye for the youth
it's alright, young'n, just try to be you
cuz only votes against roccy were the guys who you blew
-
and i dont pack clips...I pack fire in the ride
said you don't molest kids, yous a liar with no pride
it's like the higher that i glide the more clear shit becomes
you bitches need change more than street corner bums
muthafuckaz got no pride, like what a speech disorder does
u can't speak like foreign sluts or whores who love guys pourin' cum
and i'm talkin about bez, i know the quietest truth
you on the downlow and got an eye for the youth
it's alright, young'n, just try to be you
cuz only votes against roccy were the guys who you blew