West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on August 25, 2002, 01:56:02 AM
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Here my verse
watch me rip this tramp~his flow too damp~//
dunno how the fuck this kid became lightweight champ~//
~probably had a orgasm when you won that shit~//
when i had that shit and thought nothing of it~//(1)
u throwin a fit~like cattle wit bse this "beef crazy"~//
~u cant phase me~only reason i bit was cus im lazy~
~fuck even if i was u with out the 1st 2 letters of ya name u couldnt blaze me~//(2)
im goin all-out~like track 9~ on til the end of time~//{lol}{3}
~you will pay 4 ya crimes~mack will leave you desecrated~//
~body and head seperated~told wcc im x-rated~//
~like putting ya face in the printer~all u seein is a blind flash~//
~leave u thinkin bout leaving the game like dame dash~//
this script giving you a nightmare and im freddy krouger~//
wont have to worry bout claws but watch out 4 the luger~//{BANG BANG}
violence runs in my veins~i let it flow freely like water down drains~//
~and gareefa thought he had game~shit this aint even as hard as i thought~//
~calling gareefa "dope" is like calling wrestling a "sport"~//
only words left on tha list are burn and stealth~//
by now u realized like letting ya skin melt~battlin mack is bad 4 ya health~//
Explanations
1. I Had The Lighweight Belt But Gave It Up,As I Never Saw It As An Achievement
2.Gareefa without the first two letters is reefa
3.track 9 on til the end of time is called "all out"
Write Time
10 minutes
i think my confidence coming back,get at this soon
as always no beef gareefa
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Vote - Gareefa
Comments - Mack you shouldn't have bitten
PS - THIS VOTE STANDS, ITS 1 - 0 GAREEFA
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lol u funny,sum1 up m dogg and pete's battle,sooner he loses the better
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Vote - Gareefa
Comments - Mack you shouldn't have bitten
PS - THIS VOTE STANDS, ITS 1 - 0 GAREEFA
U trippin u know he can't have bitten when the words Gareefa mentioned were included. Where Gareefa at ?
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U trippin u know he can't have bitten when the words Gareefa mentioned were included. Where Gareefa at ?
It doesnt matter. Hes bitten before, he could do it again. He could have done it in that verse only with a few of the bars.
MY VOTE STILL STANDS
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Ayo that vote cant count, gareefa aint even posted his verse, to even of been looked at to be rated against macks to get a vote, that aint in the rules.. he aint even replied yet?
Whats with that?
INDECISIVE
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Shut the fuck up!
Defending a biter, maybe your one for defending them ;D
J/K
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MY VOTE STILL STANDS
The word "bitch vote" on a whole new level...
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Fa real, u know u can't do that. Mack bitin might have offended u more than others and that's ok and if u hate him for the rest of ur life that's ok but u cannot vote for somebody who ain't dropped his shit yet cuz it's simply ridiculous. Even Gareefa will definitely disagree with that cuz i know him as a fair opponent. And since u seem to hate Mack for the reason of not havin been fair a vote of that kind seems kinda hypocritical to me. If u don't want bitas to get feedback for their shit, ignore it but don't expect to be taken serious actin like that. Whatever, neither Mack nor Gareefa will count that vote
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Shut the fuck up!
Defending a biter, maybe your one for defending them ;D
J/K
Can you see my point? or not?
INDECISIVE ;D
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Vote - Gareefa
Comments - Mack you shouldn't have bitten
PS - THIS VOTE STANDS, ITS 1 - 0 GAREEFA
Comments - Shut the fuck up, your vote doesnt count.. I dont give a shit.. Jus pull your finger out of your ass and stop takin this all so seriously.. So he bitten.. Coz then that automaticlly means hes bitten every verse and will bite every verse hes going to write.. Yeah coz that makes soo much sense (Sarcasim)
Sorry i aint replyed yet mack..
this is my check in.. Ima keystyle..
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this sum funny shit,logic pulls this bitch shit,then go's mad when i fuck around wit my vote
kid,right now u the reason im still posting here
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Ahhh Fuck You
Oh look at me I have the lightweight title, I must be so good even though I have no good punchlines or wordplay at all. <Sarcasm!>
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this is a ten-punch-battle, hittin so hard i make mack's-brain-rattle/
he hittin so soft its like being trampled like a heard of no cattle/
i dismantal emcee's brains and take they knowladge/
then drain they blood by slitting the jugular vien/
but you knowladge and blood aint shit/you need to change your college/
cause they teach that its normal to get high off one hit/
they teach that wack emcees like you will make it/
fuck mack you won't even make orgasim and the problem wit rap is.. you cant fake it/
here ya go take it; your perception of me/
you suffered an unsual conception indeed, what you need is to ask/
the next question: how the fuck you still rhymin'?/
cause the impression that i get is that you aint got no timing/
but with time will burn out like a cigarette/
and im like a nightmare cause i kill emcees with more stealth than a silhouette/
makevelithadon vs gareefa, a battle title you'll never forget but always regret/
im a lightweight champ and your a newbie and/
i desercrate you cause my rhymes are iller than tramps in the winter/
cause i spit rhymes like an ink jet printer/
gareefa gon cut this rhyme short/
to me, killin emcees and commit crime is jus a sport/
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Logic, i dont wanna start shit of have beef with u.. Im jus sayin.. Vote fairly..
Chill n dont take shit seriously..
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VOTE: Gareefa
Reason: the flow was dope, and i liked the wordplay..
Mack, yours was tight, but like emcees say, make the two first lines tight, and people will like the whole thing.. yours was dope, but gareefa took this one..
mack.. peace man
gareefa.. you got the upper hand! lol i can ryhme!! hehe
Peace -- Indecisive! Elite member for life bitches!
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I ain't read it yet... so I ain't voting... but I will say it's 1-0 Gareefa... Logic... claim the fuck down... damn people are getting out of hand.
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makevelithadon vs gareefa, a battle title you'll never forget but always regret
Nigga whut ?? What u mean, I'm tryin hard to get it but i don't know what that had to do with mack except 4 that he voted on our battle
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Gareefa:
Good flow, sum of the rhymes were even better than Mack's only there weren't too many punchlines. Props for not usin extremly obvious bitin-related punchlines, but puns were the one thing ur verse lacked a bit.
Mack:
That was a typical Mack verse, not one of ur best but still good, sum nice punchlines and a complex structure
After all I gotta give this to Mack even though it's another DAMN close one. I'd give both of ur verses about a 4.5/5, the main reason Mack gets this is becuz of his wordplay.
VOTE = Mack
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I read the both verses carefully, not kaz i was bored, bekaz of the matter GAREEFA used to be in my kru, so I had to pay a little more attention, MACK, he always got heat and always hype, his verse was way much better than GAREEFA...
GAREEFA took wit eaze...so did'nt kame much heat..
VOTE- MACK
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Vote - Gareefa
Mack, His Verse Wasn't As Good As They Are...
Gareefa, Had Good Flow And Shit...
Peace, No Beef Ya'll
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2-2 up
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good flow both..but i'd have to go with mack cause of the disses he did..really stood out..peace
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3-2 mo votes yall
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my vote goes to Mack, even tho gareefa came hard at the start, i felt mack's punches were more hard hittin
vote-mAK