West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on May 06, 2002, 01:27:35 AM
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aight homie, u up next lol
15 bars max, first to 5 3 KO verses due monday evening/night
peace
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*Moved To The Battle Board*
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yo dawg, I wont make it by tonight, can I get a extension? til tuesday? I got a tight schedule. sorry
holla
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Same Here, I'm Real Busy.
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Written Quickly:
It Annoys Me When Wack Fucks Like You CLAIM-they-DOPE ~
When I Rap The Mic Cord Round Your Throat I AIM-to-CHOKE ~
SAME-as-ROPE, Like Jack The Ripper Strangling ALL-my-VICTIMS ~
Y'all Want Evil Rhymes? Shit My Spits Are In The HALL-of-SINS ~
Illict, Your Making More Enemies Then Roccy At WEIGHT-LOSS ~
When I Step Into The Room It Aint No DEBATE-whos-BOSS ~
Seven BARS-ON And Your Too FAR-GONE, Just QUIT-BITCH ~
Beating On Illicit I HIT-a-SNITCH, Fuck I SHIT-on-ya-CLIQUE ~
Big Words? These 10 Bars Are My PERPLEXED-OPERATION ~
With The Assault Case Over, Murder Is The NEXT-INVESTIGATION ~
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damn, I'm too late, I'ma spit anyway, regard it if you like
It's simple, I bust back and fuckin slap those dimples til u acknowledge the principle/
mess wit me is a step you dont take end up a cripple, lyrically bashed and ripped you/
jus like your wack ass english football team u suck at what you do/
homie you coulnt be ill if I wrote ya rhymes for you/
fuck writin in CAPS if ya rhymes still wack, I'm slick to hit ya quick better catch me on Kodak/
cant stand a chance all eyez on me and bitch you clearly know that/
inspired by rap, but irritated by your style/
homie must be bitin cuz it sounds like mine/
actin boss in every thread threatening peops with weak shots/
board FBI or what? moderatin and tradin rhymes for cocks/
quick shit, votes yall
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well damn yall. U guyz mussa been REALLY into this one *sarcasm* lol. j/k.
aiight...
Logic, had sum nice punches, pretty good multis (although sum were kinda funny soundin lol) Pretty simple shit, compared to what i normally see from u. But u said it was jus sum quik shit, so for that...it was a tight verse.
Illicit, like logic ive seen better from u too. U had tha harder punches of tha 2 verses. But Logic came wit a bit better flow, and was slightly more creative. U said u jus wrote yur shit up quik also...so i take that into account as well as for logics.
pretty close battle yall...
vote=Logic
peace
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I vote for Logic, his flow was more structured and his multis were pretty tight too.
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Thanks For Voting Scribe & ToNe1904.
2-0.... More Votes Please.
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well ive seen better from u.im not saying tht this is bad.
ill flow and impressive punchlines.
the overall consistency in the bars where as expected.
well written rhyme schemes.seriously awesome rhyme scheeme i guess.
memorable bars:
When I Rap The Mic Cord Round Your Throat I AIM-to-CHOKE ~
SAME-as-ROPE, Like Jack The Ripper Strangling ALL-my-VICTIMS ~
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pretty average shit.
would have fared better if the bars consistency was maintained.ur punchline were dope .if u had put in a little more effort in making ur ryme flow better it would have helped.
otherwise neat.but not the best from you.
memorable bars:
fuck writin in CAPS if ya rhymes still wack, I'm slick to hit ya quick better catch me on Kodak/
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VOTE=LOGIC
PZ
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3-0 KO....
Win For Logic.....
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yeh, I aint gonna say good battle cuz we both spit quickly and not with full capability. so we'll have a rematch soon and make it a tight one,
congrats.
peace
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well damn yall. U guyz mussa been REALLY into this one *sarcasm* lol. j/k.
aiight...
Logic, had sum nice punches, pretty good multis (although sum were kinda funny soundin lol) Pretty simple shit, compared to what i normally see from u. But u said it was jus sum quik shit, so for that...it was a tight verse.
Illicit, like logic ive seen better from u too. U had tha harder punches of tha 2 verses. But Logic came wit a bit better flow, and was slightly more creative. U said u jus wrote yur shit up quik also...so i take that into account as well as for logics.
pretty close battle yall...
vote=Logic
peace
i agree...what the hell happened here..lol
my vote = logic