West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: A.em on November 28, 2002, 12:46:03 AM
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Alright, it took some time (shi.tty PC) but here's the thread. Rules as follows -
- Max of 20 bars, nobody wants to read a friggin essay
- No wackness.
Let me know you peeped this 'n' I'll spit 1st.
Peace
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aight homie i peeped ya so whenever ur ready spit it
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cool, this go be interesting.
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aight i'll spit I'M tired of waitin for this cat
IF U DIDNT WANT TO BATTLE U COULDA SAID NO/
FUCK IT I'LL SPIT FIRST AND GO/
A.em GOT LOST, SCARED OR JUS WONT SHOW/
I JUST DONT KNOW/
I JUST DONT GET IT/
A.em SPIT FIRST, YEAH DAWG U SAID IT/
BUT I'M TIRED OF THE WAIT/
HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE/
ITS LIKE U SPIT, MISSED AND POSTED BLANK/
YEAH I DONT SEE U AND PROLLY NEVER WILL/
U ON A BOTTOM LEVEL NOT UP ON MY SKILL/
WHAT U CANT THINK OF NUTHIN TO POST/
OR U ALREADY DID AND ITS INVISILBE LIKE A GHOST/
IF U NEED SOME HELP SHIT I CAN BE UR COACH/
COLLAB AGAINST MY SELF BUT FUCK IT MIGHT FINALLY GET A POST!!!!
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hey, no doubt this was a nice rhyme scheme. really. but I think this is more something I'd use as a warm-up, try revoking it lol. cuz if he uses some serious punchlines you out bro. jus some advice. I wasnt knockin your shit, it was good just not for a serious battle.
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lol goddamn a no show!! well fuck it a.em ever come back everybody tell him hes a bitch aight