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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on December 11, 2002, 11:59:04 AM
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oh, I've been waitin fah this shit for months. I prolly wont prevail but this is the most fun dawg, battlin you. and I cant wait for my rematch wit TimeLock, but more on that later ;)
lets make it 16 bars. that way we can bring some heat.
deadline: sunday, cuz I dunno if you still busy or ready yet, if you cant make it by then holla homeboy, its all gravy.
3=KO, first to 5. crews can vote, I trust cloud 9 and I out noone out of Melanin will vote on it anyway lol.
you cool wit dat?
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checkin in baby boy ;)
oh yah, about tha crewz votin...hmm...holla at me bout that aiight?
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oh aight, well whatever dawg, jus say how you want it, I'm aight wit it.
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oh I hope so much this shit is gonna be competitive enough lol.
So now you "Cloud 9", wanna be like God and rule the "sky"//
but ya mouth's dry, ain't spit a decent verse since KINGZ died//
faggot MC, lackin skillz got his butt-bent-back//
watch this blood-get-capped, wit lyrical venom, I crunch-this-cat//
throwin punchlines means for you callin up Tech to help you write-um//
but he ain't able to spit himself so you search for more of my rhymes to bite-frum//
watch ToNe runnin in red-chucks wit blue laces and pink-rags//#1
gettin beat by his best-buds cuz his punches hit hard as lint-jabs//
built up a crew, cravin-fah-rep, cuz u think ur labeled-a-vet//
fuckin wit Cee, my "blood" runnin so hot, jus watch me "flamin"-ya-set//#2
shoulda waited til u beat Pr1mo so I could be claimin-that-belt//
I for once been slayin-the-"best" so now u hatin-ya-self//
keep askin ya bout gettin a mic, but u kept sayin ur busy-wit-shit//#3
tho it's obvious you can't spit wit herpes on crispy-dick-lips//
watch yo step when u reply itz gittin foggy when I say-my-rhymes//
handle my wit if u can but if can't dont waste-my-time//
(Jayo Felony in the backround.......)
BITCH!!!....and you jus lost!
lol no disrespect, its neva personal.
explanations: 1# ToNe's hangin wit bloods, or however he's connected wit em, I dont know exactly, though I abbreviated a lil enclosing blue and pink, which arent actual color. but its jus a battle so dont get mad homeboy
2# "flamin" ya set is meant to mean I'll be brunin up cloud 9, and also flamin is a blood term for the color red, I suppose I put that well enough? lol
3# lol me n him wanted to collab once, well I hope he still is interested, but he always kept sayin he busy or lazy and never got himself a mic so there....you get the rest.
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Whatta fool u musta-been, cuz once-again yah pullin stuntz-tah-win only tah bust-yah-chin/
Lyrikal 'Daredevil', divin headfirst-into-shit, "9" sprayz on yah post, a dead-verse-that-yah-spit/
Lead-burstz-thru-yah-lipz, bulletholez to yah dome, and a RED-hearse-for-yah-BITCH!/
Jus quit...shit...im copyrightin-mah-style, "longwinded" spits got yah flea-BITIN-fah-'milez', Im at tha top-'rewritin-profilez'/ (1)
Cuz i 'define-who-u-are', backtrack on thiz shit like im rewindin-yah-barz/
Check tha history, 4-losses-tah-ToNe, itz like i 'poured-hot-sauce-on-bonez' tha way I 'burned-yah-frame'/
Tried n tried tah earn-yah-fame, but beatin yah azz 4 timez tha only way i learned-yah-name/
Why even try tah test? Jus stick tah wha u do best, while im rippin-yah-click, you ridin Infinitez-dick!/
Already knew, before we started that yah aint had-a-chance, mah spitz are like yah biggest fear, you faint-at-a-glance/ (2)
Musta got my paint-on-yah-pantz, cuz yah tryna "wear-mah-stripes"/
Spittin wit multiz when yah bark, i should "Beware-of-BITES"/
It aint even fair-we-fight, i shouldnt be pickin-on-you, Illicit then Pr1mo, im str8 rippin-yah-crew like Ese'z behind barz cuz im stickin-thiz-foo!/
And tha only way u could "spit tha shit i kick" iz if u lickin-mah-shoez/
Like tha Mississippi River in rainy season, dogg, mah "flowz-will-rise", callin me out fah battle and a K.O.'s-yur-prize/
If i had 2 more aliases to sign up wit, youd jus be O-and-5!/ (3)
explainationz:
(1) Illicit dont usually spit wit multiz
(2) Check his comment before hiz spit
(3) Ive had 3 namez, thiz is one of 5 battlez Illicit iz doin.
peace homeboy, u know tha deal...neva beef ;)
good shit...man
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i agree kill, he could have beaten me with that verse. this battle was close as fuck. Daygo was hittin up them multi's. but then came illicit with some dope lines. i honestly read each of your verses over 2 times. and in conculsion im gonna have to say Daygostylz. i feel the reason i picked him is because i like his style better. to me its more appealing and i feel he put the better battle verse up. But dont get me wrong ilicit i read your shit all the time and respect it. but i just feel that Daygostylz had you on this one.
vote= daygostylz
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Vote: DayGoStylez
Reason: Right ima be straight up coz i always am, and i believe that Tone took this one, coz i thought both raps were tight but the multi he had was outstandin' and although i thought Illcit's was more well structured nd flowed betta, i thought lyrically tone took this!
Ayo could people vote on my batle gainst Timelock! Please!
Ind3cisiv3
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VOTE = ILLICIT
In most battles Tone would've beaten Illicit, I'm still pretty sure, but in this one Illicit really came hotter than I'd ever saw him comin before plus ToNe spit on Tone average level (= very dope), but it was kinda hard to flow to me, even though my own style's kinda similiar. Illicit's great flow was what basically made the difference, plus these lines were really hard-hittin:
built up a crew, cravin-fah-rep, cuz u think ur labeled-a-vet//
fuckin wit Cee, my "blood" runnin so hot, jus watch me "flamin"-ya-set//#2
shoulda waited til u beat Pr1mo so I could be claimin-that-belt//
I for once been slayin-the-"best" so now u
hatin-ya-self//
Props to both of y'all, Illicit this was by very far the best of your 3 verses yet, if you had come up with one of the others Tone would've killed you...peace
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CeeRide:
lines i liked-
So now you "Cloud 9", wanna be like God and rule the "sky"//
but ya mouth's dry, ain't spit a decent verse since KINGZ died//
built up a crew, cravin-fah-rep, cuz u think ur labeled-a-vet//
fuckin wit Cee, my "blood" runnin so hot, jus watch me "flamin"-ya-set//
Tone:-
i liked his whole verse but let me pick out some highlights
Whatta fool u musta-been, cuz once-again yah pullin stuntz-tah-win only tah bust-yah-chin/
Lyrikal 'Daredevil', divin headfirst-into-shit, "9" sprayz on yah post, a dead-verse-that-yah-spit/
Lead-burstz-thru-yah-lipz, bulletholez to yah dome, and a RED-hearse-for-yah-BITCH!/
Cuz i 'define-who-u-are', backtrack on thiz shit like im rewindin-yah-barz/
Check tha history, 4-losses-tah-ToNe, itz like i 'poured-hot-sauce-on-bonez' tha way I 'burned-yah-frame'/
Tried n tried tah earn-yah-fame, but beatin yah azz 4 timez tha only way i learned-yah-name/
Why even try tah test? Jus stick tah wha u do best, while im rippin-yah-click, you ridin Infinitez-dick!/
Musta got my paint-on-yah-pantz, cuz yah tryna "wear-mah-stripes"/
Spittin wit multiz when yah bark, i should "Beware-of-BITES"/
And tha only way u could "spit tha shit i kick" iz if u lickin-mah-shoez/
Like tha Mississippi River in rainy season, dogg, mah "flowz-will-rise", callin me out fah battle and a K.O.'s-yur-prize/
If i had 2 more aliases to sign up wit, youd jus be O-and-5!/
my conclusion:
Tone took this, his shit was just more superior
peace
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Shit........fuck, this is hard to vote on. Illicit's spit was really better than his last ones (u would've definitely beaten assassin with thatv dawg
illicit came hard in this match....wouldve torn assassin up, but so did tone...both came hard, with multis ( includin illicit ), but like kill said it was hard to flow to tones....maybe just me...but i think illicit took this one...not close to vote on tho, but props to both =)
peace
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both rhymes were pretty even in my opinion but DayGoStyLz had some "oh damn lines"
Check tha history, 4-losses-tah-ToNe, itz like i 'poured-hot-sauce-on-bonez' tha way I 'burned-yah-frame'/
Tried n tried tah earn-yah-fame, but beatin yah azz 4 timez tha only way i learned-yah-name/
Oh Damn....
vote = daygostylz
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damn, 4-2...
more votes yall, this shit is pretty close.
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Nice. I liked this battle. I see one difference. With DayGoStyLZ, his rhyming about beating Illicit in the past. Nice lines and all, but give me some shit that will make me believer you can beat him now. Illicit had good punches, and kept his shit current. It had a more fresh felling, and was just more nicer to read.
vote=Illicit
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4-3 exciting dawg. itz gettin hot in herre
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Nice. I liked this battle. I see one difference. With DayGoStyLZ, his rhyming about beating Illicit in the past.
lol u alwayz hate on that shit...no better way to show dominance, then to bring up past domination. ;) U muss still be bitter...ToNe1904~2 blowoutz....M-Dogg~1 close match. ;D
Anywayz, keep votin yall....good shit goin here.
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aight fuck yall then lol dont vote, forget it. at least it dont mean i lost, so until one of yall lazy crackheadz get off yall asses n vote this shit jus go stay here ;D
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if nobody votes, ill do it tomorrow
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if nobody votes, ill do it tomorrow
tomorrow ay? mhhmhh
lol come on yall
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Fav Illicit Lines...
throwin punchlines means for you callin up Tech to help you write-um//
but he ain't able to spit himself so you search for more of my rhymes to bite-frum//
built up a crew, cravin-fah-rep, cuz u think ur labeled-a-vet//
fuckin wit Cee, my "blood" runnin so hot, jus watch me "flamin"-ya-set//
shoulda waited til u beat Pr1mo so I could be claimin-that-belt//
I for once been slayin-the-"best" so now u hatin-ya-self//
Fav Tone LinesWhatta fool u musta-been, cuz once-again yah pullin stuntz-tah-win only tah bust-yah-chin/
Check tha history, 4-losses-tah-ToNe, itz like i 'poured-hot-sauce-on-bonez' tha way I 'burned-yah-frame'/
Tried n tried tah earn-yah-fame, but beatin yah azz 4 timez tha only way i learned-yah-name/
Already knew, before we started that yah aint had-a-chance, mah spitz are like yah biggest fear, you faint-at-a-glance/
And tha only way u could "spit tha shit i kick" iz if u lickin-mah-shoez/
Like tha Mississippi River in rainy season, dogg, mah "flowz-will-rise", callin me out fah battle and a K.O.'s-yur-prize/
tone came harder with the personals and punches imo... illicit made a huge misstake when looking down on himself before the battle started, gave a free point to tone just like that...
illicit is starting improving with his multis, but tone is one of the wcc pioneers of multis....
even though tone had the better punches, illicit had the better flow... but tone took this battle...
vote: Tone
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5-3 even though I lost, I'm totally cool with the outcome of this, thanks ToNe, imo our best battle yet. maybe next time (battle no. 6 comin up ). thanks for votin Bo,
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5-3 even though I lost, I'm totally cool with the outcome of this, thanks ToNe, imo our best battle yet. maybe next time (battle no. 6 comin up ). thanks for votin Bo,
good shit homie. U had me sweatin like hooker in church on thiz one lol.
Thankz tah tha voters for hittin us on on thiz shit....
peace