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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: SkillZ on April 23, 2003, 10:29:48 PM

Title: Rate This
Post by: SkillZ on April 23, 2003, 10:29:48 PM
Make'n it hard to "think out side the box" when i got you 'locked-caskets'/-
You'll be 'foreva neva flow'n', when i steal yur 'lungs-out-ya-basket'/-
Like 'blind children' attempting to dress, its use less trying-to-'match'-this/-
Mantic, the "act of foretelling future event", an still couldnt catch-this /-
Inject'n words through yur skin so you 'feelin me', with yur chest-split/-
Like 'cheap whores' mantic always 'suck' n 'swallow', but just "cant-spit"/-
Never come'n wit "hard lines", but always 'cum'n' play'n wit a mans-dick/-
Mantic aint gotta tell us how 'ill he is', we already know this "mans-sick"/-
Like go'n from 'top 2 bottom' in bed i got this fag mix'd n his 'plans-flip'd'/-
You aint gotta ask 'feeling me?', take'n serious an say'n his 'hand-slip'd'/-
Like a "got milk add", you always find a 'white ring' round this 'mans-lips'/-
This battle like "fighting in the dark", cause mantic never 'landin-hits'/-
Title: Re:Rate This
Post by: NewJack on April 23, 2003, 10:53:51 PM
Like 'cheap whores' mantic always 'suck' n 'swallow', but just "cant-spit"/-

I especially liked that line.. verse was good overall, though I am not sure who Mantic is..
Title: Re:Rate This
Post by: MelFunk on April 23, 2003, 11:00:39 PM
Yeah.. who the fuck is mantic... is this a subliminal diss!
Title: Re:Rate This
Post by: SkillZ on April 23, 2003, 11:43:07 PM
Its some one i batte'd on holla front
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Post by: Inspectah on April 24, 2003, 03:03:28 AM
Whoever this mantic was, i liked the verse, because it flowed well, and the overall ryhming was tight, keep it up repping the elite..

Title: Re:Rate This
Post by: Reef on April 24, 2003, 03:37:40 PM
Whoever this mantic was, i liked the verse, because it flowed well, and the overall ryhming was tight, keep it up repping the elite..


Title: Re:Rate This
Post by: Immortal on April 25, 2003, 11:54:13 PM
good flow, and a tight verse.keep it up