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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: ·SiNiStEr· on October 18, 2003, 11:00:52 AM

Title: ~:..Day of Ages..:~
Post by: ·SiNiStEr· on October 18, 2003, 11:00:52 AM
~We have reached a day-of-ages where ancient-mages play-wit-sages//
~Mah ragin-pages have liability to contrain militant-me and my ability//
~A place where agility overcomes black-tears that go back-years//
~Where gats-gear to combat-fear in LA streetz where blacks-steer//
~Heaven was ya home and u wanted to sat-here, now u aint hearin it like bad-ears//
~We have reached a day of ages where arguments tend to start-truents//
~Absence of the mind, but there art-fluents and results in a tart-nuisance//
~Everyone has the capability as long as they head's-in-it, n put people in med-clinics//
~The site has turned to dead-critics, who disagree when we say.. let the lead-finish//
~I've read-cynics, itz like they offsping-of-satan, numba 1 omniscent king-of-hatin//
~Bringin-statesmen to back my insinuations.. to offer advice, when you stuck in-situations//
~Took yall long enough to see the sin-you-facin...
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Just a lil freestyle.. I was bored.. this is actually my first key so feedback welcome.. holla back
Title: Re:~:..Day of Ages..:~
Post by: bez on October 18, 2003, 11:29:05 AM
very dope shit homie
Title: Re:~:..Day of Ages..:~
Post by: M Dogg™ on October 18, 2003, 02:49:42 PM
you've keyed before... or you mean first key back. Oh well... that was very nice... welcome back. DayGo, the band is getting back together.
Sin... nice flow, good muilts, rhyme scheme, a complete key. Peace.
Title: Re:~:..Day of Ages..:~
Post by: Reef on October 18, 2003, 04:11:59 PM
Dope man.. Like to see alot more of that kinda shit..
Title: Re:~:..Day of Ages..:~
Post by: ·SiNiStEr· on October 18, 2003, 04:19:05 PM
its comin reefa..

thanks yall who dropped a lil feedback..
ima drop one tomorrow..
Title: Re:~:..Day of Ages..:~
Post by: T.J. on October 18, 2003, 11:39:09 PM
 ;D