Author Topic: ~BlaDeZ OF IllneSs (10 Bar of SicCneSs) ~ (Read 250 times)

LP · « **on:** September 06, 2003, 11:03:16 AM »

…Swordsman Fast-wit-Knives..Slashin and Swingin till they Gash-ya-Side..
It’s a Fact-of-Life..if u don’t Posses the Talent! than don’t Smash-wit-Knights!!
…We Retract-ya-Rights..wit Strapped Grenades..that’ll Crack-ya-Frame..
One man Tried to Slap-the-Canes..so I Flashed-his-Brains..wit the Dash-of-Blades!!
…I’m Not Concerned-wit-Guns..i’ll Rather Earn-mah-Fun..wit Tips-of-Swords..
Cliques-get-Gorged..Might get Split-in-Fours..why’ll ‘Swipin-ya-Faith’! Lp can ‘Hit-ya-Lord’!!
…Guns Kill! But mah Duns Will! Send-ya-Grievin..just Look me in the Eyes and Give-a-Reason..
for Lp to Manage ya ‘Breath Control’! and have ya *Lungs*! ‘Wish-for-Breathin’!!
…Fist-is-Bleedin! From Grippin the Sword Handle-to-Hard! Get ya Crew!! I’ll Dismantle-ya-Gaurds..
and the ‘Friction-of-the-Blade’! will leave ya ‘Blood-on-Fire’! like Puttin ‘Candles-on-Heats’!!
…Despite Reactions!! I’m Bringin Twice-the-Action!! Wit Swords-that-Puncture! But the Nines-a-Clashin..
Fight-for-Passion..Mah Knives-will-Gash’em!! and make u Use ur ‘Speech-on-Paper! Like I put his ‘Life-in-Captions’!!
...Brains Smacked-and-Chewed...Sword is the Biggest 'Guy Swatter'! and they leave u 'Splat-and-Spewed'..
Wrap-u-Dudes..when i Snap-the-Tools..give u a 'Break-for-Next'(Necks)! when i'm leavin 'Throats Cracked-in-Two'..
...Make an Ass-of-You! as i'm Liftin-the-Sword..Blade So Deep 'Under-ya-Flesh'! i'm 'Rippin-ya-Pores'!!
'Breakin-thru-Skin'! Lp's Shiftin-Ya-Sores'..Enemies Neva 'Feelin-the-Pain'! til they 'Hittin-the-Floor'!!
...Put Minds-in-Submission!! Take some Advice-and-Listen..when the Wise-is-Spittin...Rise-at-Attention..
Now that Knives-is-Grippen’d...i’m Slicin Tensions..LP ‘Clockin-ya-Life’! and ya ‘Time-has-Endend’!!
…a Prize-for-Pensions..mah Prime-has-Lifted..but when I Leave! Some Guys-is-Bitchin..so I Write-a-Sentence..
and Minds-get-Christened..Than mah Lifes-is-Missin!! Cuz LP ‘Takin-Out-Everyone’ like ‘Group Suicide Victims’!!

bez · « **Reply #1 on:** September 06, 2003, 10:12:48 PM »

fucking amazing, you have the capablity to become one of the best rhymes on wcc if you keeping droppin verses and battle verses like you recently have, fucking talented.

Code Blue · « **Reply #2 on:** September 06, 2003, 11:17:38 PM »

That was sicc f'sho.

|JEM|ILL| · « **Reply #3 on:** September 07, 2003, 08:10:06 AM »

hmm...I liked... Watch the menotonous concept though...dope multies, but in a topical you CAN devert your attention to the concept more, it makes it a better read then just rhyme scheming...