a brighter day....

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

It began with a smile, grew wit a kiss
here we go again
Only tears could result from this
And I was right
another nut case, I'm glad I nutted on her face
I hated her, I hated myself because of her
actually, I don't hate her, I don't blame her
I blame myself, I let it happen
It's nathan..
..don't say that, it's something.. learn from it!
fuck that..
..no, fuck you! something good can come from it!
pour me another cup, I gotta drain my problems
..but this cup aint gonna solve it!
it doesn't matter, at least I could sleep at night
at least I could stop this fight..
..the fight with who?
the fight with you!
..but i'll be back in ure dreams..
there he creeps as the great one sleeps
man...............................................
this temporary high is takin over me
It's to the point where I tweak soberly..
backstabbed too many times, lord help me god
zilla done lost it, please look over rod..
I'm so lame though, why am I talkin about love?
I don't need no love.. I need to connect with the one above!
high outta my mind, these horoscopes supposodly describe life
but not mine..
I'm just happy lookin down at ocean's water
but it's only an illusion when I look harder
because this bottle of vodka is so confusing
it's like im on the beach, relaxed, it's so soothing
they say I don't belong to this shit, I need peace
but in the bay it's expected to love the streets
and I love these streets, but I hate that bitch!
she made me die inside, ain't that a bitch?
they say action is stronger than words
I don't expect to win an oscar at the academy awards
but let me act like me and you never occured
to even think about you after this rhyme is obsurd
truth is, she ain't shit, she didn't better me
but I still find myself fiending for that energy
I guess she made me realize what it's like
you know..
that feeling you you get when you think alike
the sweet part of the opposite gender
love kills, that's real, I guess I'm tender..
but let me be soft if it's for the better
I seem innocent compared to this excuse for a human being
she could be lucifer, came to earth for sight-seeing
never spend money on a tramp, I rather spend my night awake
trees & swishers with a lighter, burn my life away
and hopefully wake up to a brighter day....

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I know you probably are gunna think I'm just saying this because I dislike you or some shit, but that shit was straight weaksauce man...I'm sorry, but I think you can probably do a lot better than this...hopefully.

[eKardz]

I know you probably are gunna think I'm just saying this because I dislike you or some shit, but that shit was straight weaksauce man...I'm sorry, but I think you can probably do a lot better than this...hopefully.

fuckin hater.

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

I know you probably are gunna think I'm just saying this because I dislike you or some shit, but that shit was straight weaksauce man...I'm sorry, but I think you can probably do a lot better than this...hopefully.

It ain't like I'm doing this for keystyling measures, I spit nothing but the truth and everything I do spit has happened to me....I don't just ramble on about nothing, you don't grasp what I'm saying in the rhymes, it doesn't soak in for you like it would for somebody who's been through some shit similar, so it's "weaksauce" no matter what....battling is a different story.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

LOL. I simply didn't like it...Don't take it to the heart. You dont have to be Tony Montana to enjoy Scarface. Stop with that "I'm hardcore" bullshit, I'll shit all over that...PeACe

[eKardz]

LOL. I simply didn't like it...Don't take it to the heart. You dont have to be Tony Montana to enjoy Scarface. Stop with that "I'm hardcore" bullshit, I'll shit all over that...PeACe

get off his nuts

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

LOL. I simply didn't like it...Don't take it to the heart. You dont have to be Tony Montana to enjoy Scarface. Stop with that "I'm hardcore" bullshit, I'll shit all over that...PeACe

get off his nuts

I'm not on his nuts...LOL. Do you want all the replies to be "oh, that was great"...? It's an honest opinion. It seems like you're the one on my nuts for it...PeACe

[TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96']

I know you probably are gunna think I'm just saying this because I dislike you or some shit, but that shit was straight weaksauce man...I'm sorry, but I think you can probably do a lot better than this...hopefully.

fuckin hater.

No way man.. Scitt has every right to his opinion... he's just keepin it real that's how he feels.

[TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96']

Rod,

That was a great keystyle man.  The reason why I say it's a great keystyle is because you were expressing a wide range of emotion on this piece, it's displaying a thought process through rhyme.

Check this out... your verse made me think of a quote from the HBO Prison series Oz.  At the end of one of the episodes about shanks used in prison, the narrator says....

Episode: "Cuts Like A Knife"

"The worst stab wound is the stab to the heart.  Because even if you live the stab wound leaves a scar.  Ofcourse, it's the scar that you can be most proud of, everyday of your life.  Because for that moment, someone made your heart beat faster!"

^^^I love that line.