APOLLO CRISS- MYSTERY MAN (Track for Demo)

[A. Criss]

wuts good people?

this is 1 of 4 tracks i'm working on for my demo. hope u guys can give it a listen and let me know wut u think.

here's the link:
www.soundclick.com/apollocrissdemo


LYRICS:

have u ever heard of a murderous flow so seductive?
pulled in deep. so sweet yet so destructive.
once combusted, exhales deadly fumes.
consumes listeners forced to their doom.
it's strange how the danger persuades u.
with no license, still drivin' u crazy.
enslaves u in a second. once the record bumps.
the music plays. the bass thumps thru the trunk.
so they all get sucked in the zone.
thrown off they game even if it's James, LeBron.
oh no way to keep the volume low.
prone to blast the flow until the speakers blow.
cause they can't believe how hard the track hits.
they can't resist but to shake their asses.
by the masses, they gather, act jurassic.
the fact is they just witnessed a classic.


Watch out! he's coming...
Who's that? (he's gunnin' wit' a mystery plan. he's a mystery man.)
What now? (start running...)
Where to? (no matter, he will find u. look out behind u.)
Oh no! he spot u, got u.
flow so hot, u feel he shot u.
stand wit' a look so stunned.
simply done wit' the flip of his tongue.


i refuse to talk nonsense and just look pretty.
don't want 2 be known like another Diddy.
and simply dance, rap a verse and look cute.
if i did, i'd record my album on mute.
and save myself from the embarassment.
but my shit rips out they clothes, i'm accused of sexual harassment.
i tell u boy, u can't beat these raps.
cause these raps, they carry more heat than Shaq.
it's deep in tact with me. my zone's unreachable...
flow's untouchable... and got them wantin' mo'.
make them itch, begging please for da next one.
somehow this pleases them more than sex.
it's complex, but Busta Rhymes said it best.
get the groove goin' and just break ya necks.
they press play, they're impressed and seem to embrace.
fuck ur taste i just want to collect my checks.


Watch out! he's coming...
Who's that? (he's gunnin' wit' a mystery plan. he's a mystery man.)
What now? (start running...)
Where to? (no matter, he will find u. look out behind u.)
Oh no! he spot u, got u.
flow so hot, u feel he shot u.
stand wit' a look so stunned.
simply done wit' the flip of his tongue.

[UpstateboiBeats]

whatup apollo...im givin it a listen... aight.  Like, u dont have any special sound.  U're not bringing nothing to the game that no1 ever heard.  DOn't get me wrong, the song is good....just not special.  Might be just this track though....not gonna lie, best i've heard coming out of canada...i'd liek to hear more to see if u come with something for real...hit me up with some more stuff if u got it

[A. Criss]

thnx for the "best out of canada" comment.

i feel u when u say i ain't got a "different" sound cuz i know wut u mean by that and i agree. it's in development and hopefuly u'll find my next tracks better.

i appreciate the honesty dude, thnx.

peace