A young mans love

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

i was crossing a street to a dope dre beat
when i suddenly failed to move my feet
it took less than a sec to see where it leads
i happened to meet two green eyes full of heat
it seemed like i could read all it needs
and reach out to touch with my lips her eye-lids
at this very moment i knew what it is
at this very moment i felt what it means
and as far as i know she felt it first too
cuz she grabbed my hand sayin she wants it too
what i remember of this day is rather the night
and the snow white body shining brighter than light
the eyes full of green trees, roses and flavor
the growin feeling that she is just doing a favour
still overshadowed by the memories of the sweetest being
i woke up with the feeling i dont hear her breathing--

she was gone

[K.Dub]

Good Shit Z

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

lmao thanx dude, +1 

[D-Reborn]

yeah that was dope 

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

thank u man +1

[QuietTruth]

You wrote this in the perceptive as a boy, word?

Nice shit girl, propz.

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

You wrote this in the perceptive as a boy, word?

Nice shit girl, propz.

yea exactly... thnx QT propz 2

[Stash]

Thats deep

[NiCc_FrUm_ThA_nO]

You wrote this in the perceptive as a boy, word?

Nice shit girl, propz.

yea exactly... thnx QT propz 2

For a second I thot u were either bi or lesbian
That was some good shit tho
+1

[Doggystylin]

That was different, it wasn't really lyrical, it was more of a storytelling artsty type of rhyme which I liked. Good work. I don't get the end though, what happened?

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

yea the end is strange indeed ive noticed it only now...it seems as if she died or sumthin  , but it actually means thhat she just left him and went away b4 he woke up.

thnx +1