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"you ain't stopping me"
« on: June 09, 2007, 11:38:41 PM »
Now, tell me as I be walking down street,
as I hear siren hawkin' by a dirty lookin' ass police.
It ain't a pretty thing, you hear a hoochi ass scream,
it's a hellish nightmare, it ain't no dream.
I see a dead girl on the floor gettin holes
on her head like a broken ass door.
I wonder what the lord had her in store
when she moved to a new home, it's called the morgue.
It's the street of the plauge where many memories started to fade,
yet, it's another dead body bag twisting another man's face.
Disfigured society bringing another nonentity,
treating victims like it was their destiny.
The life of fraility, hearing the dead hummin' melody
like a man in hell for his crime of felony.
It's another despair family, who lost their sanity,
buzzin' the lord saying, "why you mad at me?"


So I say:
(Chrous)
Stop! You ain't stopping me.
Drop! you ain't mocking me
Let the truth be the heard when feeling gets hurt
as the real news comes from the street.


I repeat, I repeat, let's keep the situation at ease,
angry mobs, angrys moms choas-in' police.
Medias comes along, singin' bigotry song,
talking metaphors twisting the words all along.
They say it was us that did the assault, the flaw,
and blaming all the hoods for the fault.
till they found out it was cop mis-fire,
showing the world that the girl don't gotta be 50 to retire.
It's easy to confuse the world with demise,
it's like transformers, it's more than meets the eyes.
I can't believe how the situitions became what it is,
having chief of police say they will handle the biz, but they don't give a shit.


« Last Edit: June 11, 2007, 01:48:30 PM by pc8381 »
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Re: "you ain't stopping me"
« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2007, 07:14:42 AM »
Not Bad but i think if your doin a song Named "you aint stopping me" you should write longer verses to shown em they aint stopping you
 

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Re: "you ain't stopping me"
« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2007, 10:35:54 AM »
Not Bad but i think if your doin a song Named "you aint stopping me" you should write longer verses to shown em they aint stopping you
WEll..it's late at night...so i was tired... :)
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Re: "you ain't stopping me"
« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2007, 07:34:53 AM »
Not Bad but i think if your doin a song Named "you aint stopping me" you should write longer verses to shown em they aint stopping you
WEll..it's late at night...so i was tired... :)
yeah..but it isnt dat bad  :)
 

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Re: "you ain't stopping me"
« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2007, 10:14:12 AM »
Not Bad but i think if your doin a song Named "you aint stopping me" you should write longer verses to shown em they aint stopping you
WEll..it's late at night...so i was tired... :)
yeah..but it isnt dat bad  :)
thx for reading though. prop to u.  :) +1
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Re: "you ain't stopping me"
« Reply #5 on: June 13, 2007, 02:12:34 AM »
Not Bad but i think if your doin a song Named "you aint stopping me" you should write longer verses to shown em they aint stopping you
WEll..it's late at night...so i was tired... :)
yeah..but it isnt dat bad  :)
thx for reading though. prop to u.  :) +1
np