Author Topic: Dont fuck wit me nigguh  (Read 177 times)

MC TenderLust

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Dont fuck wit me nigguh
« on: June 13, 2007, 02:37:37 PM »
whatuppers fam, i'm tryin ta get ppl to hear my lyrics cuz ive been writin 4 years now so its time yall seen them, even if its just on a website, tell me what u guys honestly think, even tho i know they fire.....


Dont fuck wit me nigguh, i really dont feel you (no homo)
i got two tecs nigga so its nothin to kill u (what)
nuttin to a boss, so nigga get out my way
i shit on bitch niggas 4 fun erryday (doo doo)
u rockin fubu and im chocolate like yoohoo
but u a pale ass cracker who'd cry over a boo boo (pussy)
i hate your face, hate your race hate the place
you make your dough at, ima hafta catch a rape case (no homo)
yeah u heard, i'll fuck u like a bird, thats a broad,,
with my gat,,,,,,,,,, foo you aint heard? (you aint heard)
yeah u heard, the bird is the word, nouns, verbs, im smokin herb,
the rims on my car not tens on my car, (what is they?)
they twenty eights stolen plates on my car, chyea i said stolen
robbed a chink ganked his shit then left his frame swollen (she bangs)
i hate grown men cryin like a bitch, bitch ass nigga ho you cryin like a bitch,
bitch ass niggas just cryin like a bitch so i had to slap him up and left him lyin in a ditch,
the message of ma shit is plain and simple, dont fuck wit me nigguh i'll pop u like a pimple




 

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Re: Dont fuck wit me nigguh
« Reply #1 on: June 15, 2007, 09:53:45 AM »
Well main, I'd say those rhymes are rather standard. The rhyme technique is too simple, it ain't bad but not really good either.
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