2 In 1 (Story Of A Skitzo) ~Test~, need feedback pls.

[D-Stress]

homie, my life is like a rollercoster,
no matter what, i gotta be a soulja
went thru hell and back, still aint scared
never gave up hope,dont think its all bad
all the bad times, all the drama i had
it keeps flashbackin, pictures in my head
memories neva left me,i live my life backwards
im still trigga happy on these bastard
never fall stay up, in hope of a next day
stay strapped with my thoughts, flowin like russian AK,
lookin at fools,what games they play
save me from these demons, i still pray
but sometimes im filled with anger,
motherfuckas feel the danger,
come with rangers, im bulletproof
im hard to motherfuckin kill yall fools
im killer, killer like itchy the killer
step to me, if you a g,lets see whos realer
dont test d-stress better wear the vest
fuck slugs, ima put knives in ya chest
im 2 in 1,bloodclot skitzo, ya betta knizow
i target practice motherfuckas, out my window,
1 dead, 2 dead, i stop feelin sad
then cut ya throught from the back
homicidal thoughts, im nightmare in person
sometimes im sicker than mr.charles manson
now i feel better, im kind and a lovely "child"
but sometimes, my nature makes me wild
i cant chill, almost never chill, thats real
now just imagine how i fuckin feel.

[D-Stress]

??

[D-Stress]

what you think about it?

[Lunatic]

pretty good

[D-Stress]

more feedback please.