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a journey ...
« on: April 17, 2008, 09:56:12 AM »
Something aint right,
Im going blind, but I can see light,
An Im mid flight,
Lookin down on street fights, broken homes and street life,
My tears are freezing,
Altitude dreaming, twister forming due to my screaming,
Not believing,
I can see my past, at last, I can say sorry,
To everybody I harmed, everyone I wronged,
I guess thats in a past life, a life I cant handle,
To every girl Im sorry, just aint ready to settle,
I guess that why I play up, no love, an stay up,
Thinking of ways to end it, an no we cant stay friends, shhh,
I think I was lonely but God only knows me,
Not even my close friends know what is close to me,
An now Im ghostly, ghastly and floating,
Hoping they all forgive me for my mistakes, Im a snake,
That wont settle till I bite you, hurt you with venom,
I know Ive done wrong but hope they know, I wont forget em,
My ears are bleeding, guess now Ill never know,
Whether I could of been in love, had kids an watch em grow,
Too young, but its my time, I guess I have to go,
To watch the tears drip on Gods window,
An now Im floating,

Now Im sitting, playing cards, with all of the Gods,
My idols, my family, even those from Greek Mythology,
Im asking them questions, they just cant answer,
They smiling, drinking, dancing with laughter,
But Im lost, all confused, feeling abused,
Used, but thinking Ive still got a purpose,
Life moved slow like a turtoise, an thats my fall,
If I get another chance, I'd right my faults,
Say sorry to the girls, patch things up with my boys,
Maybe make good with my music, Im lyrically deployed,
Talents on the ready, steady with a pen,
Maybe leaving partying to weekends, work hard until then,
Be kinder to my folks, pay keep and sleep easy,
Move the tv from my room and get kip as it needs b,
I wonder, to put it to the big man,
Dress in all white, an just ask to see if he can,
Put me back on Earth, cos my plans are gettin wasted,
I asked him and to my amazement, I stood an his face lit,
Up with bright light, all right, he said, smiling,
But you better do all the things you said, or be trying,
I said I promise, I'll go an do my best,
Make things up with friends, find a girl, a princess,
Then I close my eyes, breathe in, for a bit,
This vanilla sky is closing, cos Im not ready, not yet,
An now Im falling,

But somethings ok, now Im back home,
Laying in my bed and my Tv's gone,
An my bank receits show, Im been paying my way,
Got up and got a job, and Im working all day,
Been out at the weekend, a socailites life,
But Im working all week, so now, its alright,
Spoke to all the girls, said sorry, and hugged,
An with one of em, I still kinda felt some love,
But I can't skip back, now Im back on track,
Work hard, play harder, and I will not slack,
Cos lifes like a trap, if you slow, you get caught,
An my tails now free of the steel, snap jaws,
Writing lyrics daily, trying to record,
A tune to get my noticed, get it played in clubs,
An all my boys are now cool, Im a stick to my ways,
Take a back seat and let stuff be cool again,
Put them first before me, I will lose this name,
That nobody ever comes first before Graeme,
Now Im thankful, Ive made good of my chance,
Thank God for his delivery, of me, from the clouds,
Im happy, for once, I will make parents proud,
An now Im adoring, life, as it should be...
... a journey of... balance
 

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Re: a journey ...
« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2008, 10:13:09 AM »
Homie, can I tell you somethang? That was so ill. On the real. You rhyme with picture, we can see your story. Sick concept homie. You spit stuff people can go BACK and read. Propz, you got talent nigga.

 

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Re: a journey ...
« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2008, 05:13:12 AM »
fuck yeah, dope story tellin

I wonder, to put it to the big man,
Dress in all white, an just ask to see if he can,
Put me back on Earth, cos my plans are gettin wasted,
I asked him and to my amazement, I stood an his face lit,
Up with bright light, all right, he said, smiling,
But you better do all the things you said, or be trying,
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Re: a journey ...
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2008, 05:28:44 AM »
Spoke to all the girls, said sorry, and hugged,
An with one of em, I still kinda felt some love,
But I can't skip back, now Im back on track,
Work hard, play harder, and I will not slack,
Cos lifes like a trap, if you slow, you get caught,
An my tails now free of the steel, snap jaws,
Writing lyrics daily, trying to record,

*Clapping* love reading your stuff

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The outcome I'm crowned the best lyricist. Nas- Got Urself A Gun

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