It's March 28, 2024, 09:08:16 AM
For your first time writing, that looked really proffesional. Because it told a captivating story, and all flowed well, and finished strong. Much props, keep postin...And also, I want to encourage you to sign up to see if you can get spotlighted in our first "feature battle". Click the link below if your interested.http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?topic=182750.0
first time writing... and that good... you must have bitten someone. Just post up your source, and give it up dogg. 'cause I highly doubt that's your first rhyme.