Author Topic: "The Struggle of A Child"  (Read 558 times)


bLaDe

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Re: "The Struggle of A Child"
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2002, 08:17:28 PM »
Good shit man, your offbeat a lotta times tho, and yo flowz kinda lazy..but im feeling the subject matter, peace

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Re: "The Struggle of A Child"
« Reply #2 on: September 12, 2002, 05:28:45 AM »
yo..............this pretty dope,only the 2nd time,ive peeped ya audio and this i felt mo than the other..............dope subject matter but like blade said i noticed u were off beat at points but it werent that noticiable


dope tho 7/10
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Re: "The Struggle of A Child"
« Reply #3 on: September 12, 2002, 09:09:27 AM »
Dope subject, the beat kinda fitted the lyrics, I'd give it like 7.5/10
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Re: "The Struggle of A Child"
« Reply #4 on: September 14, 2002, 03:50:04 AM »
The fruity loops beat is whack...Its not mixed well either...The subject matter is dope, but u sound like ure talking...Nice effort tho...



P.S. I dunno why you'd wanna post this, its like 30 secs...AT least wait till its done...
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Re: "The Struggle of A Child"
« Reply #5 on: September 15, 2002, 02:00:32 AM »
thanx for your comments don't think i'll ever get around to finishing it lucky i recorded this much...oh by the way the beat is by DJ JB i didn't make it
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