confusion remix

[jay]

since n.i.k. didn t give me no feedback on this here it is:

http://www.mr-angulus.com/confusion jmj remix.mp3

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

yea..I actually IMed you on AIM and u didnt answer me...I like this track, maybe a little better than the original...Heres the deal...Ill put the original on "One Love" compilation and this on the "All Fingers..." compilation...



Oh, and this track is fairly old...maybe about 5 months old...LoL

[jay]

i did this version for the one love comp. not for different projects.

the original version was whack compared to this

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Ok...so ill put this one on the "One Love"...

[jay]

cool

[I TO DA GEEZY]

yo, shit is DOPE- I love this whining  shit it gives this dark typa feeling to the beat,the beat is banging and NIK is real dope on this shit(I Havent heared the original).

[ChildOfMuthaNature]

yo the beat is ill

[AlerG]

the beat is tight as fuck...sounds like some az/mobb deep/cormega type shit...the lyricals are nice but not really clear but understandable...definately the best content i've heard from sccit thus far...but the chorus is way below par...and actually the third verse is way outta line and too vulgar for the tone you set with the first two verses...but it's a nice track with a jmj touch which always helps...nice track with certain flaws but good nontheless, peace.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

the beat is tight as fuck...sounds like some az/mobb deep/cormega type shit...the lyricals are nice but not really clear but understandable...definately the best content i've heard from sccit thus far...but the chorus is way below par...and actually the third verse is way outta line and too vulgar for the tone you set with the first two verses...but it's a nice track with a jmj touch which always helps...nice track with certain flaws but good nontheless, peace.

Yea...This isnt the original you know...I just gave Jay the acapella and he remixed it too another beat...The chorus doesnt sound as good as the original...Plus I think my voice was mixed a little loud...But u did a good job Jay...



BTW, this is over 5 months old...

[AlerG]

i'd like to hear the og to compare the two, peace.

[jay]

http://www.mr-angulus.com/confusion.mp3


the beat we used on the o.g. version didn t have what i thought a good beat needed to express his feelings.

[AlerG]

well, the beat for the og is nice...but your right it doesn't fit the lyrics well enough...but the sound quality is better for the lyrics and chorus and does them more justice, but the chorus is still below average...that is a nice beat no doubt...good song, peace.

[AlerG]

nik, will u put the lyrics up for this track...thanks.

peace.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

(Verse 1)

I was a born a Jewish Boy from the valley of southern Cali/
I was told too enjoy what was comin at me/
so far my life is nothin happy/
So I tried to jump to rapping/
15 years just past me/
My shitty peers stunk badly/
Im so depressed/
My life got ups and downs like Lopez's breasts/
Im growin a mess/
Like a hoe with no chest/
I write on what i belive in/
Every night every evenin'/
Than i fight for acheivment/
I might be just decent/
But at least I give effort/
I preach more than ever/
and teach 'em the better/
Increasin the clever/
I cease the good weather/
I'm peacefull like deserts/
Im blessed with the talent/
But my stress is unbalanced/
I guess Im arousin/
Cuz my life is a drama/
It bites like paranas/
Havin fights with my mama/
Never right always wrong/
Makin a fist/
Im takin a shit/
Im thanfull for this/
Have Patience my bitch/
Your placed on my list/
Of people to kill/
To get equal for real/
This needle I drill/
I feast on this pill/
It increases my skills/
My sites are illusions/
My life is Confusion/


(chorus)
Confusion...Depresion...Im lossin...My Miiiiiind
Confusion...Depresion...Im lossin...My Miiiiiind


(verse 2)
My mother never showin in love or affection/
Im stuck in depression/
I trust in my present/
Learnin nothin but lessons/
There must be a heavin/
Am I chosin wrong?/
I just try too move on/
Am i crying too long?/
Can I die throug this song?/
I dont wanna be bad/
But my lifes truely sad/
From left too right booby traps/
I cant show through this rap/
Always gettin back stabbed/
and I cant get passed that/
Tested like lab rats/
From present too Back track/
I was messed up and laughed at/
Cant get a breath through this gas mask/
Future set on my bad past/
The cup is half empty and I cant have that...


(chorus)
Confusion...Depresion...Im loosin...My Miiiiind
Confusion (Confusion!) Depresion (Depresion!) Im loosin (Im loosin!) My Miiiiind


(verse 3)
The girl I love, she dont even know i exist/
From the world above, Im too nervouse too even blow her a kiss/
Tried too glow up my rist/
and show off my shit/
She still dont know I exist/
Shit, lifes mo' than a bitch/
How can I show her my true thoughts?/
Shes too hot/
I even tried too act a thug like my name was 2Pac/
All I got is a bottle of lotion and a huge cock/
I can pick another fish from the ocean, but I chose not/
Shit, I love her too death/
Just wanna fuck her in bed/
and Im a sucker for head/
But sex is not all, I really wanna get too know her/
God let me show her/
I can get her wet while sober/
She erects my boner/
I cant even pass by her, I get heavy butterflies/
If I even tried too talk, id start too stutter and cry/
Too my friends Im utterin lies/
How shes nothin but thighs/
But that aint true, cuz shes so fuckin fine/
She has too many qualities too discuss in this rhyme/
Beutiful a muthafuckin work of nature/
I DONT KNOW WHY IT NEVER OCCURED TOO RAPE HER!!!/


(chorus)
Confusion...Depresion...Im loosin...My Miiiiind
Confusion (Confusion!) Depresion (Depresion!) Im loosin (Im loosin!) My Miiiiind

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

Yea tha OG of this waz some sicc shit....

I'll download tha Remix when I get home from Summa Skool....