Author Topic: I want you to rate this song for me  (Read 170 times)

bez

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I want you to rate this song for me
« on: March 21, 2002, 11:49:41 AM »
Wish the world would change by Bez

I hate to see people on the news being killed,
I hate to see oil in the sea being spilled,
I hate to see b/c rocks being drilled,
But thats the world we live in, a world of guilt,
I hate to see big tall trees being chopped,
I hate to see people in jail, left to rot,
I hate to see alot of things that are hard to explain,
I hate to see the pictures of the towers and that plane,
I hate to see people who are poor on the street,
I hate to see children who cry for a bite to eat,
I hate to see rich men who just cannot give,
I hate to see racism we all have a right to live,
Dam, I wish the world would change,

(Chorus) Now people fight for the right to live, (The right to live)
But there's people out there who just wont give, (They would give)
Theres so much strain so much pain, (Strain and pain)
Dam, I wish the world would change, (I wish the world would change)

I hate to see people carring around weapon's,
I hate to see force being used to try an teach us lesson's,
I hate to see crime, but its everywhere now,
I hate to see children being beaten screamin owwwwww,
I hate to see animals loosing their homes,
I hate to see dead bodies, blood and bones,
I hate to hear of murders, killin for no reason,
I hate to hear of married couples that are always cheatin,
I hate to hear stories of women being raped,
I hate to see violence thats been caught on tape.
I hate to see people who just don't understand,
We are 1 world, 1 nation, 1 land,
I wish the world would change,

(Chorus) Now people fight for the right to live, (The right to live)
But there's people out there who just wont give, (They would give)
Theres so much strain so much pain, (Strain and pain)
Dam, I wish the world would change, (I wish the world would change)

(Talking) You know we just see people poor, hungry, tired, alone,
There are so many people on this earth that could help but they dont wanna help,
If there ok then they are fine with that,
They just don't know how many people are around that need them, that need you,
We should all put are minds together and come up with a way to stop everything thats wrong in the world,
We need to stop hunger, killin, pain, rape, violence and bad things all together,
We all have the right to live we all have the right to survive,
So come on lets make the world change,

(Chorus) Now people fight for the right to live, (The right to live)
But there's people out there who just wont give, (They would give)
Theres so much strain so much pain, (Strain and pain)
Dam, I wish the world would change, (I wish the world would change)

(Chorus) Now people fight for the right to live, (The right to live)
But there's people out there who just wont give, (They would give)
Theres so much strain so much pain, (Strain and pain)
Dam, I wish the world would change, (I wish the world would change)

Heyyyyyyyy, I wish the world would change,
Peace

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strawberry_cherrys

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Re: I want you to rate this song for me
« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2002, 11:53:40 AM »
I hate this song
I hate you
I hate the way you hate stuff


Nah j/k it was good
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Big_Loco_FME

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Re: I want you to rate this song for me
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2002, 11:56:14 AM »
um, sounds kinda 'We Are the World'-ish

corny, but keep trying

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Re: I want you to rate this song for me
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2002, 12:01:33 PM »
its koo, but try cuttin out the "i hate" etc part, ure overdoing it IMO ... sounds like u a hater  ;D


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Jome

Re: I want you to rate this song for me
« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2002, 12:11:48 PM »
Too much repeating, reminds me of Nas & "poison".
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Jome

Re: I want you to rate this song for me
« Reply #5 on: March 21, 2002, 12:12:32 PM »
Ehh, I forgot;
Otherwise it was pretty nice though.
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bez

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Re: I want you to rate this song for me
« Reply #6 on: March 23, 2002, 02:49:28 AM »
thanks everyone
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