Author Topic: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)  (Read 1595 times)

ThaRealSupreme

Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #15 on: August 27, 2008, 02:52:56 PM »
its in response to this:

I USED TO RUN WITH SUGE AND BANG STRAIGHT PIRU, RUN UP ON CRABS WHILE THEY TAKING A POO
I RUN WITH ANYBODY THAT DONT LIKE GAME, WHAT CAN I SAY? MY MOMMA RAISED A LAME
THATS JUST THE BITCH IN ME, AINT NO RICH IN ME AND JUST LIKE MY BROTHER THERES A LITTLE BIT OF SNITCH IN ME
I HAD A HARD LIFE, BULLIED IN CATHOLIC SCHOOL, HAD A PRIVATE  EDUCATION BUT IM STILL A DAMN FOOL
IM SO DAMN BROKE THAT IVE APPLIED FOR WELFARE, BUT JUST LIKE 50 THEY DONT CARE
NOW IVE GOTTA SELL MY ASS, AND DAMN IT FUCKING HURTS, BITE ON MY LIP AS MY ANAL HOLE SQUIRTS
NO ALBUM IN SIGHT, G MAGIC WAS RIGHT, PULL DOWN HIS PANTS AND SUCK HIS BOW AND ARROWS TONIGHT
NOW I LIVE IN THE VALLEY, WITH THAT BITCH NIGGA PAYBACC, KNEW THAT NIGGA FROM WAYBACK
RUN A TRAIN ON HIS DAUGHTER, ME AND MY NIGGA DRE'STA PENAL CODE f288 THAT
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YOU SPIT A BULLSHIT VERSE TO GIVE A NIGGA KICCSTART,BUT "YOU MISSED ME BY THAT MUCH" LIKE THE DUDE OFF GET SMART-YOU NEED TO GET HEART SO GO VISIT THE WIZARD,CUZ YOUR BEEF WITH ME AINT NOTHIN BUT A CHICCEN GIZZARD-IM LIKE A BLIZZARD IN THE WINTER 10 DEGREES BELOW,SO IT'S EASY FOR ME TO INJURE 10 MC'S OR MO-AND U SHOULD KNOW THAT IM A VET WHEN IT COME TO THE TURF WARS,MY BULLETS CUT THRU NIGGAS WAVES LIKE A BRAND NEW SURF BOARD- YA LIFE IS WORTH MORE BUT MY CARTELS PURPOSE, IS TA DELIVER SLUGS TO YA DOOR LIKE THE U.nited P.arcel S.ervice -I GOT U PAR-CIAL NERVOUS I KNOW YA PRIDE IS STRONG,BUT YOUR MORALES GETTING LOW YOU AINT GON RIDE TOO LONG-AND YOU CANT HIDE TOO LONG CUZ I KNOW WHERE TO GET'CHA,TA CHOKE THE LIFE OUT'CHA ASS LIKE A BOA CONSTRICTER-BOY MY FLOW OFF THE RICHTER SO WHY YOU PLAYING ON FAULT LINES,FOR ABOUT 2 GRAND I'LL HAVE YOU LYING ON CHALK LINES-AFTER YOU CAUGHT 9 LIKE  AN ALL-PRO WIDEOUT,WHEN IT'S FUNK YOU LIL PUNKS LIKE TO ALL-GO HIDEOUT-SO I PACC EXTRA SLIDE OUTS TO GIVE NO LOVE,AND THE CLIPS ARE BOUT AS WIDE AS A QUIZNO SUB-NIGGA U IS NO THUG BOY TA HANDS IS FULL,YOU'S AN ACTOR LIKE KEVIN COSTNER TRY'NA DANCE WITH WOLVES-SO HERES THE CHANCE TO PULL YA'SELF OUTTA THE RUCCAS,BEFORE ITS A REPLAY OF IRON MIKE VS. BUSTER DOUGLAS -OR I'LL RUSH YA CUTLASS WITH THE CHROME ON SIDE-OF-ME,THEN DOME THE DRIVER I'M A MENACE-2-SOCIETY-THEN IMMA FLEE THE SCENE QUIETLY I'M DONE WITH YOU COWARD,SO WHEN YOU SEE ME IN THE STREETS YOU BETTER DUCC LIKE HOWARD...MUTHA FUCCA!!!

Got damn! ;D
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ThaRealSupreme

Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #16 on: August 27, 2008, 02:54:08 PM »

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YOU SPIT A BULLSHIT VERSE TO GIVE A NIGGA KICCSTART,BUT "YOU MISSED ME BY THAT MUCH" LIKE THE DUDE OFF GET SMART-YOU NEED TO GET HEART SO GO VISIT THE WIZARD,CUZ YOUR BEEF WITH ME AINT NOTHIN BUT A CHICCEN GIZZARD-IM LIKE A BLIZZARD IN THE WINTER 10 DEGREES BELOW,SO IT'S EASY FOR ME TO INJURE 10 MC'S OR MO-AND U SHOULD KNOW THAT IM A VET WHEN IT COME TO THE TURF WARS,MY BULLETS CUT THRU NIGGAS WAVES LIKE A BRAND NEW SURF BOARD- YA LIFE IS WORTH MORE BUT MY CARTELS PURPOSE, IS TA DELIVER SLUGS TO YA DOOR LIKE THE U.nited P.arcel S.ervice -I GOT U PAR-CIAL NERVOUS I KNOW YA PRIDE IS STRONG,BUT YOUR MORALES GETTING LOW YOU AINT GON RIDE TOO LONG-AND YOU CANT HIDE TOO LONG CUZ I KNOW WHERE TO GET'CHA,TA CHOKE THE LIFE OUT'CHA ASS LIKE A BOA CONSTRICTER-BOY MY FLOW OFF THE RICHTER SO WHY YOU PLAYING ON FAULT LINES,FOR ABOUT 2 GRAND I'LL HAVE YOU LYING ON CHALK LINES-AFTER YOU CAUGHT 9 LIKE  AN ALL-PRO WIDEOUT,WHEN IT'S FUNK YOU LIL PUNKS LIKE TO ALL-GO HIDEOUT-SO I PACC EXTRA SLIDE OUTS TO GIVE NO LOVE,AND THE CLIPS ARE BOUT AS WIDE AS A QUIZNO SUB-NIGGA U IS NO THUG BOY TA HANDS IS FULL,YOU'S AN ACTOR LIKE KEVIN COSTNER TRY'NA DANCE WITH WOLVES-SO HERES THE CHANCE TO PULL YA'SELF OUTTA THE RUCCAS,BEFORE ITS A REPLAY OF IRON MIKE VS. BUSTER DOUGLAS -OR I'LL RUSH YA CUTLASS WITH THE CHROME ON SIDE-OF-ME,THEN DOME THE DRIVER I'M A MENACE-2-SOCIETY-THEN IMMA FLEE THE SCENE QUIETLY I'M DONE WITH YOU COWARD,SO WHEN YOU SEE ME IN THE STREETS YOU BETTER DUCC LIKE HOWARD...MUTHA FUCCA!!!

Arguably better!..
but drop  three verse story telling Rhyme..and let's see how much skills and imagination you got..
you Know What..write about Three people affected b a certain tragedy/going trough one of life's curve balls!

Try  speakingfrom each person perspective;at the same time inter whining with one another in your raps!

The Paper and pen/Keyboard" is in your hand..Let's Do this!

U'll get all of that in the mixtape which coming soon ;D
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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #17 on: August 27, 2008, 02:58:00 PM »
I am a fan of your music give me a shoutout
 

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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #18 on: August 27, 2008, 03:00:52 PM »
I am a fan of your music give me a shoutout
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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #19 on: August 27, 2008, 03:04:04 PM »

,
YOU SPIT A BULLSHIT VERSE TO GIVE A NIGGA KICCSTART,BUT "YOU MISSED ME BY THAT MUCH" LIKE THE DUDE OFF GET SMART-YOU NEED TO GET HEART SO GO VISIT THE WIZARD,CUZ YOUR BEEF WITH ME AINT NOTHIN BUT A CHICCEN GIZZARD-IM LIKE A BLIZZARD IN THE WINTER 10 DEGREES BELOW,SO IT'S EASY FOR ME TO INJURE 10 MC'S OR MO-AND U SHOULD KNOW THAT IM A VET WHEN IT COME TO THE TURF WARS,MY BULLETS CUT THRU NIGGAS WAVES LIKE A BRAND NEW SURF BOARD- YA LIFE IS WORTH MORE BUT MY CARTELS PURPOSE, IS TA DELIVER SLUGS TO YA DOOR LIKE THE U.nited P.arcel S.ervice -I GOT U PAR-CIAL NERVOUS I KNOW YA PRIDE IS STRONG,BUT YOUR MORALES GETTING LOW YOU AINT GON RIDE TOO LONG-AND YOU CANT HIDE TOO LONG CUZ I KNOW WHERE TO GET'CHA,TA CHOKE THE LIFE OUT'CHA ASS LIKE A BOA CONSTRICTER-BOY MY FLOW OFF THE RICHTER SO WHY YOU PLAYING ON FAULT LINES,FOR ABOUT 2 GRAND I'LL HAVE YOU LYING ON CHALK LINES-AFTER YOU CAUGHT 9 LIKE  AN ALL-PRO WIDEOUT,WHEN IT'S FUNK YOU LIL PUNKS LIKE TO ALL-GO HIDEOUT-SO I PACC EXTRA SLIDE OUTS TO GIVE NO LOVE,AND THE CLIPS ARE BOUT AS WIDE AS A QUIZNO SUB-NIGGA U IS NO THUG BOY TA HANDS IS FULL,YOU'S AN ACTOR LIKE KEVIN COSTNER TRY'NA DANCE WITH WOLVES-SO HERES THE CHANCE TO PULL YA'SELF OUTTA THE RUCCAS,BEFORE ITS A REPLAY OF IRON MIKE VS. BUSTER DOUGLAS -OR I'LL RUSH YA CUTLASS WITH THE CHROME ON SIDE-OF-ME,THEN DOME THE DRIVER I'M A MENACE-2-SOCIETY-THEN IMMA FLEE THE SCENE QUIETLY I'M DONE WITH YOU COWARD,SO WHEN YOU SEE ME IN THE STREETS YOU BETTER DUCC LIKE HOWARD...MUTHA FUCCA!!!

Arguably better!..
but drop  three verse story telling Rhyme..and let's see how much skills and imagination you got..
you Know What..write about Three people affected b a certain tragedy/going trough one of life's curve balls!

Try  speakingfrom each person perspective;at the same time inter whining with one another in your raps!

The Paper and pen/Keyboard" is in your hand..Let's Do this!

U'll get all of that in the mixtape which coming soon ;D
.....lol...Alright-But Surely dude write/type somethin right now, may not be as accurate as i had specified but close to it somewhat you know?
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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #20 on: August 27, 2008, 03:05:00 PM »
THATS MY NIGGA CUZ!! WHAT IT DO PAYBACC
FOR EVERBODYS INFO THIS IS LongBeachFeminist PLAYING A DUAL BITCH ROLE...
 

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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #21 on: August 27, 2008, 03:05:40 PM »

,
YOU SPIT A BULLSHIT VERSE TO GIVE A NIGGA KICCSTART,BUT "YOU MISSED ME BY THAT MUCH" LIKE THE DUDE OFF GET SMART-YOU NEED TO GET HEART SO GO VISIT THE WIZARD,CUZ YOUR BEEF WITH ME AINT NOTHIN BUT A CHICCEN GIZZARD-IM LIKE A BLIZZARD IN THE WINTER 10 DEGREES BELOW,SO IT'S EASY FOR ME TO INJURE 10 MC'S OR MO-AND U SHOULD KNOW THAT IM A VET WHEN IT COME TO THE TURF WARS,MY BULLETS CUT THRU NIGGAS WAVES LIKE A BRAND NEW SURF BOARD- YA LIFE IS WORTH MORE BUT MY CARTELS PURPOSE, IS TA DELIVER SLUGS TO YA DOOR LIKE THE U.nited P.arcel S.ervice -I GOT U PAR-CIAL NERVOUS I KNOW YA PRIDE IS STRONG,BUT YOUR MORALES GETTING LOW YOU AINT GON RIDE TOO LONG-AND YOU CANT HIDE TOO LONG CUZ I KNOW WHERE TO GET'CHA,TA CHOKE THE LIFE OUT'CHA ASS LIKE A BOA CONSTRICTER-BOY MY FLOW OFF THE RICHTER SO WHY YOU PLAYING ON FAULT LINES,FOR ABOUT 2 GRAND I'LL HAVE YOU LYING ON CHALK LINES-AFTER YOU CAUGHT 9 LIKE  AN ALL-PRO WIDEOUT,WHEN IT'S FUNK YOU LIL PUNKS LIKE TO ALL-GO HIDEOUT-SO I PACC EXTRA SLIDE OUTS TO GIVE NO LOVE,AND THE CLIPS ARE BOUT AS WIDE AS A QUIZNO SUB-NIGGA U IS NO THUG BOY TA HANDS IS FULL,YOU'S AN ACTOR LIKE KEVIN COSTNER TRY'NA DANCE WITH WOLVES-SO HERES THE CHANCE TO PULL YA'SELF OUTTA THE RUCCAS,BEFORE ITS A REPLAY OF IRON MIKE VS. BUSTER DOUGLAS -OR I'LL RUSH YA CUTLASS WITH THE CHROME ON SIDE-OF-ME,THEN DOME THE DRIVER I'M A MENACE-2-SOCIETY-THEN IMMA FLEE THE SCENE QUIETLY I'M DONE WITH YOU COWARD,SO WHEN YOU SEE ME IN THE STREETS YOU BETTER DUCC LIKE HOWARD...MUTHA FUCCA!!!

Arguably better!..
but drop  three verse story telling Rhyme..and let's see how much skills and imagination you got..
you Know What..write about Three people affected b a certain tragedy/going trough one of life's curve balls!

Try  speakingfrom each person perspective;at the same time inter whining with one another in your raps!

The Paper and pen/Keyboard" is in your hand..Let's Do this!

U'll get all of that in the mixtape which coming soon ;D
.....lol...Alright-But Surely dude write/type somethin right now, may not be as accurate as i had specified but close to it somewhat you know?
DROP WHAT???
 

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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #22 on: August 27, 2008, 03:06:43 PM »
THATS MY NIGGA CUZ!! WHAT IT DO PAYBACC
FOR EVERBODYS INFO THIS IS LongBeachFeminist PLAYING A DUAL BITCH ROLE...

shut up idiot


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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #24 on: August 27, 2008, 03:18:41 PM »
PAYBACC QUIT PLAYIN NIGGA YOU KNOW ITS ME CUZZ!! THE BIG S.P.I
MY DAUGHTER PRETTY AINT SHE??? YOU ALL ON MY MYSPACE PAGE STEALING MY PICTURES,WHAT KIND OF WEIRDO ARE YOU??? LOOK AT THE CHILDISH SHIT U DO,U AINT HURTING ME!!! I KNOW YOUR SPECIAL...EVERYONE ON HERE NOW KNOWS IT!!!
 

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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #25 on: August 27, 2008, 03:25:33 PM »
Dope ass 2nd verse Paybacc, propz for that shit!!!
 

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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #26 on: August 27, 2008, 03:26:45 PM »
Dope ass 2nd verse Paybacc, propz for that shit!!!
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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #27 on: August 27, 2008, 03:30:03 PM »
It dont matter what a nigga do, they going stay hating on niggaz! fucc these niggaz Paybacc.  AND TO YOU SUCCAZ aint a nigga gon ride thru tha 818 and do shit!  My Hommie can put up tha hardest shit you ever heard and yall still gon post hate...
Everyday, 818 or 323 you already know, Big J found on one of tha East Sides Chasing dough$$$$$
 

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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #28 on: August 27, 2008, 03:34:21 PM »
BILLY MAYS HERE. WHAT THE FUCK IS UP NIGGERS?
 

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Re: BIG PAYBACC LETS U RATE HIS VERSE (NEW MATERIAL)
« Reply #29 on: August 27, 2008, 04:03:29 PM »
THATS MY NIGGA CUZ!! WHAT IT DO PAYBACC
FOR EVERBODYS INFO THIS IS LongBeachFeminist PLAYING A DUAL BITCH ROLE...

shut up idiot

damn salty balls this nigga just 'spit' some heat

PROPS PAYBACCCCCCC HOLLA BACCCC