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Pillow

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End Days....very deep, dont sleep
« on: October 03, 2002, 08:01:59 PM »
Time Has Gone And Its Stricken Me That Time Has Come//
Shit i Gotta Do Something Im Still A Virgin And The World Is Done//
What Am I Suppost To Do Fuck It Ill Go Get A Gun//
Bust Caps Around The World So Im Heard And Just For Fun//
I Think I Have Seen It All The Pale Horse Is Coming//
Souls Have Rise From The Dead No Im Starting The Running//
Starting To Pray For All My Sins, Its All To Fast Where Have I Been//
The World Is Kurupted People Dying Every Day Over Sin//
Abortions And All But Thats Not My Call//
Preachers Been Speaking This I Know Cuz There Weak In The Jaw//
The Sun has Went Into A Full Eclipse, What Do I Get?//
I Havent Done Anything Special In My Life For Shit//
It All To Late But I Barely Started To Notice I Got Hip//
The 4 Horse Men Are Riding In And Im Just Like Oh Shit!!//
Diease And Plagues Are Spreading Across The Worlds Lands//
Im Turning Blue In The Face And Im Catching Lepracee In The Hands//
Snakes Rising From Underneath The Sands//
The Waters Turning Into Blood And This Isnt What I Planned//
The End Is Here This Is Wierd Because I Barely Become A Man//
I Fought Lifes hard Misery And i Just Took My Stand//
God Please Forgive Me I've Sinned All Over, Please Take My Soul//
i Know I Wasnt The Greatest Of Son But I Was Under The Devils Hold//
I Steadily Close My Eyes And Face Up To The Suns Gleam//
To Awaken To The Light Of This All being Just A Dream//
This Goes To Show You Everything Isnt All What It Seams//

please lemme get some feedback on this, thanks
peace.......

..::TinMaN::..
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Re: End Days....very deep, dont sleep
« Reply #1 on: October 04, 2002, 06:02:03 AM »
I liked it home boy, very deep, not alot of vocab in and wordplay but lets be honest the more simple music is the more people relate to it cos they understand what it means.  Felt it dogg.  keep dropping.
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Re: End Days....very deep, dont sleep
« Reply #2 on: October 04, 2002, 06:49:36 AM »
i agree, nice spit homie
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Re: End Days....very deep, dont sleep
« Reply #3 on: October 05, 2002, 06:46:17 PM »
thanks Bez and Illicit for tha feedback, appriciate it. can i get some more please?
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Re: End Days....very deep, dont sleep
« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2002, 04:00:09 AM »
I agree with Bez. Wasn't the most advanced vocabulary, or complex rhyming scheme. But you got your point accross, and it was a deep and very tight rhyme..
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