Author Topic: "War"  (Read 204 times)

da_notorious_mack

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"War"
« on: September 14, 2002, 11:38:52 PM »

Intro

What happened to tha badass hall of famer?
Now its ~lost Angel and you best post a disclaimer~//
I remember when ~lost angel~ was ~mad able~//
now its ~sad shit~,,, you usin bad ~tactics~//
I ~have clips~ thatll leave ya face half ~plastic~//
you used to ball and ~have grip~ but now cant make a ~basket~//
dont ~mask it~, your ~such a waste~//
what I serve is soo sick you wont ~touch tha plate~//
~butcha hate~.... and fa that,,, mah gun ~fucks ya face~//
do ya ~love tha taste?~.... BOOM!!!, whatchu gonna use to ~plug tha space?~//


Tell Em

trust, I reign supreme, WCC Cruiserweight Champ, and that's whats real~//
you like a 'bananna with no skin', you just 'lack a peel'~//
Im packing the steel~and bring beef like meals~//
tha four horsemen but one will leave ya clique~//
for that shady shit where im from we-d break tha wrist you ~write with~//
then youd be ~rhymeless~, but I see you are ~already~//
go getcha crew.... I got Assailants, an we ~all ready~
we ~all steady~ with tha ~thought in scripts~//
you tha type I dont even wanna ~bother with~//


~Bring ya kru~but before you do~make sure they all ridin for you~//
 

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Re: "War"
« Reply #1 on: September 15, 2002, 12:26:34 AM »
you like a 'bananna with no skin', you just 'lack a peel'~//

Thats a tight line, and overall a tight rhyme.. not ur best but still tight
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Re: "War"
« Reply #2 on: September 15, 2002, 12:41:49 AM »
Quote
you like a 'bananna with no skin', you just 'lack a peel'~//

Thats a tight line, and overall a tight rhyme.. not ur best but still tight


Yer I bumped that line, dope.
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Re: "War"
« Reply #3 on: September 15, 2002, 12:54:38 AM »
nice shit there....i liked the banana line, pity there werent more like it. overall good
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Re: "War"
« Reply #4 on: September 15, 2002, 06:30:35 AM »
Yeah, nice reply. I ain't involved in ur war with M Dogg unless he attacks me, but u did drop heat rite here
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Re: "War"
« Reply #5 on: September 15, 2002, 09:16:13 AM »
nice responds... but not what I was hoping. Round 2 coming up.
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