Author Topic: ~Polluted Souls~  (Read 341 times)

bLaDe

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~Polluted Souls~
« on: August 24, 2002, 01:55:39 PM »
Sup...these are a few of the lyrics for my new song POLLUTED SOULS....It aint finished, but drop sum feedback ..

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The world is polluted with the filth of egotism~
and corrupted religion confines us to mental prisons~
But i shine like the suns rays reflected of a prism~
while ignorant man consideres holy what is written--by king james~
but I break free from the chains, stand and rise from flames~
just another victum of mind games~
If there is a king, there shall be a Macbeth~
Surrounded by oxygen, but im still gasping for breath~
Intoxicated with poison, I struggle with the world~
debating with phytons, as the mental chains hurl~
Waving My Double Edged Sword, God Sharpened My Blade~
Its Just Me Against The World, And The Evil That He Made~

Confused and lost, I dwell in the spot that people forgot~
recapping the memories of the mental battles that I fought~
At the end, one who thinks of God, and dies in such thoughts~
Shall reach the eternal bliss that he sought~
Cutting through the thickness mentaly with precision~
You dont need eyes to see you need vision~
And for yuears religion caused noting but division~
Yo, at age 16 I stay confused but yet wise~
Its the day of my birth yet I feel the touch of my demise~
bLaDe journeys from place to place, Knowledge I trade like merchants~
I meet snakes face to face, tryin to tame serpants~

[hook]
Men bathe to wash of their sins in holy water~
Some take gods name and perform man slaughter~
Polluted souls swept clean by The divine flood~
As i sit back n watch holy water turn into blood~
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People weep for the time their lungs cease to breathe~
They havent even learnt to live yet, thats what they cant see~
And thats the real tragaty~
Every man is responsible for his own destiny~
And destiny is the reflection of the subconcious mind~
As the pendalum swings in the infinte deasert of time~
Heals woulds and gives vision to the mentaly blind~
While the ignorant seek the fountation of youth~
I scream Gods name at the peek of the mountain of truth~
Wisdom comes with age and thats what I persue~
Paupers living in the illusion of Kings~
Manupalated like puppets by strings~
I see dead birds flying with broken wings~


--------style switch-----
Yo,

Life is hard, getting harder by the minute~
They say time heals, but time is infinite~
Dont play with fire cuz you might get burned~
Lessons are blessins, utilize every word you have learned~
Enter the world like a foreiger knowledge is soul food~
Tug a rug from the corner, and the whole carpet moves~
analyze every situation, weather its bad or good~
cuz every thing can be a oppertunity to learn sumtin new~
And yo if there are dark clouds over your head~
and when you start wishing that you should be dead~
Change your thoughts, switch lanes and alter your perspective~
Instead of getting lost, use yo brain and focus on yo objective~
CUz everyman is responsible for creating his own destiny~
Its the reflection of the mind, and thats the whole tragety~
Cuz man suggests bad thoughts, which get manifested~
Be concious of where your headed, keep tryin diffrent methods~
To achieve-your-goals, dig-deep-like-moles~
take my lyrics as parole, elavate and free your soul~


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The last part Is what i wrote after sum of the guys i talked to couldnt comprehend and disliked my other style...so I tried writin sumtin more simpleistic ya know..pz

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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2002, 04:29:14 PM »
wow some incredible shit right therre
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2002, 10:01:08 PM »
Yo I waz wonderin wat happened 2 this......

So wassup wit it dawg, U know Im down 4 tha chorus, Holla at me wit tha beat......
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2002, 10:25:38 AM »
hey blade... this shit was excellent ...
keep up the good work ..
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2002, 10:35:39 AM »
Yeah that was nice shit. Feeling the subject.

Needed some multis to get it flowing though  :D
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #5 on: August 27, 2002, 07:15:07 AM »
@A-White-Rapper - Thanks homie, its rare anyone gets props from you ;)

@RoD - Yeah man, I couldnt find a suitable beat yet, but I'll holla atcha when i do..

@DS - Thanks man, good to see you bacc on wcc again  8)

@Peter Kay - Thnx dogg, yeah i aint exactly a "multi-person", but i feel  wht your sayin

peace

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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #6 on: August 27, 2002, 10:16:20 AM »
Yo.. thats some tight shit right there.. White Rapper was correct when he said incredible.. im feelin the subject...

peace
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2002, 02:05:34 PM »
felt it alot, I loved the hook, keep up the good work Blade.

Peace
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2002, 09:46:41 PM »
Yo...... that's some 2pac shit right there.... Yo, can't wait to hear the song.... Peace.
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #9 on: August 30, 2002, 10:43:04 AM »
lol sorry i didnt check this when u asked me too, anyways damn thats some amazing shit right there.....that right there should feat the pittbull clique
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2002, 08:28:50 PM »
that shit was on point blade, for real.

the hook gave me chillz and i aint even jokin, i love the style.

you pulled that style switch and straight up ripped it.

very well done.

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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #11 on: September 04, 2002, 03:46:00 AM »
Damn kid, that was straight fire. I think it's offical, after that, bLaDe has to be the G.O.A.T. I-Bo, Pr1mo, they come really, really close. But that shit was nice. Can't wait to hear it.
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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #12 on: September 04, 2002, 11:10:44 AM »
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Damn kid, that was straight fire. I think it's offical, after that, bLaDe has to be the G.O.A.T. I-Bo, Pr1mo, they come really, really close. But that shit was nice. Can't wait to hear it.


YO homie, i appreciate that u think of me like dat man, thanks a lot...
And thanks for the feedbacC GrEw_SuM/infinite/doggy/bez./gareefa ... peace

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Waving My Double Edged Sword, God Sharpened My Blade...
Its Just Me Against The World, And The Evil That He Made...
 

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Re: ~Polluted Souls~
« Reply #13 on: September 09, 2002, 12:16:12 PM »
very nice work dog, i have seen alot of great work from u in tha past but this piece right here might very well be the best of them all.
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