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Painful Memorys
« on: August 29, 2002, 10:14:23 AM »
Jus a quick freestyle.. Thanks to onetime for the inspiration

i got these memorys planted in my head
times i wish i could forget
the times i wish i was just dead
people look back at these years and smile
i look back and dial 666 to the devil - its denyal
denyin that it ever happened to me
having flashbacks to the handfull of pills i had
still brings chills down my spine like the spite of my dad
but i still see the light
i still picture my friends tellin me everything is alrite
while i break down in tears
pouring my heart out, explaining all my fears
this is pulling me appart i cry, scream and shout
but no one listens to my problems
the pleas fall on deaf ears
tryin not to remember all those years
but im looking back, glad that the time has passed
and i hope all this happiness will last
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PakiGangsta

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Re: Painful Memorys
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2002, 10:35:47 AM »
i feel u bro......thx. for the respect.....and i hope ur happiness lasts forever......koo rhymes....its good....and its hard to get stuff of ur mind and especially stuff like that..

peace
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Re: Painful Memorys
« Reply #2 on: August 29, 2002, 12:07:49 PM »
Gareefa that was I have had you just don't know shit's creeped up where things are too difficult too explain you know?But your poem did very well.............
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Re: Painful Memorys
« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2002, 02:03:15 PM »
dam, nice shit
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Re: Painful Memorys
« Reply #4 on: August 30, 2002, 02:24:45 AM »
Nice! :) ^^ Liked it, thought it was a nice verse.. keep it up. and the story itself was full of emotional content.. well thought out dawg! :)


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Re: Painful Memorys
« Reply #5 on: September 01, 2002, 01:16:22 AM »
bump!.. mo' feedback plz
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