Author Topic: "Mocking Indecisive" -- Keystyle -- Feedback plz! (Read 273 times)

Gay-o Felony · « **on:** August 25, 2002, 04:46:17 AM »

Ayo.. seeing as i was gonna disappear for a while.. i thought i would write up a "come back" keystyle..

Indecisive "checkin back in..."

-- Introduction -- (For all those emcee's who dont know who i am)

Indecisive "enhanced - to - perfection" i rise through the "emcee - table" higher, than a "enlarged - penis - erection"/ My wordplay grinds on your mind, harder than a "bmx - fable" causin a "brain - hemerage - infection"/ I open you up like a "paper - cut" lookin through you like n "invisible - man" your "stolen - words - need - inspection"/ When im finished, "un-identifiable" fuckin "messed - with - my - winnin - cycle" gonna need a "lyrikal - disection"/ Originated from name "Explicit" i was untouchable, "lyrikally - unaproachable", then i enhanced to "perfection"/ "Tha Don" i stuck, like a "sticky - spermalicous - fuck" swimmin thru "wannabes" like a "baby - duck" your "rep" i "fuck"/ Went from " 1 - 2 - 3 " name changin causin a "epidemic - conspiracy" changed to "elite" indecisive, i "finally decided to be"/ Takin "Lightweight Status" from "Gareefa - outlaw - g" took at i thought earned from now on that was "history"/ Now like a "vigilante" im back to "Invoke - Lyrikal - Heat - Deliverency", comin back with "untouchable - force field - efficiency"/ -- The "low-down" -- (For all the emcee's who thought i left for od, and thought i should)

Bringin a "new" style "lock - down - infectious - flow", im like a "reeper - leech" take your "living - liquid" nd "soul", i "neva - let - go"/ I took some "time - out" ima be perfectly honest, now i rip your "inners - apart" like reachin, but "refusin - to - vomit"/ Think i give a fuck if these "multis - dont - ryhme" for all i care, you could evaluate em, then shove em where "the sun - dont - shine"/ I dont always ryhme the end of each line, thought i would perfect a style, instead of "biting - all - tha - time" who bites, fuckin lick my "nine"/ Thought i was gone for good, and you wished i did, fuckin rippin your head to shreds, make you look like a weed on a flower bed, your mine/ Now im back, and like a "mis-used - train" im "takin - you - off - track" now Indecisive showin true "lyrikal - heat" your efforts to succeed labeled "whack"/

da_notorious_mack · « **Reply #1 on:** August 25, 2002, 05:09:03 AM »

yo that raw,id quote but there too many quotables

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #2 on:** August 25, 2002, 05:22:22 AM »

Thanx mack for the comments.. i will check out ya keystyle that ya did.. n see what i think!

^^Uppin more feeback plz!

Indecisive - ELITE MEMBER FOR LIFE!

Kill · « **Reply #3 on:** August 25, 2002, 09:42:44 AM »

I don't get ya Indecisive...ur name fits well to the situation. First u tell us all that u gonna leave this board for a while and then u "check in again" the next day ??

Whatever dawg, that shit was tight, another reason for not leavin this board cuz u can take many MC's on here.

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #4 on:** August 25, 2002, 11:28:31 AM »

Ayo.. thanx mak.. an i kno i said i was checkin outta wcc for a bit, but you made me realise along with gareefa, that i should stay and the only way i could improve my style, would be to keep on battling..

So im back.. and thanx for the feedback!

Uppin... more feedback plz!

Indecisive -- ELITE MEMBER FOR LIFE!