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"Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle (Feeback plz)
« on: August 22, 2002, 11:52:47 AM »
I "deliver - ryhmes - quicker" than any known "sound - record - barrier"/
With "1 - heart - beat - quiver" i make you more "nervous" to make you "cold - n - shiver"/
Reppin tha "Elite" for aslong as we on tha same line "where - we - meet"/
Any known "enemy - emcee" be gettin the full "thrust" of our "lyrikal - defeats"/
We rule like "KINGS" but not the "WCC - crew - rusty - beings" we own like "royalty" home bound to tha "streets"/
Devastating all "true - playa - haterz" with my "lyrikal - masta - chasers" i make you run, to my "verse - of - heat"/
With "Elites" team talent, and my "lyrikal - assasinations, were "complete"/
Your "crew" softer than "pillows" drop quicker than "sleet"/
Reloadin my brain with "ehanced - vocab" like a gun with a full "clip/ rip you in two "millionz - o - pieces" which part of you am i "spoze - to - grip"?/ you more slippery than a "skater" you always "trips" i make you fill up with my "punches - like - bullets" lookin bigger than an "advertising - blimp"/ i change subjects quicker than "school - students" lyrikally confuzed like tellin someone how to confuze a "quere" by sayin "purple" and they believe it/
This aint my true spittin quality, usually i create "terminal - velocity"/
Rappin like i never rapped before, causin "lyrikal - intoxity"/

IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY.. I LIKE TO USE KARMA TO DISS PEOPLE>>> COZ IM GAY! Elite are so manufactured... lol Elite are so last century.. they played out like my lyrics... Im gay!
 

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Re: "Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle
« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2002, 12:29:27 PM »
^^Uppin for feedback and opinions!


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« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY.. I LIKE TO USE KARMA TO DISS PEOPLE>>> COZ IM GAY! Elite are so manufactured... lol Elite are so last century.. they played out like my lyrics... Im gay!
 

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Re: "Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle (Feeback pl
« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2002, 04:52:30 AM »
that was tight

With "Elites" team talent, and my "lyrikal - assasinations, were "complete"/
Your "crew" softer than "pillows" drop quicker than "sleet"/


^^Them lines were dope man..
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Re: "Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle (Feeback pl
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2002, 03:47:21 AM »
Thanx for the feedback! Anymore feedback from anyone plz!???


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« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY.. I LIKE TO USE KARMA TO DISS PEOPLE>>> COZ IM GAY! Elite are so manufactured... lol Elite are so last century.. they played out like my lyrics... Im gay!
 

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Re: "Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle (Feeback pl
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2002, 04:39:16 AM »
yo,that was ill,i think u found ya style dawg!


We rule like "KINGS" but not the "WCC - crew - rusty - beings" we own like "royalty" home bound to tha "streets"/
Devastating all "true - playa - haterz" with my "lyrikal - masta - chasers" i make you run, to my "verse - of - heat"/
With "Elites" team talent, and my "lyrikal - assasinations, were "complete"/
Your "crew" softer than "pillows" drop quicker than "sleet"/


that had me like WHOA

keep spitting fire homie
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Re: "Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle (Feeback pl
« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2002, 04:42:43 AM »
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Thanx for that mack! really appreciate it.. i think i have finally found it, just need to use it in a battle now..

Anymore feedback????


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« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
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Re: "Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle (Feeback pl
« Reply #6 on: August 27, 2002, 01:54:55 AM »
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I "deliver - ryhmes - quicker" than any known "sound - record - barrier"/
With "1 - heart - beat - quiver" i make you more "nervous" to make you "cold - n - shiver"/
Reppin tha "Elite" for aslong as we on tha same line "where - we - meet"/
Any known "enemy - emcee" be gettin the full "thrust" of our "lyrikal - defeats"/
We rule like "KINGS" but not the "WCC - crew - rusty - beings" we own like "royalty" home bound to tha "streets"/
Devastating all "true - playa - haterz" with my "lyrikal - masta - chasers" i make you run, to my "verse - of - heat"/
With "Elites" team talent, and my "lyrikal - assasinations, were "complete"/
Your "crew" softer than "pillows" drop quicker than "sleet"/
Reloadin my brain with "ehanced - vocab" like a gun with a full "clip/ rip you in two "millionz - o - pieces" which part of you am i "spoze - to - grip"?/ you more slippery than a "skater" you always "trips" i make you fill up with my "punches - like - bullets" lookin bigger than an "advertising - blimp"/ i change subjects quicker than "school - students" lyrikally confuzed like tellin someone how to confuze a "quere" by sayin "purple" and they believe it/
This aint my true spittin quality, usually i create "terminal - velocity"/
Rappin like i never rapped before, causin "lyrikal - intoxity"/




Very nice... didn't see this at first. Sorry homie. But a nice rhyme indeed. Elite reppin' now what?
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Re: "Lyrikal ~ Illuzions" -- Freestyle (Feeback pl
« Reply #7 on: August 27, 2002, 03:02:27 AM »
Thanx m! ;) ^^uppin.. anymore?


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« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY.. I LIKE TO USE KARMA TO DISS PEOPLE>>> COZ IM GAY! Elite are so manufactured... lol Elite are so last century.. they played out like my lyrics... Im gay!