KINGZ DISS -- Peep Ya'll

[Gay-o Felony]

Ayo.... no beef, just thought i would post up a diss, that i had created, just tryin to enchance my style... dont know if it gonna work.. but peep this, and rate, n give feedback.. plz, thanx..


Checkin in...

"6shoota" get back in tha "Firing~Range" coz practise dont make you "Perfect"/
Your "Shots" lack "Co-ordination" like shooting a "Free~Kick" thats "Indirect"/
"Femcee" more bitchin than a "Whore~Rodeo" "Bitch~O~Rama"/
An "Infestation" of flees, you "Ichin" god you actin like yo "Mama"/
"Mack" stop flaunting "Technical~Crap" i'll make you fall off "That~Stool"/
Thinkin you "High~n~Mighty" when you really a "Whack~Fool"/
Indecisive rippin you quicker than "Tupac" with pure "Old~Skool"/
"ToNe1904" more numbers in his name, than wins in his "Battle~Record"/
Takin his time when he needs to perfect, if with me he can "Settle~The~Score"/
Got 3-0 in the "Voting~Tray" before i "Placed~My~Feet~On~Tha~Floor"/
"Takin~The~Crown" makin harder "Pre~Meditated~Moves" than "Smackdown"/
"Femcee" classed as "Unbeatable" when poor ryhme schemes make her look "Unfashionable"/
Referin to tha "KINGZ" when we think "Unclassy" takin you down the line of "Real~Emceein"/
Up the "tempo", push the "lyrics" and "enhance~your~vocab", give your disses more "Intentional~Meaning"/
The "Throne" been "Thrown~Away~N~Catched" watch "ELITE" take what they own, "Respect" been "Snatched"/

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

Yea 7th in this bitch.......move over 6th.

[Gay-o Felony]

^^Uppin... Feedback plz... What ya think ya'll?

Peace tha7th!

Indecisive

[ToNe1904]

herez wha i think about yur verse...

I "wet up" these newbiez when they "testin-tha-waters", "gettin-burned", a lesson-learned, cus mah text-gettin-hotter/
Itz like im "molestin-yah-daughter",  Elite kin-gettin-raped/
This foo think he been-spittin-great? If u could "impregnate" a verse wit wackness then yur periodz been-hittin-late/
I guess yur tha new loud-mouth-in-Elite, "defendin on a track", ToNe attacked n yah "fouled-out-on-a-beat"/
Bow-down-when-i-speak, this KING doin tha damn-thing/
Indecisive gotta "death wish" like a skinhead at Grambling, speakin on KINGS, yur gambling/
Yur verse jus "crapped-out", i apply a lyrikal submission hold n this fag jus "tapped-out"/
Now yah learned itz a bad idea steppin to me when u lack-clout/
Yur name is jus how yah flow-is-described, I cant "decide" if u "suck" or "bite", so i "fuked u over" like a ho-on-tha-Eastside/ *

Quik rhyming lesson:

Session 1, multis are SUPPOSED to RHYME/
Session 2, parenthesis dont guarentee victory jus cus u put them in every line!/
Session 3, If u do use em, the idea is to indicate wordplay/
Session 4, Yur too wack to understand, so thiz rhyme lessons over for today..../

*East San Diego...tha ho stroll....

[Gay-o Felony]

Anyways... ^uppin for feedback.. not on the DISS ACTUALLY, but the wordplay, and layout n shit!

So uppin..


Indecisive

[Reef]

Ayo.. that was tight Indy.. But tones verse brought straight heat.. it was dope..

[Gay-o Felony]

^^ UPPIN ^^

[Big Verb]

LMAO NO COMMENT ON DOUGIES VERSE


LIL DOUGIE-HOW GANGSTA IS THAT?HAHAHA


VK WALKS OUT SINGING EVERYWHERE I GO,I SEE THE SAME HO.....

[Gay-o Felony]

haha... so you stalkin me now... ha.. man im more gangsta, than your fuckin momma! i mean, she all macho head strong to decide to have a baby with the mental capacity, to not have respect, but wanker'ish thoughts!


Indy -- mutha'fucka sit you ass down preferably not on you daddys cock!

[Big Verb]

LOL MY POPS IS DEAD,YOU KARATE HO,ITS FUNNY CUS IF I ACTUALLY SAW YA MOMS ID MAKE HER SUCK ON MY DICK B4 I PUT A GUN IN HER MOUTH LOL AND ID KICK HER IN THE STOMACH IF SHE WAS PREGNANT SO A PIECE A SHIT LIKE U NEVER HAD A SIBLIN 2 GROW UP LIKE YA,WHERE U GET OFF DISSIN DEAD FOLK?U GETTING DESPERATE BIATCH

NOW SHUDDAP AND DANCE

[Gay-o Felony]

oh well... lifes a full of tradegys
... like your defeat against me! ha!

I aint causin no beef now, i cnt be arsed... so say what ya like.. i aint reppin tha ELITE to cause mayhem with every sucka with an ichy trigga finga, waitng to pounce!