A new song i wrote

[Reef]

Yo.. I jus wrote this song.. I aint got no idea for a hook or title.. so any suggestions are cool.. r&r



[Verse One]

Ayo girl i've seen you around walkin lonley at night
i can be your heater, warm you up lets take flight
we can go back to my place for a drink, im a lady's man n im polite
so i aint gonna fuck you straight away
i wanna hear your beautiful voice, hear what you have to say
where you been? where you from? im a typical romantic guy
i cry when i say bye, and if i got feelings i dont deny-
them thats something that some people condemn
damn girl i wanna hold you tight, fuck you right
but i aint jus lookin for the sex or a partner for the night
gimme a sexy girl, who i can confide in
someone who i can have pride in, a girl who i can beside in bed
a place to rest my head and girl you lookin so sexy
sittin there in your see-through blouse
and the way you be lickin your lips - its gettin me aroused
you want me and i want you, but ima tease you
squeeze you, beacuse i wanna please you
and girl ima go accross seas with you

[Hook]

[Verse Two]

we gotta have some mind sex
bet you neva thought you'd meet me in these projects
cause you in this hood is like finding a diamond in the sand
everythin about you if perfect:
the way you glide, graceful movements and your hands holding mine
when im with you i wish there was no time beacuse your kiss, your touch, its divine
now lets go deep, let our souls intertwine
girl, lets make love in front of the sunset
ima take you on a ride you never forget
i stare down at the floor admiring your perfect shilouhette
thought i had the perfect girl, but you exceed what i expect
of my soulmate and one of my friends
i've hurt you, and i'd die if it made amends
rolling up in a mercedes benz tootin the fly honeyz as i fly by
dont get jelous boo, i'd neva leave you high n dry
there aint no1 else in this word that could take your place
or compare to the beauty of that face
its a typical ima fuck you tonight thing
but this aint a one night stand
girl dont cry, im a soulja.. and im alwayz at hand

[Hook]

its a wounderful day, even better when im staring into the distance
cause i aint tryin to sound corney boo.. but you justify my exsistance
your the only girl i've fallen in love with
and this aint a lie im spittin, thought that love thang was a myth
my momma told me not to get too involved
but how can you avoid love thats evolved from a friendship
we got trust and im tied with my emtion
i live off your lovin and devotion
its funny how we think them nights of laughin and childish lust
could lead to me feeling like this: love, laughs and total trust
funny how we hooked up by sittin in class
when you pass i sat watchin you shake yo hips n ass
damn girl, i hope we stay this way forever
hand in hand, kickin it, never ever argue or fight
over stupid shit, but baby wait for the night
and when the lights go out i'll show you what its all about
so ima lay down the micraphone right now
beacuse im known to make the girls scream, and boo ima show you how.

[bez]

Sorry bud I have meant to reply to this for a while, I have just been busy lately and I aint been on the keystyle board for a bit.  

But for real I felt that song, really deep , the love thing worked for you, it was deep to read and as many people say about my rhymes it sounds like it would flow well in audio.

I liked it, Peace out!!!

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

YO, I Done That Beat You Wanted Dawg....

[Reef]

Cool Menace.. n thanks for the feedback bez.

[Gay-o Felony]

Ayo... most props to ya homie, Gareefa uppin in the keystyle world.. dope man, felt ya all tha way, and im sure others will to... keep at it, peace man!


Respec' dawg - .:: [ Indy ] ::.