Author Topic: Verse.. Peep  (Read 227 times)

Reef

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Verse.. Peep
« on: July 03, 2002, 03:44:29 AM »
You see bullet hole in my head? its self inflicted//
the pain is so unbarable it feels like my brain jus shifted//
from the left to the right and back again//
im the only emcee able to kill all these men//
all these emcees with lyrics//well im possessed by dark spirits//
filled with lyrics and sick thoughts so you don wanna hearit//
the mind of a madman the mad of a mindman slittin you across your handspan//
hit you with a bedpan and you know i dont agree wit ur plan//
notorious like reefa - pain infliction, every one of my linez is a contradiction//
but this rhyme is an addiction, we cant get outta it, worse than alcohol//
we consume you in one and blast your soul coz im an asshole and you passed the show//
people say im a rebel, but im the fuckin rebellion//here to cause HellOnYa//
hell on earth, this cant get neworse//wen you got a style thats so diverse//
that wen you rap people look at you like your rappin ina herse//
nothin could get worse unless i give birth to a rhyme like this//
why do i spend all my time like this: get pissed, throw a fist//
then wake up in the mornin' wit criminal charges which make a list//
ya know im fucked up and so are you//fuck off, fuck up and fuck youu
 

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Re: Verse.. Peep
« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2002, 10:23:44 AM »
Yo, tight shit Gareefa.  I was feelin this rhyme...good flow, and vocab.  Nice piece...
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da_notorious_mack

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Re: Verse.. Peep
« Reply #2 on: July 06, 2002, 11:33:45 AM »
Nice spit,Like harmany said nice vocab,id give it an 8/10
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Re: Verse.. Peep
« Reply #3 on: July 06, 2002, 11:47:22 AM »
dope shit...i realy liked it.
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Re: Verse.. Peep
« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2002, 11:24:04 AM »
from pure battlin style to lyrical dopeness... damn gareefa.. you've become better than last time i read your shiat..

props
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Re: Verse.. Peep
« Reply #5 on: July 13, 2002, 10:35:35 PM »
yo man that verse was tha shit...
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