Author Topic: PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!  (Read 277 times)

bez

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PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!
« on: July 09, 2002, 08:29:25 AM »
Goodbye Girl by Bez

I'm standin lookin at the name engraved,
As I put flowers on my babys grave,
She didnt deserve to go in the way she did,
Dam 16 years old, she was just a kid,
I can't belive I ran then when I looked back,
You where on the floor bleedin, where them cowards be at,
They drivin round hard cause they got the gat,
But belive me when I find em they gon feel my wrath,
I held your hand tight in the ambulance,
Your eyes gazed over you where in a trance,
I prayed to god that you would be ok,
It wasen't long before night turned into day,
I just sat waiting too hear her voice,
Will she stay or go thats now God's choice,
The Doctor came out and held his head,
Thats the dam moment I will never forgettttt,

(Chorus) Now your gone,
Goodbye Girl, now your gone,
Goodbye girl, now your gone,
Your my world, but now your gone so goodbye girl,

Can't belive you where taken from me,
We planned to marry and be happy,
But now we aint never gonna get that chance,
I can't belive they took my true romance,
How could I let that happen to you,
Your where my girl my baby my boo,
And when it went down I didn't protect,
All I did was ran and you I left,
I wish I could stop time and rewind,
You would of been in front and me behind,
I would of caught all the bullets instead,
You would be alive, I would be dead,
But I would give anything to change this shit,
Feel like loadin my gun with my clip,
And pullin the trigger when its next to my head,
I miss curlin up to you in bed,
Keep thinkin I can call you on the phone,
Then I realize I'm all alone,
Dam girl I miss you I want to be there with you,

(Chorus) Now your gone,
Goodbye Girl, now your gone,
Goodbye girl, now your gone,
Your my world, but now your gone so goodbye girl,

I'm gonna find them huni,
There dead too don't worry,
Cause they had no right to take your life,
You where gunna be my wife,
Since the first time I looked at you girl,
I knew I wanted to spend my life with you girl,
So as I drop to my knees,
I feel a lovely breeze,
And I look up to the tree's,
But there no leaves moving,
So I'm left now wondering,
Is this you haunting,
Then rain starts pouring,
As I place down my ring,
Then I feel a hand on my shoulder,
I feel my  body getting colder,
Then I know I'm gunna be alright,
As the rain turns into sunlight,
Cause you will always be by my side,

(Chorus) Now your gone,
Goodbye Girl, now your gone,
Goodbye girl, now your gone,
Your my world, but now your gone so goodbye girl,

(Chorus) Now your gone,
Goodbye Girl, now your gone,
Goodbye girl, now your gone,
Your my world, but now your gone so goodbye girl,

« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
 

Hittman

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Re: PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!
« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2002, 09:28:02 AM »
Nice, deep spit.

Original & Simple but your message always gets across.

I was getting a feeling of TQ - Bye Bye Baby in this one.
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da_notorious_mack

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Re: PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!
« Reply #2 on: July 09, 2002, 09:46:48 AM »
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Nice, deep spit.

Original & Simple but your message always gets across.

I was getting a feeling of TQ - Bye Bye Baby in this one.


Yeah,like he said,it reminds me of'the comeback'as well by tq,daz and krupt


nice spit
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Re: PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!
« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2002, 10:56:03 AM »
Yo...I Felt That Dawg....Some Tight Stuff
Keep It Up!
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bez

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Re: PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!
« Reply #4 on: July 09, 2002, 02:34:59 PM »
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Nice, deep spit.

Original & Simple but your message always gets across.

I was getting a feeling of TQ - Bye Bye Baby in this one.


Thats great cos I was thinkin of the tune when I wrote it.  thanks ya'll.
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Re: PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!
« Reply #5 on: July 11, 2002, 06:42:20 AM »
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Nice, deep spit.

Original & Simple but your message always gets across.

I was getting a feeling of TQ - Bye Bye Baby in this one.



Word.. U always get your point across.. and it always hits home.. i was feelin it 110%
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Re: PLEASE rate this....GOODBYE GIRL!
« Reply #6 on: July 13, 2002, 10:27:54 PM »
that was nice man, came from the heart and it had very nice flow
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