* Rate This Shit Ya'll *

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

You'd Miss If You Spitted 10 Clips/I'm The Fuckin matrix/Throw Your
Ass Out And Give It The Deep Six Cuz Your Life Is Not Worth Livin'/My Flows
Will Interject/Into Your Neck/Get You Wrecked/Afterwards Watch This Shit
Come To Affect/I'm Lastin With Aggression With Expression And I'm Takin Possession,
Whats There To Question/I'm Gonna Let This Rhyme Rip-Raw/Up And Down Like
A Fuckin See-Saw/1,2,3 Test/If This Shit Was Food/It Would Be
Impossible To Digest/Without Showing Responsibility And
Stability/I Have Been Blessed With The Ability/To Piss You Off Straight And
Solid/You Try To Ignore Me/But I'm There Like Your Worst
Nightmare/Stuck In Your Mind/I'm Undifined/Slashin Your Wrists With A Venetian Blind!
I'm About To Blow A Curcuit/Throw You Into A Tar Pit/Empty A Tool Kit/Then
Take A Hit Of This Shit/You Smell Worst Than A Blind Spotted Skunk/Make You
Neck Some Monkey Spunk And When Your Drunk/Throw Your Ass
In My Trunk/Like I Said Before/I Don't Give A Fuck/Stab Me In The Back/But Your
Shit Will Always Be Wack And Thats Fact/Take A Closer Look At The Shit You Spill
You Call Yourself The Illest on This Board/I'll Pull Out
Your Vocal Cords So You Can't Rap Anymore,I'm A Menace/Shovin'
The Mic Through Your Teeth And Takin' Your Ass To the Dentist
I'll Spit On Your Grave And Engrave Menace In
Capital Letters/Watch Me As I Metamorph Into A
Rap Spilla,Dump Your Naked Ass In A
Cargo Net/Take Pictures Of You And Put 'Em on The Internet
For All Ya'll To See/You Yap Away on How Ill You Are/But
Not A Single Fucka Really Gives A Shit!
Put Your Ass To Damnation For All This Discrimination
You Got Us Facin' In This Orientation/Muthafucka/My Mind Is Racin'/Your
Nothin' But A Imitator A MuthaFuckin' Agitator!
Fuck Around With Me And I'll Put Your Head In A Bread Maker/Your
Faker Then A Salt Shaker/Policy Maker/Imperfect
I Have Willful Neglect Over You Fuckin Rejects!

>:(MuthaFuckin' Menace Ya'll>

*Rate Outta 10*

.Peace.

[simplicate]

You need to make your bars a little longer and maybe through more multis in...I didn't see much wordplay so work on that. You also have simple rhyming words...(one syllable) But oh well.

Bars that stood out to me were "Your Vocal Cords So You Can't Rap Anymore,I'm A Menace/Shovin'
The Mic Through Your Teeth And Takin' Your Ass To the Dentist
I'll Spit On Your Grave And Engrave Menace In  
Capital Letters/Watch Me As I Metamorph Into A  
Rap Spilla,Dump Your Naked Ass In A  
Cargo Net/"

I know this isn't out of 10, but I don't like to rate like that.

Just feedback.

Peace

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

Thanks Simp

Anymore...?

Peace

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