KS-Criminal >vs< Rhym_Tym_69.....post verses here!

[Vigilante]

>:(this is where i will post my verse, u better post ur verse.....due wednesday no later! no cloggin just votes....i will vote on 2 other battles!

U BETTER POST DUE WEDNESDAY MAX OF 15 BARS OK!!!![/size]

[Rhym_Tym_69]

You said you spit first foo..   So get it on

[Vigilante]

aight....here it is......

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Still cant hold my stats and im a make this Very-Clear/
This my quick return to text and like illusions, ur rhyme was never-there/
You bitch got periods monthly and gets fed-off-cocks/
Like Logic if I wanted I could have this ‘thread-on-‘lock’/
Lyrical flame throwers to ya Skeletal and Kill--ya—Flesh/
Rape ya verse cause im da ‘Best of Both Worlds’ and u NoT even ill-in-text/
This bitch will catch a quick loss and feel the punches cuz they look-soft
And theres always 2 ‘sides’ to a story but which side ya wanna get pushed off
My ratio of opponents, rapery inevitable u shouldnt have come in/
Your bars? Feel like we made love not battled cus im sayin ‘why kid’/
Try this? thats pretty funny now run back to the sand box junior/
Turn ya back to the game and walk away, here Ill hand rocks to ya/
Eat me out while im on my period see things from my ‘point of view’/
No honourable mentions, a harmful addition, who let you join a crew?/

[Hittman]

LOL@ Thread On Lock.

Dope Shite  

[Rhym_Tym_69]

Back out onto the streets spitten fire from my mouth cause my flow is burning~,
Like a dragon on a rampage, cant stop me, unless you stop the table turning~.

Im am an unstoppable power~, My flows fall like a meteor shower~, and ks criminal u juss a lyrical error~~
imma threat to the world~, Ill make your brain swirl~, Ill take you out because i am the great lyricists slayer~~.

i own in flowin~, i keep my rhymes rollin~, and u aint no match for this lyrical busta~~
i can keep goin~, words ill keep throwin~, so u can juss shove ur dick in a dirt devil dusta~~,

My words are like a disease that into your head I inject~ and after hearing me out your mind i will infect~.
All my life Ill keep on flowing until I perfect~, and ill keep goin until i gain the peoples respect~.

Yin and Yang the opposites that you cannot have without the other~,
I am the complete freestyle artist and you are my opposite brother~.

Im an indestructible wild fire that cannot be put out and destroys everything in its way~,
Imma burn your body so bad to see who you are they need DNA~.

The elements of the world cannot explain what or who I am because Im a beyond explanation~,
I am the fifth element that is unknown and if you try to describe me it will always come out a misinterpretation~.

The location~ of my freestyle corporation~ has no information~ and with collaboration~ and application~ I go out givin mad dedication~.

*peace*

[ePiK_INgenius]

das sum ill shit!both of u!

[Vigilante]

link=board=keystyle;num=1019923029;start=0#3 date=04/27/02 at 15:48:36]LOL@ Thread On Lock.

Dope Shite  

ya damn right.....lol uppin for votes!

i voted on REL VS DiSbEOnEDoPeRaPPA and the lightweight championship...peace 1

[Vigilante]

wtf!! uppin

[.:R-E-L:.]

i gotta give it 2 Rhym Tym....i felt his shit, even though it was btr in the beggining and got worse, i felt his shit alot btr

[Vigilante]

i gotta give it 2 Rhym Tym....i felt his shit, even though it was btr in the beggining and got worse, i felt his shit alot btr

ok???

0-1 uppin!

[Rhym_Tym_69]

Yeah i felt that too. Guess i got lazy eh?  

[Rhym_Tym_69]

hey 'ks' change the title and add "open for votes" man..  

[.:thE windtalkEr:.]

aiight ima vote if its counted


-----------------------kscriminal-------------------------
one hellofa dope ryme!!
great use of punches an the flow was also up to tha mark!
u clould have worked the punches out better.it could have added that panache to ur rhyme(i aint saying the punches an disses aint bad).
the style wuz in there too.!


memorable lines:

Rape ya verse cause im da ‘Best of Both Worlds’ and u NoT even ill-in-text/
This bitch will catch a quick loss and feel the punches cuz they look-soft
And theres always 2 ‘sides’ to a story but which side ya wanna get pushed off
My ratio of opponents, rapery inevitable u shouldnt have come in/

ps u cld have left out tht lovemakin shit(my opinion)no offence!!



-------------------rhym tym 69-----------------------

impressive ryme u got there!!
i was expectin a little less than this.
but hats off to rhym time 69 for his ryme!.
real ill flow!
the multiz made ur ryme even more effective.
but ur punches werent upto the mark of the standard u ryming at.ks's were bettah i feel.

memorable lines:

Im am an unstoppable power~, My flows fall like a meteor shower~, and ks criminal u juss a lyrical error~~  
imma threat to the world~, Ill make your brain swirl~, Ill take you out because i am the great lyricists slayer~~.

ps:u could have left out the last bar an the yin an yan thing
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vote=ks criminal

[M Dogg™]

Rhym_Tym_69 seemed to have the advantage here. His rhymes were more on point, were's as KS seemed to just have a few good hits, and then after that was feelers.

Vote=Rhym_Tye_69

[Vigilante]

1-2 uppin!