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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #15 on: May 02, 2002, 07:33:01 PM »
well, can we kno if ur vote stands or is different......but we r jus waitin on a review??
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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #16 on: May 02, 2002, 07:33:20 PM »
aiight thanks for being honest MDogg. so its back to 1-0

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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #17 on: May 02, 2002, 07:34:27 PM »
any many mini mo catch a tiger by his toe.........um.  ::)

Vote Rel.........had an iller batte verse


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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #18 on: May 02, 2002, 08:26:30 PM »
:-/ :-* :'((YO YO YO ARMZ is the iLLIst NIggA)
aiight this was a hard one i had a hard time i mean i like mike robberts and the space caddets but i also have to go for george bush .... I like chicken...I give this one to...I need drugs.. To MIKE ROBBERT AND THE SPACE CADDETS but george bush is my dunnscout
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pilow won that shyt no doubt
« Reply #19 on: May 02, 2002, 08:35:41 PM »
pillow wont that shyt no doubt
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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #20 on: May 02, 2002, 08:36:54 PM »
i got this infection in my ass that will not go away i need something soft to rest it on..........fuck it
pilliow man has another vote give it to pilliow man
here it goes you got it pillow man another one in the bag for pillow man pillow man has one more notch to the top everyone clap for pillow man
1 from me to pillow  :o
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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #21 on: May 02, 2002, 08:40:04 PM »
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:-/ :-* :'((YO YO YO ARMZ is the iLLIst NIggA)
aiight this was a hard one i had a hard time i mean i like mike robberts and the space caddets but i also have to go for george bush .... I like chicken...I give this one to...I need drugs.. To MIKE ROBBERT AND THE SPACE CADDETS but george bush is my dunnscout
KEEP YA SHIT THURO SHHUNNNN
PZ
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east coast and grimy for liffeeee  :) ;) :D ;D >:( :( :o 8) ??? ::) :P :-[ :-X(another one for sccit)





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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #22 on: May 02, 2002, 08:45:32 PM »
aiight men the shit is  tied 2-2. no more votes because MDogg still has to give his. so he is tha deciding vote.
peace out

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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #23 on: May 02, 2002, 09:12:34 PM »
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Posted by: J-STEEZ_INEFFFABLE Posted on: Today at 01:35:41
pillow wont that shyt no doubt  

please explain tht one.coz its like ur first post an u vote for sum battle w/out an intro damn.

---------------------------REL----------------------------
tigh shit from u there.
ill flow
consistent ryme scheme
dope shit!!
neat punchlines et al.

memorabel lines:
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And choose, to send you to a state of redardation//
I cripple you so that you cannot even participate in masturbation//

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pillow:
the first ive ever seen from u.
but it lacked overall cinsistency an weak punchlines ,theres a lotta room for improvemnt.

memorable lines:
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Ya mind on my rhymes cuz u know the shit that i spit will wrap up and teach/  
Your fake, buster ass to get kept up in check and your prize stays half in ya reach/  
along wit ur momma, cause she taste like a peach/


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vote=REL

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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #24 on: May 03, 2002, 04:40:48 AM »
3-2......but i dont get who voted 4 u besides, "Eastside and Grimy"

well, wtvr


It dont matter if MDOGG voted before or after this vote, cuz it wouldnt b a KO, we still need more votes


3-2.......VOTES
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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #25 on: May 03, 2002, 05:27:57 AM »
Last time, I was kinda tired, but I read through both, and I was really feeling Pillow, but REL seemed to have better structure, and had better lyrics. But Pillow to me was better because it made more sense, but, since REL seemed o have more skillz, I gave it to him. That wasn't really fair, so now I am able to give a full review after some sleep and a class, so I'm a wake.

REL... great rhyming, and great punchlines. This was a good battle rhyme, stumbled at time in terms of flow, but didn't urt too much.

Strong points, hard hitting lyrics, and actual structure.
Bestline:
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And choose, to send you to a state of redardation//
I cripple you so that you cannot even participate in masturbation//


Weak points, some "feeler" lines, as it seems they were put up there to feel up space. Everyone does it, but it does hurt.
Weak line:
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Your defenseless, like BUSTA, I break yo bones//
And I eat ur ass like ice-cream cones//


.::Pillow::., This wasn't a rhyme full of punchlines, which is what people like nowadays. But this was a good battle rap, eachline it seemed set up each other. Pillow, it seems that you have skillz, but this boards voters like more punches, trust me, I have to change styles 'cause of this.

Stong point, good rhyme, more of a rap as oppose to straight punches, but like Ali, if this was boxing, it'd be great dancing...LOL
Best line:
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They call me that cold child, aint like tha rest ah ya cuz i got my own style/  
Let my actions speak for my words otherwise keep a low profile/

(remember this, 'cause I feel it's a good thing)

Weak points, kept back on some punches, and even for a regular rap, needs more punchlines.

Weak lines:
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I gotta get down for what it is that i know/  
Show bizz is tha show but fuck tha fame, im about that fortune competition gets scorched and im sippin on 4 - 0/

(watch those uneven lines)

With this being all said the vote goes to............ by the score or............ 4.1-4.0............. I think Pillow had a better rap, so with my vote, I'ma give it to Pillow. It's my vote, but watch out 'cause other voters are a little bit more picky. I do like raps better though.
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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #26 on: May 03, 2002, 12:38:00 PM »
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please explain tht one.coz its like ur first post an u vote for sum battle w/out an intro damn.

---------------------------REL----------------------------
tigh shit from u there.
ill flow
consistent ryme scheme
dope shit!!
neat punchlines et al.

memorabel lines:
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pillow:
the first ive ever seen from u.
but it lacked overall cinsistency an weak punchlines ,theres a lotta room for improvemnt.

memorable lines:

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vote=REL

PZ



A Vote is a Vote..and he said ' pillow won that one'dont u think hes voting for pillow? LoL?
 

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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #27 on: May 03, 2002, 01:26:51 PM »
3-3



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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #28 on: May 03, 2002, 03:04:21 PM »
yo REL go a little slower through the bored and u will see its my 3 votes, just in case u didnt see. so its 3-2 me
and thanks for re voting M. i appriciate it and thanks for the vote. i will take ur advice about the punchlines
peace out

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Re: ..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!
« Reply #29 on: May 03, 2002, 03:10:10 PM »
naaah.....

i got votes by:Timelock, PimpFemcee, & Windtalker....


thats 3 homie....


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