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TimeLock

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TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« on: April 30, 2002, 05:59:59 AM »
u wanted it u got it

first team to 5 or 3-0 =kO
 

da_notorious_mack

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Re: notorious_mack & SCY<<VS>>TimeLock & M-dog
« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2002, 06:14:59 AM »
im in iz dere a deadline an insted of scy,we usin x raided so if ya cud change da topic
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Re: notorious_mack & SCY<<VS>>TimeLock & M-dog
« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2002, 07:39:46 AM »
I thought you and SCY were challenging us. And besides, if you want to throw in X Raided, than maybe we can pick up somebody.
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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided
« Reply #3 on: April 30, 2002, 09:27:38 AM »
dont fuck wit da x loc,u'll get yo nose broke broke,
no joke,str8 cut throat,off dat coke,spittin sum shit u'd think i wrote,or writtin,if u wanna fuck
wit me, yo crew must be bullshittin,i be dippin an
rippi n                 ,threw yo shit,like a hollow tip,i str8 flip da script,on sum ill tight pimpshit,right quick,gettin sic wid it,wit siccness,like syphlis,intense lyrisist,i put a hit on ,an diss on ,timelock dat lil bitch,who wishes he was tighter,hes jus a bitch ass pac biter,tryin 2 put out dis fire,estinguish the flame,cant even distguish real game,make u feel pain,before i blow out yer brain,leave u wasted just face it yer lame,yer flows basic,there probaly copied and pasted,u obviously on sum gay shit,and yer clicks weak,mines str8 heat,i stroll roll deep when i creep ,i know yer fearin me,cuz im lyricaly,elite,when i speak,u can't defeat,
the man dat can't be beat,stackin  an flowin unique,u got lyrics like n sync,im on another level,wit several,severe rhymes,u think dre's a queer dime,betta change yo ways and get yo mind right,try 2 rhyme tite,its on,i'll bomb on site,

X LOCSTA IN THIS BITCH SPITTIN VENOM AT YALL ...213 inglewood represent'in
 

da_notorious_mack

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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided
« Reply #4 on: April 30, 2002, 09:48:46 AM »
Time lock you the only vet, who dont get respect// still classified with the rest//
but your quest lead you to techs after you lost the first test?//
M dogg protect your chest, cuz its hollow// obviously your heart aint in it//
you wretched pest, the techs you swallow,
check the ranking chart and quit it!//
4 and 5, how do you decide to log on in the morning//
knowing that 5 vets voted against you while your crew is in mourning//
soft tissue rapper, you get ripped when you chatter//
hit in your bladder, causing ur'win(urine) to scatter//
you 2 will not receive one vote//
im cuttin throats of any dope in the scope who packs ya wack lines to quote//
choke... cuz i leave you spoon fed... plus doom dead... burn ya brother... my tune's led//
my crew ahead... ya niggas is wack... ya figgaz is "black"//
i pack the green cash, buy out ya "market", while the green stashed//
for "assasin"ation purposes, i "punch" through M doggs "chest" swiftly//
just to make a "heartfelt" victory, so nifty//
timelocks flow is thrifty, cheap with no class//
you get beat with "no ass"... you "lackin" ya "backin"... your crew is week just for the facts://
little geezie recruiter//
most your crew just purchased their computer//
organization of loosers//
i heard da ELITE need the aid of a tutor//
you stepped to a sharp shooter//
plus my verse unresponsive//
similar to bomb shit//
that drop and be atomic endin ya mind and conscience//
you wrong kidz, how the FUCK you gon repond//
:with misspelled letters, and senseless punches, showin more ass than a thong:
im blastin timelocks mom... her production was ridiculous... ya daddy should of missed//
ya birth was a curse on hip hop, and everything thats shit to it//
plus i got more hard rhymes than a gangsta mother goose//
this brother loose, i teach eagles to soar and owls to hoot//

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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided
« Reply #5 on: April 30, 2002, 09:56:54 AM »
Quote
check the ranking chart and quit it!//
4 and 5, how do you decide to log on in the morning//
knowing that 5 vets voted against you while your crew is in mourning//


......Parden?!
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X_RAIDED_LOCSTA

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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided
« Reply #6 on: April 30, 2002, 01:13:55 PM »
ya heard me fool peep game and respect it
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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #7 on: May 01, 2002, 11:34:30 AM »
M Dogg:
When you get a dreamteam it be we from the I.E., smoking on rookies like the Thai weed/
This is the lyrical that flows in a different language, So smooth it's like American Spanlish/
Dropping hoes like a civil war in Banladish, and be the type to give you a needle to shot up with/
Ya'all got motivation, but against us the lyrical pre-swashion, that gangsta shit invastion/
It'll take more than two wack crazied kids, rapping like they Inglewood greatest/
I jack you for your watch and sell it back home, kick you in the stomach so no children when you old/
My lyrics are like speaking Russian 'cause they cold, and beat you like a lineman hold/
Call me McDonalds 'cause I'm over a trillion served, and like a Explorar you can't take a swerve/
Like little tricks you get sick with dick, And it ain't mine, it Eminem 'cause you TRL clits/

TimeLock:
yo play this on repeat, it be 2 ah Inland Empire's finest/
Now bow down, kiss de-feet, by ya Royal Highness/
who the flyest?... West Coast Killaz define us/
dual alliance, Rialto and San Bernardino/
like electricity to an appliance, we supply power to the flow/
we beat Mack and X with brutality, like it we was da po pos/
result's a fatality, when we deliver u with K-O-blows/
u musta bin feelin brave when u stepped ta-two-pros/
u some impostors, wolves-in-sheep-clothes/
now u bitches retract, like-2-yo-yos/
yall 2 homos, steady bending down taking dick, while touching ya toes/
that shit u spit reeks, like yall bin licking-ass-holes/
i step to this thread, but I'm force to be holding-my-nose/
yo let-me-retract, let-me-go-back, i TimeLock the flow, Bitch, Cuz I-Can-Do-Dat!/
get a clue fools, TimeLock and M Dogg on-the-attack/
u slow-to-react, cuz my rhyme just put u on-time-lapse/
oh u know the-stats, bitch retreat-back, and go practice-at-wax/
my shit's tri- dimensional like 3d-studio-max/
got u like... "Mommy is this real?"...no son Just relax!/
was that the climax?...nah more like the 15th-hundrend-attack/
i finish u 2 off with dual-slaps from the dual-blade-battle-axe/
now you take yah last-breath, in-death yah bodys now-totally-relaxed/
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ROCCY

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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2002, 01:05:13 PM »
This was a cool batttle...Bt Mdogg and Timelock get the vote from me..they droped ill ..Xraided and Mack..good spit..not bad..but I felt more of M's and T's verses PEACE.

VOTE= M & T
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X_RAIDED_LOCSTA

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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #9 on: May 01, 2002, 04:20:13 PM »
x raided cant never be faded,im 2 clever and i know u hate it,
da way i demostrated,dis skill,yer regulated fo real,im da real deal,packin dat steel,rappin and actin how i feel,how im feelin
got u on yo knees kneilin,an im jus chillin,wit dat,cuz when i rap its murda on da track like bloods spillin dats a fact,im rhymin line after line,of da top of my mind,step 2 mine,u gonna
find,dat nine 2 yo spine,i live a life of crime, and drugs,
kick it wit real niggaz and thugs,that wont hesitate 2 penetrate yo mug,have u coughin up blood and slugs,anit showin
no love,except 2 my people,cuz when it cums 2 flowin u knowin there anit no equal,dis is da sequel,to dat battle rap,
tag team match,lay u flat in a lyrical blood bath,cuz im not
frontin,caught yall  bluffin,thinkin u got sometin,but u anit got nuffin,dat can compete wit me,u get beat on da street,bruised
badly G,



str8 keystyle of da top of my dome





 

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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #10 on: May 01, 2002, 07:42:13 PM »
I'M BACK FROM MY SHORT STAY IN VEGAS. TIMELOCK & M-DOG CANT BE FADED.
YA'LL NIGGAS RIPPED THEM FOOLS
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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #11 on: May 02, 2002, 12:39:11 AM »
hey xraided bout ur 2nd spit,does it usher a second round?
if yes pls confirm wit timelock an mdogg.otherwise i wont count the second verse an will vote.

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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #12 on: May 02, 2002, 02:11:04 AM »
nah there anit no second rounds 1 spit each...

one
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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #13 on: May 02, 2002, 02:45:25 AM »
ima be real... the rhymes from x and notorious mack wasnt good ... it just like yall threw any word that rhymes, changed some letters here and there to make it fit...

avreage: 2.8 / 5

mdogg and timelock werent spitting their best shit ever, but it was consistant and always on point, with nice punches, enough to clinch this battle...

avreage: 3.9 / 5
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Re: TimeLock & M-dogg<<VS>>Mack & x raided... vote
« Reply #14 on: May 02, 2002, 04:26:02 AM »
aiight here goes

-------------xraided locsta an da_N_mack------------------
pretty much an average rhyme u guys got there.bad wordplay jus to make the lines fit.
xraided locsta could have made his flow a little more consittent.
agin for mack u lacked overall consistency in ur ryme.i guess u made a mistake durin tha arrangement of bars.
pretty much average punchlines.no blazin shit here.theres lots of room for improvement.

memorable bars(order=1st spitter)

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dont fuck wit da x loc,u'll get yo nose broke broke,
no joke,str8 cut throat,off dat coke,spittin sum shit u'd think i wrote,or writtin,if u wanna fuck

ps:ur last couple of bars could have been omitted.

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i pack the green cash, buy out ya "market", while the green stashed//  
for "assasin"ation purposes, i "punch" through M doggs "chest" swiftly//  
just to make a "heartfelt" victory, so nifty//  

ps:u concentrated ur ryme a bit too much against ttimelock i feel.


--------------------timelock an mdogg----------------------

tight verse from bith of u two.
it definitively gets more than 3.9/5
ill flow which matched with the consistency.
superbly executed punchlines.all in all blazin dope shit!

memorable bars

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Call me McDonalds 'cause I'm over a trillion served, and like a Explorar you can't take a swerve/  
Like little tricks you get sick with dick, And it ain't mine, it Eminem 'cause you TRL clits/


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oh u know the-stats, bitch retreat-back, and go practice-at-wax/
my shit's tri- dimensional like 3d-studio-max/
got u like... "Mommy is this real?"...no son Just relax!/
was that the climax?...nah more like the 15th-hundrend-attack

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vote=mdogg and timelock.
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