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[bez]

Sleepin Rough by Bez

As the water from the rain flows into the gutter,
Save me help me are the words you hear me mutter,
Been sleepin on the streets so long I cant remember,
Shit gets cold, Only got 1 layer in December,
Have to search for food by night and day,
Scraps from the resturants, rats by the bay,
Anything to keep my going is welcome,
These streets is an uphill struggle like a dam mountain,
Been here for years only earnin pennies from my acustic,
No 1 dares to lend a hand, I can't blame em cos I aint shit,
I hope I will catch a break soon, please god help,
I'm sleepin rough every night, please someone help,

(Chorus)  Yo I'm sleepin rough,
This shit is kinda tough,
I'm sleepin rough, God dam I've had enough,

(Chorus)  Yo I'm sleepin rough,
This shit is kinda tough,
I'm sleepin rough, God dam I've had enough,

So what now as I deal with this reaction,
Nothing will ever be up to my satifaction,
And I wonder if this life's really worth living,
Nothing seems to of gone right from da begginning,
But ya'll watch out, cos I'm about and I know soon I'll be winning,
The devil has me strapped down, I can see his face grinning,
So I grab my trolley full of shit I've collected,
It might be shit and shite but I wont negleced it,
I live on these concrete slabs on which I'm writin,
My finger nail tips in which I'm bitin,
Starvin, tired, cold and lonely,
Never had a girl cos I was afraid she would disown me,
And as I sleep I weep and I pray I stay safe,
PLease someone help me, In this evil place,

(Chorus)  Yo I'm sleepin rough,
This shit is kinda tough,
I'm sleepin rough, God dam I've had enough,

(Chorus)  Yo I'm sleepin rough,
This shit is kinda tough,
I'm sleepin rough, God dam I've had enough,

To all my fellow people who be livin this life,
Stay real keep strong hopfully shit will get right,
We sleepin through the sounds of murder's by night,
We beggin for money at the first sign of light,
So what next for all us homeless,
Why didnt we listen to the shit are teachers told us,
We could are made it large instead of being notin,
We will fight for a life til we rotten in our coffin,
Hope God will help but he never answers our calls,
Thats what we all face everyday, closed doors,

(Chorus)  Yo I'm sleepin rough,
This shit is kinda tough,
I'm sleepin rough, God dam I've had enough,

(Chorus)  Yo I'm sleepin rough,
This shit is kinda tough,
I'm sleepin rough, God dam I've had enough,

[P Nelson]

Pretty negative but its your opinion,,, In my opinion, it's well written so keep  on writting your feeelings, it helps u more then u think

[Doggystylin]

whats this shit doin in here? you should know better......*movin it to keystyle*

[Pillow]

yo man u got ill flows, but maby you should think about putting those skills something positvie, cause like BZ said that is some negative shit to say about ur self. but if that is truley how u feel, then well.......what can u do? except talk to some 1 about. but overall dope ass flow. i was feeling the hook, ALOt.

..::Pillow::..