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Night Observations
« on: April 19, 2002, 04:01:06 PM »
Every dream will be the reflection of unconscious desire
Ascending from the depths where the spirit’s inspired
Walk slowly, confused soul~ this night must awaken your heart
Observation will reveal but revelation will impart
Steam rises from streets attempting to guise the defeat of those who believe
Their lives have missed the prize and they can no longer compete
Eyes weary from tears cried so we psychoanalyze ‘em
Patch atoms from inside them never realizin’ how we ride them

The sanctuary of night brings hope to those who hunger for life
Succumb to the lie of dark angels so they stumble and lie
Beside their new Christ, an age of indifference on the rise
No longer regarding time~ only existing to die

I cry to misanthropes to take up their hopes and find the path again
Creations crowns, they are, yet responsibility becomes a pathogen
None should be tasked to win as victory has already been claimed…..
A slave can’t ever be saved from the master he obeys

The substance of things hoped for, where has belief left those with none?
They stare at chance a second time only to turn tail and run
I see drugs, battered wives, children grippin’ guns to fight
Against their own mind’s darkness Oblivious to light

Observing these poverished souls, I cry~ But my wails are lost in chaos
My aim? Way off~ Still attempting to complete the séance
So that social classes will vanish in the throng of the masses
I dream as a child. My waking hours are rent by reality’s madness

I drown in confirmation that I’ve done so little to help
Where it’s needed most, I’ve concentrated more on myself
So if that’s not a bad thing, then why such annoyance of guilt
“The poor will always be with you” thus decadence was built

Most unfortunate souls are left in their condition by choice
Hope can only be effective when accompanied by a voice

Who are theirs?


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Re: Night Observations
« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2002, 05:05:42 PM »
Ill Nice keep Dropig peace
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Re: Night Observations
« Reply #2 on: April 20, 2002, 06:09:16 PM »
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Re: Night Observations
« Reply #3 on: April 20, 2002, 06:13:06 PM »
This makes me proud to know that some new folks are going to lead this board with their great rhymes. Keep rhyming and keep up the good work.
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Re: Night Observations
« Reply #4 on: April 20, 2002, 10:50:58 PM »
u hit on a lot of topics there mad alot of sad stuff :'(

came of like some ill poetry

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