VOTE!!! Docky vs Indo213 VOTES!!!

[techniec]

yeah yeah im gonna mediate this battle, we got 2 rookies in this forum going at it, should be good

5 votes- win
3-0 KO


first of lets have the homie Indo 213 come thru and bless us

INDO 213

I got tha whole game on lock, that im makin my own Constituion/
U so gay u can suck my cock, and think thats the only solution/
And you to it so much like a religious tradion, or institution/
Yo rhymes is like filth, they bother me, jus like pollution/
Suckin the talent outta u, jus like a vampire/
U a liar, u aint got talent, if this were a job, u woulda been fired/
Ur doin a horrible job, that im gonna have 2 com bak wit kick ass retaliation/
This is original, and my own creation, im sendin u out 2 a space-station/
I rip a foo in two, i spit u out like food i chew/
jus shout out, boo cuz u kno this in leu/
then me droppin you/
Ima drop u and give u a chin check, b4 i inject/
this lethal shit into ur neck, and b careful w/ the rhymes u select/
Cuz it wont match this, cuz its probably all a defect/
All my dick does, is make ur dick erect/
Ima beat ur ass around town, ur silly like a clown, ur so sad u wanna frown and im gonna flip u upside down/
UR gonna get beat by a rookie, i feel sry 4 u and think u need a cookie b4 u get ur ass beat by a bookie/


*no beef in dis battle*

Yeah dope shit, now we got the homie Docky with his response

DOCKY

What the fuck's up with you and your 2nd grade rhyme/
one line of mine/ leaves ya whole career worthless like a dime/
talkin' about injectin' lethal shit up my neck/
i'll blow lethal shit in yo mouth when you're suckin my dick/
you lil trick/ fuckin' around with Docky/
best don't cause my glock's about to get cocky/
Docky be representing the Great Persia/
you better pray i dont hurt ya/ when my lyrics squirt ya/
now who the fuck you think i am that you're fuckin' around with me/
i got mad made persians, and P.M.surounding me/
so best walk away and don't get me dissapointed/
cuz i'll bust n leave no one for you to smoke your joint with/
cuz you're a rookie in this league, im 20,000 leagues above yo sea/
this is t dot so fuck the 213/
i smoke indo every day, so you aint a threat/
rappin against u is like running in winter, i dont break a sweat/
with this lyrical gat, premeditated attack/
the odds are stacked, but ill wipe you off the face of the map/
lesson 1: dont accept my challenge, its a death offer/
fuck with this youll end up like jimy hofa/
put you in a coffin, plug your nose so your bloods stoppin/
smoke you in ya building, so your bloods what the superintendant's moppin/

VOTE!!!

[ROCCY]

My vote goes to cocky docky..I was feeling both of your rhymes..but i have to go with docky he had some ill shit in his rhymes

VOTE= Docky


PECE

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I vote for Indo...

[ROCCY]

Yo indo..your pretty good..where u from dogg? and explain why you vote for him nik ^^

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1-1


i rep Cali- Downtown L.A........


wat do yall rep


P.S---
MORE VOTES!!

[ToNe1904]

ay good battle yall. Pretty close. Indo u had a good flow tah yur verse and did a good job of staying focused on yur attack at Docky. A few lines came off kinda simple tho, but this was yur first battle...and it was a pretty tight verse. Docky, im holdin against u, tha fact that u wrote off Indo's verse. Goin second is alwayz an advantage, especially if u use tha first persons verse against them. Although u didnt attack Indo as much as i like tah see, yur shit was tha more creative of tha 2 verses with good metaphors. I think u showed enuff tah win this one. Good shit frum both of yall tho. peace

vote=Docky

oh yah...try not tah take too much advise frum Tech. u dont wanna end up an Elite "Bench-Warmer" like him! lol  

[DOC. da G.P.T...[METS][REX/MaB]]

explain votes please.....

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how com votes aint comin fast?

[Vigilante]

my vote goes to indo cause i liked the a.....b/a.....b lines at the beginning and he had nice shit....i thought both of ur rhymes were decent but diction and sophistiation could of been higher. Docky's verse was too original...
both were pretty much the same but i thought indo came out beter

vote - indo

[DOC. da G.P.T...[METS][REX/MaB]]

MORE VOTES.........   :|

[DOC. da G.P.T...[METS][REX/MaB]]

2-2.......tie........not bad....more ....

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votes??

[techniec]

uppin for votes yall

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how long does it take 2 get [size=20]votes[/size] in???