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"Loss of a loved one" i wrote this for sumone
« on: April 08, 2002, 07:18:07 PM »
The loss of a loved one is great pain to deal with,
a relative, or even a frend u ate meals with,
if u a gangsta, proly someone u steal with,
it dont matter who it is..it still hurts.

But one thought has got to be in ur head,
think about it anytime,even wen ur in bed,
"Now they up there where saints belong,
Resting in peace listening to the angels songs"

Losing someone is hard to take in,and we
and we think"god, u mustve been mistaken"
and sum peepo think "why did u leave us"
and othas think"r they rilly gone or do our eyes juss decieve us"

It really hurts to have sumone leave u behind,
and u think, "y'd u take his life, u shouldve taken mine"
alot of peepo dont deserve to die,
but we kno, for them we'll  weep and cry.

all these thoughts r always thought about,
u kno u miss dem ,so let it out,
but still keep this thought in ur head,
anywhere,anytime, even in bed:
"now they up there where the saints belong,
resting in peace listening to the angels songs"


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Re: "Loss of a loved one" i wrote this for sumone
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2002, 12:36:35 PM »
Yo! Dawg, i wuz feelin' yur shit...it was cool.  u need to work yur rhymez, sometimes they dont rhyme...Ex.: "...belong/...songs/
...we/...mistaken/"---i believe this one was supposed to rhyme with "take in" (my bad...lol)


Peace!

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PEACE1!


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Re: "Loss of a loved one" i wrote this for sumone
« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2002, 08:27:47 PM »
thenx men..hehe..
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