Author Topic: Battle challenge (Read 227 times)

Tanjential · « **on:** April 06, 2002, 07:33:24 PM »

i am appalled that i've been omitted along with narrator with these hall of fame shiz,so i'm making my rep again...i'll start off with something simple:

Now my rhymes are as potent as handguns/
it takes time for fools like you to understand 'em/
i flow raaaandom/all set to destroy/ya joy/this boy/employs/rhyme ploys/
to decoys/seekin real mccoys/i be mobbin like hell with midnight capers/
makin peeps clash back n forth like lightsabers/
lost pictures and scriptures mentally resided/
with power comes things that have to be eventually decided/
rhyming/is the only way i call-shots/
and your weak rhymes is showin like lyrical bald-spots/
i fault not/with linguistics/turn 'em into ballistics/
throw you in rhyme's wilderness/if you hinder this/
remember if it's december in which i intervene/
you make a cold sound like a winter scream/
jack your shoes,homeys be like nice socks/
you look for 'em you findin body parts in an ice box/
constantly mics rocks/while you gracefully dodgin' paparazzis/
doin karate/ya caught me/i'm sloppy/
i got bb/ q sauce on alla my clothes articles/
but when it comes to minds my cards still hard to pull/
i carry a pen always and observe lands/
for i will always be a wordman/
my hand goes from surprisin teachers/leeches/preachers/
from being facetious/i mean at different times i flow different/
one minute a poet of beauty,next minute i'm MC buligerant/ya figure it/
so due to that i'm shockin peeps like electrodes/
so my styles is video games select modes/heck no/man this is no game/
yet and still you provoke me to be profane/so okay/
as long as my muthafuckin chucks is blue/
i'mana make it a priority to fuck witchu/

peace-Tanjint

M Dogg™ · « **Reply #1 on:** April 06, 2002, 09:06:13 PM »

What you don't know is that some true old schoolers got in, like Mouse and Sikotic a.k.a. bdogg. Frankly, you guys were good, now a day rhymers are better. I've been here the whole time, and you can complain, but now-a-days is better, trust me on that shit. You two will probly make the hall on the next voting, who knows. Post your best rhymes for people to see. Make a case out of it, and what not. But to be forgotten must really show you had nothing to begin with. I thought I was good back in the day, but people don't remember, well it must have not been as good as I thought. Take that with some salt though.

BL7 · « **Reply #2 on:** April 06, 2002, 09:08:21 PM »

Dayum! That was dope man.

You got some serious skillz.

ToNe1904 · « **Reply #3 on:** April 06, 2002, 11:39:29 PM »

I aint out tah diss. tha verse was coo and all. but it wadnt nuthin GREAT, if that was sposed tah be a case for bein in tha hall who knowz. good shit man, but...theres alotta hot shit out hea these dayz.

Tanjential · « **Reply #4 on:** April 07, 2002, 09:31:27 AM »

aight here's something that half of you motherfuckaz won't be able to understand...it's about how i place myself among the world and my social mentality these days...it's not a bragging rap it's introspective thoughts and emotions...

I think i think of my mind too highly
mentally placed myself among high and mighty
as an over-all person i've self deprecated
mind body and soul i think are separated
i think i'm better than some people that're liked better than me
and i'm more liked then some people that are better than me
eventually
i'll have to realize we're equivalent
the hinged chaired existential headache is swiveling
who am i to complain my life is physically charmed
but most don't get a chance to think of anything other than the utmost harm
they spit and drink
i sit and think
everyone that likes me will love him
they love me,in love with him,i'm nothing
yet when he's around what they're feeling loses basis
yet their feelings for me are consistent and that helps me face this
faceless i wish to remain to be in so many ways but the right ones
i'm one of those souls that the light shuns
but i give my self an egotistical resurrection
when i tell my self i wouldn't be involved with deception
in exchange for a humorous reception
when i know i wouldn't sin in the sins they would sin
what is sin....that discussion i don't want to begin
i tell myself 90% of the world is ignorant
i think i'm among the other 10% therefore i'm in for it
that 90% wants things to remain in non-progression
they have nothing to worry about they've drained our lessons
variety is the spice of life
so stab me with a knife of ice
i'm either ignorant or egotistical too
don't know whether to call them church patrons or biblical fools
i don't deserve forgiveness...then neither do you
i've paid and suffered for fevers too soon
everyones individual pain hurts just as much to there situation in proportion
don't call it suicide call it late aided abortion
i'm tired of the social hierarchy
it's not what any one thinks and we'll all be sorry
we participated with eachother and didn't keep to our safe solitude
there are fates infinitely worse than us all in feud
where would procrastination be without education?
sends relaxation to eradication
so potent yet so planned out contained confined
and still i sit here these fates remain..not mine
kingdom of spirit or weathered hearse
eriority complex...better worse
we're only preserved to give
but in the end of this middle i don't know i deserve to live

hit me back,peace-Tanjint

Tanjential · « **Reply #5 on:** April 10, 2002, 10:06:20 AM »

That's what the fuck i thought. read a book,peace-Tanjint

Hittman · « **Reply #6 on:** April 10, 2002, 10:23:50 AM »

That Was A Nice Verse. Seen Better Though. Content Was Good - Sometimes The Flow Was Slightly Choppy, But That Can Happen When You Keep Consistent On Your Subject. If People Have Problems Following The Content Then Your Last Bar Pretty Much Summed It Up For Me. Some Of The Bars Weren't Needed In My Eyes - It Was A Long Peice. You Remind Me Of Infinite Spitting....

PS - Dont Get Angry About Been Slept On, It Happens All The Time.