~ToNe1904 vs ITW~ >>>VOTE<<<

[ToNe1904]

Well....im waitin on M-Dogg to reply tah mah challenge. And maybe hez on spring break or sumthin so who knowz when he gonna see tha thread. So might as well battle until then. u down playa? no beef of course. u know how it goez  

15 bar max
first tah 4
3-0=KO
KINGS wont vote.
I can spit first if u want, or u can...doesnt matter.

get at me if u down....

[ITW [the irish boy]]

Tone, steppin  thru his lyrical darkness
while im in tha spotlight making fun of his satirical "hardness"
I'm heartless
lifting you off your feet
like your wearing a harness
like forners
you speak but i dunno what the fuck ur saying
its questionable with ur uncomprehensible rhymes
u only playin?
hating on true playaz, i thought i said it, FUCK HATAZ
illshoot u so like sum KINGS your domeless
Mayaz handing you keys to tha city
coz your stinking ass is homeless
Even if ur MOP you couldnt be the Coldest
Another battle win, a preminition, haha, i foretold it/

1

[ToNe1904]

ToNe turnin yah hits-rancid, call u tha "spoiled lyricist"/
Im known tah spit-acid, melt yah soul to leave yah spiritless/
We battle 1 on 1, but u comin so wack u get 3rd place/
Go on AOL to steal a verse, do an "MC Search", like u rapped fah "3rd Bass"/
Jus like yah face, yur words are ugly, u could turn a fat-trick-gay/
Cant get paid, only get "green" when yah Irish ass celebrates St Patricks-Day/
Wishin u was a "thug" but admittin u'z a "wannabe", u bout to catch a slug so bow to yur knees in frunna-me/
Im tossin this former KING out tha castle, cus yah turned yah back on us asshole/
Yah accent sound funny when yah spit, like a redneck sayin "wrastle" (wrestle)/
U admitted yahself u was tha weaker in our keystyle-collabo/
ToNe got sharp spits to cut yah throat, so when i freestyle-i-stab-hos/
Beat yah once befo in poetry form, but this time itz battle-rap/
U cant beat me with that "bullshit" u "spittin", u musta ate sum cattle-crap/
Yah verse jus got "stretched" and "ripped" like yur girlz pussy when i pull-out-tha-dick/
Whetha u fuckin or rappin she say "i dont feel u", guess u cant come hard, so get this fool-out-tha-click/

aiight vote yall!!!

good shit ITW. as alwayz homie, no beef. Jus spittin.

[ROCCY]

Alright First Aval I wanna give u both props for Droping tite shit

Alright ITW You had a good Beginning Start off was tite and cool..But I think when u past the 5-8 line it was alittle off IMO ..But decent ...

Know Tone I think you had a tite start..and your rhymes where Pretty tite...You went all down perfectly I like your Style..I was feeling your Shit more


VOTE= Tone

[DeaDSouLjaH]

okay i wont be doing a long review
here goes

ITW..a very short verse..but to da point .. i suggest yo work on evenin out yo bars... sometimes ur vocab is really good....
u could ave tried to add a bit more complexity to the ryme though ..

TONE...well not da usual stuff u spit .. but still good.. on da vocab side..nuthin very special...but da ryme was pretty consistent throughout and also .. dat reference to ST.PATRICK'S DAY... i thought was dope...

k..finally .. my vote would go to TONE..for da sheer complexity and a lil more harder punches..
Vote=TONE
pz

[techniec]

vote-tone

itw's stuff sounded nice but got simple at times
tone wasnt makin alot of sense at times, but he finished strong

[ToNe1904]

TONE...well not da usual stuff u spit .. but still good.. on da vocab side..nuthin very special...but da ryme was pretty consistent throughout and also .. dat reference to ST.PATRICK'S DAY... i thought was dope...

thas coo. im tryna switch my flow up here and there. try different stylez. so i try to spit in different styles depending on who tha opponent is. i dunno...ill keep workin on tha shit lol

[ToNe1904]

Thankz for votin yall. i think u guys are 3 of tha 5 people on tha board who actually still vote lol. Good battle ITW. neva beef homie.