Author Topic: >>>>TimeLock(Man)-VS-Mouse<<<<< (Read 191 times)

TimeLock · « **on:** March 28, 2002, 09:25:25 PM »

15-20 bar max 3-0 ok first to 4

I make this mouse howl/
lyrically I beat u till u throw in the towel/
I pack nuclear power like that of Colan Powell/
I'm a night Owl, out on my prowl/
and it's time for mice pay the price/
cuz it midnight and I'm out for a bite/
I got a mouse meal clenched in my grip/
at the top of his lungs he screams like a bitch/
put up a fit, but get pistol whipped/
time's locked on the set so mouse don't trip/
give in or play dead cuz I'm setting up buffet/
man vs mouse, this is like a petty battle between spouse/
cuz u aint nothing but a bitch in a blouse/
all day ya sit around at ya parents house, lazy slobbing like a louse/
I'm adding heat to the fire on u lyrical gasoline I douse/
after the smoke clears what's left is the decomposed body of a mouse/

TimeLock AKA Son of Time

bLaDe · « **Reply #1 on:** March 28, 2002, 09:49:40 PM »

both of ya'll came tight, but i gotta give this one to timelock, i felt his rhyme more ...

vote = timelock

-{bLaDe}

ROCCY · « **Reply #2 on:** March 28, 2002, 09:53:26 PM »

WOW..This is like tough..You both had hard rhymes dang..I aint goin near ya'l LOL..But I think I will have to give this vote to Timelock Just cause he had some doper stuff in my opinion and some very tite lines..

VOTE= Timelock..

DeaDSouLjaH · « **Reply #3 on:** March 28, 2002, 09:56:43 PM »

my vote would go to TIMELOCK, very good punches and he came hard.. he was really hittin dat "mouse" ..everywhere there was mouse , mice and more mouse ..very good ..

mouse.. very good verse as well .. but wasnt direct hitting..
and the vocab shown in both rymes was pretty average but timelocks was a teeny weeny better

vote=TIMELOCK