Some freestyles i wrote when i was ripped

[Nightmare]

[All these freestyles were made when i was ripped off my ass.  I was listening to oops by tweet and just started to go at it, have no clue but ya check em out and holla back]

1.- yo dare goes your shirt
it goes off for me
nobody be fuckin wid me
i got ya here
ya sheddin no tears
there goes ya pants next
hope were havin safe sex
dont wanna knock ya up
and leave wid a kid
dont want dat shit
that would screw even more wid my head

2.- damn shorty i wanna spank ya
shorty got back
damn this isnt wack
ya got me starin
with those tight shorts
with those thick theys
ya have controled my eyes
ya catch me on the spy
i cant lie
i like dat back
and ill explain why
then ya look at me
a thug in the makin
risin star
comin up the ladder
taking over underground
and my shit gets louder
but then shorty ya look to the left
u see the stunna
right there in person
breathin every breath
lookin at me makes ya sweat
then there goes your shirt
your pants
and everything

3.- yo
i got my eye on my pray
spyin ya can say
im a like a preditor
got ya on my scope
but im different then him yo
i strike at night
late at night
nightmare reborn
entering someones dream
its easy to get in there
like cookies and cream
its like an open window to me
i just crawl in
i could be ya fantasy
but i fuck shit up
scare the fuck out of you in ya mind
bring back a scary situations
ya call this a crime?
ya hooked to me
like a drug
cant get enough with me
everything breath ya see me take
ya would go ta ya climax to hear me breath
i got tons of mother fucka that are hooked to me
puttin my shit in the stero
and ya blast your mind to to my shit
and try to be like me
but theres one me
and thats all ya can see

4.-yo
u call me over at 3
ya get on ya knees
u want me
ya like any other chick thats attached to me
or maybe im wrong
theres lots of difference in dis one
she makes me sweet
i got butterflys again
got that one feelin again
feelin worm once again
oh shit not again
not need to talk to slim
at least anytime soon again
fuck that
i dont need dis shit
i just fly away way with some greens
not the money i mean
but u know
the green
i fly out of the scene
and i dont need to worrie about
experiencing another amie

5.- nightmare
2002
enter da dream

watch out
i need a shorty chick
take her for a ride
she will lookin in my eyes
feary eyes
angered eyes
den she can tell im high
could careless what im experiencing
as long as I treat here right
like my queen
I represent
treaten my women wid respect
nices thug
and they didnt expect
that im a rappin sweat heart
that they love to kiss

6.- damn strait
i made dis shit
but i bet if i put this on a board
i get a lot of shit
but fuck them
i dont need them
they be jealous
like wantin my rappin skills
they wannna rob it from me
but they can have it
they can try to cause havic
but in the end
they will see my demon eyes
see the fire in them
and start to cry
beggin for mercy
when they look in my red eyes
nightmare unleashed
ready to attack dis guy

[All of these i was talkin to some chick too when i was doing dis, and i have no clue what i was thinking just tell me which number u like better or if they all suck just tell me.]

[bez]

cool

[Ro J. Simpson]

sorry bout this but.........

[KVB]

cool

[maddskilzz9]

well.......i liked some of it, but some of tha rhymes were off


its aiiiiiiight

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

how can u possibly write a freestyle?